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12-27-2006, 02:38 PM
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A Stupid Poem

This poem made me crack up when I wrote it. It's just so stupid and bad. I just have to show it and make others laugh. Just because it's a first for me doesn't mean you can go easy on me. It doesn't rhyme....because I don't write many rhyming poems. No, I am not being an emo, I am trying to be funny.

A Grey Voice

What is this droning sound I hear?
Going into my eardrums and making me sigh
That is the Voice of Grey
It's the sound you hear when a teacher rambles on
And bores you to tears
It's a sound that lulls you slowly to sleep
But also forces you to listen
Sticking in your mind like bubble-gum in your brain
That is the Voice of Grey
It reminds me of a muffled TV set
It it reminds me of a buzzing bee
It reminds me of a spinning fan
And it is so boring for me
If only we could tell whoever is speaking
That their voice is coloured grey
But of course, they wouldn't listen
And we would still visualise that dull shade of grey
It's whenever we hear that sound
That we all know and hate
But at least it helps us sleep
Whenever we hear and see the grey
That is the Voice of Grey.


Did I mention it has the colour grey? It is so bad it's funny. I hope you liked it and found it a laugh though XP.
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12-27-2006, 03:11 PM
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That's not a bad poem. Well, at least not bad compared to some tohert stuff I've read. It's pretty good actually.
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12-27-2006, 08:06 PM
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I liked it. Very good! And it is well done compared to other stuff I have heard as well.
And it is so true...
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