Oddworld: Abe's Excursion

[Abe16]

This is my first story in a while. Yeah...

Chapter 1:The capture

Abe glanced at his surroundings, wondering if this was one of best ideas. Abe was crouching behind a bush, trying to sneak into the factory. There was a clear opening which led to it. There were three sligs on duty standing beside the wall of a factory, smoking and talking about whatever's going on inside their little brains. Abe sneaked to another tree, trying to stay hidden. One of the sligs yawned and went inside the factory. The second one did so, the remaining slig did its patrol, up and down the lane. It was Abe's chance. He quickly chanted alarming the slig, letting him run about helplessly. Abe possessed the slig. Abe was making the slig walk in and decrease the stages of security.
"Just what exactly are you doin'?" One of the other sligs said coming by.
"Nothin'. I think the stages of security are too high. Maybe we'll overdo it. I mean, boss is paranoid. Know what I mean?" Abe's possessed slig jerked his thumb to the direction of the CEO main direct office.
"No, I think your missing the point," the slig held a gun up to his stomach.
The slig caught on to what was happening.
"Gotta make this quick," Abe thought.
Abe sneaked quietly over to a ladder point which led to the roof of Big Barns Facility. A place where vykkers tested on fuzzles, mudokons, scrabs, elums, paramites and more. It was more than a mere place where you can buy and trade high quality products of meat, it had its own secrity lock-down system.

Abe looked over the roof. Oddworld stretched on for miles. There were glass windows over the roof, so they could get light. There was a window opening ever so slightly. Abe walked over to it. If Abe could lower himself down, he could gently climb off the crates of explosives. He did so. Abe was now in the heart of Big Barns Facility. There was a mudokon scrub looking up at Abe and then egtting back to work. The mud's head suddenly jerked back up.
"Abe!" The mud choked.
"Shush, keep working, I need to get the security down first," Abe said.
There was a mob of three to five sligs gathered around a small television set. The screen wasn't big, but it was still enjoyable. Which left three to four sligs still on duty. Abe quickly chanted a possession orb and led it toward a marching Big bro slig.
"You ok'? You jittered a bit..." The slig nearby said suspicously.
"Yeah, yea... of course. I'm fine." Abe said.
The Big bro marched over to the lever to deactivate the turrets, security sensor lines, greeters and open locked doors -- especially the CEO main direct office.
"Hey! What are ya doin'! Tryin' to let that Abe in!?" A slig asked.
Abe shot the slig with his Blitzpack gun, which drew attention. The sligs who were around the television, were now readying their batons and loading their guns. Abe's Big bro killed at least 5 which left 10 more. Abe's Big bro had been killed.
"Ten, hm. There has to be a faster way..." Abe quietly muttered to himself glancing at the CEO main direct office gate...

Abe sneaked over to the gate while the sligs were laughing at the Big bro corpse on the floor. Abe quietly walked in. There were about four armoured sligs on duty here, and they weren't going to leave their posts. Abe did the first thing that came to mind;
"Hey! C'mere! I got somethin' I need to show ya guys!" Abe tried to sound like a slig in every way possible.
Two armoured sligs looked at each other with doubtful looks. They gestured at each other for a second, and one slig was off.
"Yea what?" The slig grunted.
Abe heaved the blitzpacker to the slig. The slig staggered back as he held his forehead with pain. The impact was great. The three other sligs came rushing toward the door. Abe laughed quietly to himself. He suddenly realized he had three other sligs after him. he had no where to run but...

Up. There was a laddercase above him. It led to Vykker Meat Processing room. He quickly hoisted himself up onto the laddercase. He was sweatin. Two sligs dragged their unconscious friend over to a corner. One slig was checking for any suspiciousness. Abe's fingers couldn't hold out any longer. His body toppled onto the slig.
"Ooooh, my back..." The slig groaned. Which got the attention of the two other sligs.
There he was. Abe, sitting on a slig's back. Crushing him. Abe was caught red handed.

[Spirrow]

Wow, now that was a story I stopped to read entirely. Abe always on the run. You composed it nicely. Nice job, Abe16.

[Abe16]

Thanks Spirrow, i like getting replies to my story, heh.

Chapter 2:Examination

Abe was struggling to get free from the slig's grip, but they were too strong. Abe thought he might as well throw in the towel. he was being dragged to the main CEO office. A glukkon was talking to two others on his security fone. They were laughing and seemed like they were having a good time. It seemed they were planning something, which was what Abe notcied when he was dragged in. Mr. Blake, the manager of Big Barns Facility turned around and his grin turned into a sudden frown. He muttered a couple of things to his friends and then nodded. The blue screens turned blank. He glared at Abe for a few seconds and nodded at the armoured sligs. They strapped Abe onto a chair and one slig left while another stayed.
"Hehe, well hello Abe. Master terrorist, Mr. Big bad blow stuff up. How the mighty has fallen. What an inconvenience. How are we today?" Mr. Blake asked with a menacing tone.
"Ya ain't getting nuthin' outta me," Abe said glaring at Mr. Blake.
"You're very brave Abe. You've survived one, too many accidents meant to kill you. Say, you cheated death. And now death wants revenge." Mr. Blake explained.
"It's the circle of life here on Oddworld. We all die once in a while. By an accident... or by purpose orby just a little mistake."
Abe was drifting off into a daydream. Mr. Blake's words came into a blur... and then into mumbles... and then Abe couldn't hear anything. Abe was daydreaming that he broke free of the clutches of Mr. Blake. Mr. Blake was screaming in sheer terror, dumbstruck in Abe's awe.
"Abe! Abe! Abe ! Abe..." He could hear mudokons chanting his name. Abe had a large grin on his face when he came back to reality.
"Abe! Abe! You understand me?" Mr. Blake finished.
"yeah, but I don't really give a care." Abe lied.
"Ahh, and that is where you make your last mistake." Mr. blake nodded to a slig and a gate swinged open which revealed tables of endless row of more vykkers tearing apart animals and creatures. Abe's pupils were smaller than usual.

Abe was carried to a table for examination. to see his unusual tatooes, his stitched lips, bloodshot eyes and such. An armoured vykker approached Abe strolling with a cart with interesting tools. The vykker murmured something to Mr. Blake and Mr. Blake nodded.
"Now, what do we have here..." the vykker said with a small cleaver as he adjusted one of his eye pieces.
"A tatoo... otherwise known as, a tat, has placed itself on Abe's right and left hands. Let's take a closer look.... aha... a 'tat' of the sign of Paramonia... is on Abe's right hand, and A 'tat' of the sign of Scrabania on his left. Hm, yes, very interesting." the vykker examined closely.
"Also, if wemove up to the chest, a tatoo of some sort, have no idea what so ever of what it represents. COuld be, maybe an unknown tribe of something. Could be a power... given to him, just like he did with Rupture Farms..."
"...And his eyes are sooooo bloodshot, they've actually turned orange. Oh, the horror."
The vykker went on and on and on... Abe drifted off again...

After a few half hours and minor headaches, Abe was taken in, as a scrub. he was under heavy duty watching. Abe was fed up. He didn't want to be doing this. As he was washing the floors, he quietly got up, and snuck behind an explosives crate The slig was still sleeping. It was a Big bro slig. Armoured. he had saved up the nergy to create a possession orb. he led the orb to the big br and possessed him. He had walked over to the security lever. It was almost at no security at all. He had finished the job. Security was at its worst. Nobody had looked twice. Abe exploded the Big bro and sneaked his way toward the main CEO office, which was guarded by one armoured slig. With only, 1 energy source left to make a possession orb, he took half and led his orb to the slig. He made the slig walk over to a lever and pulll it. The slig exploded. Mr. Blake was in his office talking to his two other glukkon friends; Executive Mike and Executive Sean. Abe was getting ready to possess Mr. Blake when...

"So, you've all got the plan?" Mr. Blake asked.
"Sure we do," Exec. Mike said.
"It's all good, you give us the terrorist,we chop him up, no problem." Exec. Sean reassured.
"But there is... Abe... has the power to possess people," Mr. Blake muttered.
"Possess? As in, take over people?" Exec. Sean asked.
"Exactly, so I need to deliver this to your place." Mr. Blake said.
"How exactlydes he possess his foes?" Exec. Mike pondered.
"He chants, is what I hear."Mr. Blake says.
"He's able to get them to do his bidding! he can make someone go madly insane if he wants to! And, once he's done with them... he blows them up!" Mr. Blake said with terror.
"Nonsence, I heard he morphs into some jelly like substance and goes through their ears, and-" Exec. Sean was cut short.
"Doesn't matter, just be there when the day arrives.' Mr. Blake said.
"Mr. Blake... out." He said.
Abe was confused. he had to escape. but with all the mudokons too. he had forgotten about them! He snuck back out. The entire sligs on duty were gathered around the television again.
"Hey, buddy, we're bustin' outta this joint," Abe said to a scrub.
"All right! thanks Abe," the scrub thanked Abe.
Abe sneaked to the next mud, then the next until the last mud. Abe soon had a mob of mudokon's and their squeaky feet. The problem now was, how was Abe going to rescue them...

[Abe16]

I'm doing an early chapter!...yeah.

Chapter 3:

Abe was stumped. There were no bird portals around, and if you looked at the picture; It was a blue mudokon with a bunch of scrubs dressed in fashionable outfits. It was a pretty funny sight. Abe looked up and down, left and right. The sligs were just about done with their program.
"C'mon guys, up here!" Abe jerked his thumb up at the platform.
Abe climbed the laddercase and the mudokons followed. The sligs got back on duty. There were 10 more sligs on duty. Abe played back his memory... what was in the main CEO office... a bird portal! It was hidden inside the Vykker Offices. Hidden by shadows.
"Abe, how ya gunna rescue us?" A scrub said.
"I love them portals ya make when you chant," another one commented.
"Okay, okay... here's the plan..." Abe said.

Abe chanted the last half of his energy to make a possession orb. the orb hurried toward an armoured Big bro which was on its way toward the little sligs room. It shuttered, and Abe owned the Big bro. Abe made the bigbro walk over to a group of 5 other sligs.
"Hey look. If it isn't our big bad tough as nails bros. Well, what brings you here... barf breath?" A slig mocked.
"Hey, you don't talk to the Big bro's like that," Abe had said.
The slig slumped down into a smoking pile of dead meat. Abe had shot one of the sligs.
"Dude! What's up with that!" Another slig asked.
The four remaining sligs started beating the Big bro with their clubs. Abe shot three of the sligs around him. The last one cowered in fear.
"Oh god, please... no! Don't hurt me!" The last one yelled.
The last slig was out like a light. He was dead. The Big bro shook out of Abe's trance. He starggered back.
"Oh man... I feel like I got hit by a train..." The Big bro muttered.
"That was our last chance," Abe said.
"Guys? We're going to have to beat the tar outta the sligs with our bare hands."

The sligs were muttering things to each other, all 6. One slig glanced at Abe then back at his friend. His head suddenly jerked back up.
"Charge!" Abe called out.
It was 7 mudokon scrubs against 6 sligs. Abe wasn't sure how they were going to do it, but they were. The scrubs pounded their fists on the bouncers and poppers and Big bros.
"It's a mudokon ambush!" A slig cried out.
Mr. Blake just finished having a violent talk with the main CEO of the vykkers. The main CEO of the vykkers had a knife between his eyes and one cleaver jutting from his spine jamming into the wall. Mr. Blake heard a commotion outside.
"What the..." Mr. Blake started to say.
Only three sligs were alive struggling to stay alive. Two bouncers and a Big bro. Mr. Blake had soon arrived. He had a mean and stern look on his face.
"What is the meanning of this!?" He asked confused.
The picture he got was 7 mudokons beating up on three sligs. The mud's were dumbfounded.
"Who let their guard down on ABE?" Mr. Blake yelled.
The two bouncers pointed at the Big bro. The Big bro was standing there, he had nothing else to say. Mr. Blake nodded at the slig at his side and took the Big bro into Mr. Blake's office.
"I'll be one sec. An armoured vykker came out. he was going to keep a close eye on them. Mr. Blake had left his office gate open.
"If only I could make a possession orb... I could possess Mr. Blake..." Abe muttered to himself.
A scrub shoved a spooce shrub into Abe's hands. Abe nodded at the scrub. Abe started chanting. He used all his energy on that possession orb. Abe led his orb to Mr. Blake's office. Mr. Blake was having the Big bro tied up onto the wall, and two sligs were doing doing target practice with cleavers. Abe has possessed Mr. Blake. Abe had Mr. Blake walk over to a slig.
"Hey, pull that lever for me, will ya! Do it!" Abe had ordered a slig.
The slig had pulled the lever opening the main entry gates. Abe had Mr. Blake walk over to the intercom.
"Attention all security employees, there will be a party in the vykker labs section. Report there immediately. Thank you." Abe said.
The sligs and vykkers rushed to the vykkers labs section. The Big bro was limp, and dying. The sligs were laughing walking over to the "so called" party. Abe had Mr. Blake walk over to the party. Mr. Blake had woken out of Abe's trance.
"C'mon! Let's hurry toward the bird portal," Abe called out to the mudokons.
They sneaked their way toward the party which was now happening. There was a bird portal flapping in the musty air of the factory. Abe chanted once he was near the portal. The mudokons ran in with hollers of joy. Once the last mudokon left, an alarm had sounded. The alarm in which in case any mudokons left, they would be hunted down and shot on sight.
"Abe..." Mr. Blake muttered with such hatred.
Abe had rescued mudokons, now he needed to rescue himself. He had the main entry gate opened, now he had to make a run for it.
"Get the security back online!" Mr. Blake ordered.
Abe was sprinting toward the main entry. Sligs were running toward the security lever. A slig had jerked the lever back and the Big Barns Facility was going on lock-down. the main entry doors were closing down. Abe had 5 seconds to get outside. 3 seconds. Abe leaped for the door.2, 1. Abe had just barely made it out. It wouldn't be long before Mr. Blake would have a high bounty on Abe's head...

[Spirrow]

I read all three of them, now. Can't wait to find out the reaction afterwards.
What else is there to say but "Excellent Job"? Because it's true to me.

[Abe16]

Thanks again Spirrow.

Chapter 4:

Abe had a pain in his head once he got to his feet. The alarm was going off louder in the factory. Abe ran off as quickly as possible. Abe found himself at his village. Mudokons were greeting Abe as Abe walked to the local inn.
"Heya Abe, what's up?" The innkeeper asked Abe.
"Oh nuthin', just got back from saving some more mudokons." Abe commented.
"I'll just take a cot." Abe said.

It wasn't long before Abe fell asleep. When Abe woke up, his eyes flickered open. The innkeeper had a spear jammed into his back. They hadn't seen Abe and just started killing the others. The huts and tents were burning. Mudokons had been shot. Abe was being hunted down. Abe snuck to the remains of the entrance of the inn.
"He ain't here, boss." A slig said into a fone.
"...Ok...yeah...I get it... bye." The slig said finishing his conversation.
The sligs marched off to the next village. Abe walked out, his hands on his head. Abe learned something that day; Don't get Mr. Blake angry. Abe decided he had to rush over to the next village and warn them. He just made it when...
"There he is!" A slig yelled out.
"Fire at will!" Another slig called.
Abe was dodging bullets rushing for shelter. Mudokons were coming out of their tents and huts confused. one mudokon had gotten shot, and the battle was on. There were four guard towers surrounding the village. there were two mudokon warriors in each.
"Abe! What's goin' on?" A mudokon asked Abe.
"Nothin', but... we gotta get outta here!" Abe yelled.
There were flying sligs bombing the entire place. Sligs bullets were ripping through the cloth of huts and tents. Abe gathered up at least 11mudokons. Abe ran through the trees of spooceshrub forest with 11 mudokons following behind. Abe could hear the tramp of mechanical feet running after them.
"Hide! Quickly!" Abe whispered.
The mudokons dashed into bushes or behind rocks or up into trees. Abe hid behind a sign.
"Where'd he go?" A slig asked puzzled.
"Probably farther into the forest! Let's go!" The other slig said, and they were off.
The mudokons came out of their hiding places. Abe got out from behind the sign. What was on the sign was a wanted poster. Abe saw these normally in factorys, but it said Wanted: Dead or Alive... Reward: $50,000,000 moolah. Abe tore the poster down and threw it into the water.
"Go head back to the village and repair what you can. I have some business to tend to," Abe said getting some what pale.
"Yah whatever," the mudokons said.

Mr. Blake was in his office smoking a cigarette. He turned around. He was glaring and a dart board with Abe's wanted poster. There were multiple darts on it and bullets holes in Abe's face. A ring came from one of his security fones.
"Yea what?" Mr. Blake responded.
"Do you have the terrorist?" Exec. Sean asked.
"No, but I'm working on it..." Mr. Blake said disappointed.
"What happend?"
"I lost him."
"Perfect! That's fantastic!" Exec. Sean said sarcasticly.
Mr. Blake glanced to his security cameras. He had security cameras spread out all over Spooceshrub forest. He saw a figure running toward somewhere. The figure was blurry, but Mr. Blake knew exactly who it was. Abe. Quickly, his head turned back to Exec. Sean.
"I'll get back to ya," Mr. Blake said.
"Ok, don't forget operation: Mudkill." Exec. Sean reminded Mr. Blake.
Mr. Blake had sent 4 sligs to Abe's position....

[Al the Vykker]

Great to have you back and contributing Abe16! I also see that you haven't lost your interest in writing Oddworld fiction!

[Abe16]

Thanks Al,

Chapter 5:

Abe had heard the tramp of mechanical feet sprinting down the forest pathway. Abe knew what to do, hightail it out of there. A slig had caught sight of Abe and persued Abe to run faster. Abe was caught at a dead-end. The slig had caught up to Abe, panting hard. the two other sligs came staggering and panting even harder. The two sligs dropped to the ground.
"F-f-freeze..." The slig managed to say.
Abe had his hands up. The slig was on brink of falling down unconscious. Abe dashed behind the slig, the slig fired but his bullets went into the sky and into the trees.
"Oh my god," the slig said watching the trail of dust from Abe fade away.
The slig had called Mr. Blake. Mr. Blake was observing his sligs and scrubs. His security fone rang.
"Yea what?" Mr. Blake said.
"You're going to have to send a new batch toward the opposite direction, we're beat." the slig said panting.
Mr. Blake gritted his teeth and bumped his side into a button. the slig had gotten a small shock and fell down. Mr. Blake muttered to himself. He couldn't be beaten by some mudokon terrorist he thought. There must be a way. He thought for a bit, and the lightbulb in his head finally clicked on.

Abe had ran back to the mudokon village. The mud's greeted Abe warmly and Abe waved back, tired from all the running. He decided to just curl up into a ball and fall asleep and that's exactly what he did.

* * * *

About 30 minutes later something awoke Abe. It was a mudokon. A very badly drawn mudokon. The mudokon wasn't actually a mudokon, it was made out of cardboard. A cardboard mudokon drawn horribly. But unfortunatly, Abe was fooled.
"Hey Abe," It was a recorded mudokon's voice. A slig was behind the cardboard.
Abe squinted hard at the cardboard mud. He walked closer.
"Somethin's different about you..." Abe said.
"...but I can't figure out what."
"Well uh, just follow me!" The slig tried to sound like a mudokon.
"That's my line, heh" Abe joked.
Abe followed the cardboard slig toward a big clearing. Abe got suspicious. He started looking around.
"W-where are we goin'?" Abe asked quivering.
"Oh, you'll see, hehehe."the slig said sounding more like a slig than a mudokon.
"You're voice sounds w-weird... are you all right?..." Abe said.
Abe started to doubt he was following a mudokon. Soon, they got to a clearing. Abe glanced at his surroundings. He scratched his head and turned to the mudokon - but it wasn't a mudokon anymore. It was a slig. Armed and ready. Abe gasped. Suddenly, a blockade of sligs popped up from behind bushes surrounding the area. And from a shadow, came Mr. Blake. Furious and angry.
"W-w-what is...this..." Abe said staggering back.
Abe wad feeling queasy and faint, his skin was turning the color of a blind mud. Not soon before Mr. Blake had approached Abe, Abe had fainted.

* * * *

It must've been late at night when Abe came to. He found himself in a cell. In a factory which he presumed was Big Barns facility. A few mudokons were in the cells waiting to be positioned as scrubs. There were a few skulls and bones and a corpse lying around. Abe got up and looked out of the cell. A slig was on duty, and another was napping. Abe went back to a corner and decided to rest. A slig had just came in as Abe dozed off...

[Abe16]

Chapter 6:

The slig whammed his gun on Abe's head. Abe jerked his head up and rubbed his head.
"C'mon, its supper." The slig spat out the word, 'supper'.
Abe was lead to a large area known as the 'Slop House'. He saw Mudokons eating leftovers of meat. Some even got served slop, which was served to slogs. Abe sat next to a group of mudokons. They stared at him.
"It's Abe!" they started to whisper.
"I know!"
"He's come to rescue us!"
"He's here!"
The mudokons all gasped and chattered. A slig came up to a stand and shouted, "SHUT UP!" Over a mic. The room was silenced. The mudokons grinned at Abe. Abe got servered slop. Abe looked at the serving table. There was plenty of meat left, he thought they served him slop on purpose.
"You won't get used to the slop." A mud whispered to Abe.
"Worth a shot if yer hungry," Another said.
Abe picked up his spoon and scooped up some slop. He put it in his mouth and spit it back out.
"This is nasty," Abe muttered under his breath.
Three sligs came for the mud's and ordered them to get back to work. One slig shoved Abe back into his cell. One mudokon was ordered to clean up the cells.
Abe was sitting on a metal bench which was supposed to be his bed. The mud scrub came toward Abe's cell.
"You've come here to rescue us!" the mud said.
"Shh, keep cleaning, I need to find a way out first," Abe said.

It was midnight Abe was out of his cell. He had simply climbed over the bars that didn't reach the ceiling. He sneaked toward the Slop House and into Mr. Blake's office.
"So, once I ship you Abe, you'll already be in position?" Mr. Blake was asking Exec. Sean and Exec. Mike.
"Yes, don't you worry.." Exec. Mike said with a grin.
"Help!" Mr. Blake shouted.
A slig shot out from a vent.
"Get that Abe guy and throw'em in the well," Mr. Blake ordered.
Abe was caught. The slig leaped for Abe. Abe jumped and fell flat on his face. The slig scrambled to his feet and grabbed his feet. He dragged Abe to the well.
"Hehe, we won't be seein' you anymore!" The slig laughed.


Abe fell down the dark hole which led to Sean and Mike's Bank of Oppertunities Just then, as Mr. Blake was relaxing in his office chair, an explosion was heard from his front gate. Mr. Blake looked at what was going on. About 10 Flying sligs were bombing the gate, and about 50 sligs were running toward Big Barns. Mr. Blake's security fones flickered on.
"Hahahahahaha!" Crackled Exec. Sean.
"Good-bye Mr. Blake." Exec. Mike said with sarcasim.
Mr. Blake had his jaw open. A blimp had rose above all nearby mudokon villages. They all contained sligs. The mudokons were running with fear but most of them were captured to be slaughtered. Mr. Blake jumped toward the main slig officer.
"You! I need all sligs from the barrack office to hold back the gate, NOW!" Mr. Blake commanded.
"yes sir!"
The Big bros were holding back the doors while the sligs were loading their guns. The muds were hiding in their cells. Abe had to stop this somehow. The door busted open and bullets were flying. Mr. Blake headed toward the emergency exit, turned out, Exec Mike and Sean's sligs had gotten there also.
"Fire!" A slig shouted.
Bombs were being tossed, explosives being lain. There was not much hope for Mr. Blake.

[Abe16]

Chapter 7:

Abe crouched down behind a pipe, he was rubbing the back of his head. His head still hurt from the violent toss the well had given him when the slig threw Abe into the well. The place looked fancy, Sean and Mike's Bank of Oppertunities that is. The place reminded Abe of Fee Co., except there was no grime or dirt, and it was scrubbed clean. Abe sneaked farther into the bank.

Mr. Blake was cowering in fear in his office. With the amount of sligs inside destroying anything the saw, the entire factory would be demolished in only about a few minutes. Just then, while a few sligs were running pass the Vykkers Labs area, about 10 armoured vykkers with snuzi guns and cleavers in their hands were running to defend their business.

"Ambush!" A slig yelled out.
"Call for back-up!" Another slig said.

Some more sligs were directed toward the vykkers. The flying sligs were ordered to blow anything in sight. Even the pipes which led to the Main Support System, which if activated could cause a malfunction in the factory systems which also could lead to an explosion of Big Barns.

The vykkers were losing and only had 3 left. The sligs quickly over powered the vykkers and shot them down. They set fire to the Vykkers Labs area and watched the flames spread out into the rest of Big Barns.

Exec. Sean and Mike were watching Big Barns fall to pieces from their watch tower. They were the managers of Sean and Mike's Bank. Mr. Blake's watch tower was on fire, it's windows shattered and the support beam was on the edge of collapsing. A battalion of flying sligs zoomed in and aimed for the weak spot of the support beam.

"Ok guys, aim for it!" A flying slig commando called out.
"Yes sir!" The others called back.

The grenades hit the right spot. Blake's watch tower collapsed. It smashed to the ground with Mr. Blake lying dead on the shambled pieces of his watch tower. The mudokons inside the factory were crouched down praying that they wouldn't be killed by the army of sligs. Miraculously, in a twisted fate, they didn't die. They rejoiced and were relieved.

"We made it!" One yelled out.
"Big Barns is destroyed!" Another one cried.
"How do we get out?" Another asked aloud.

Abe was taking a look at pictures of famous glukkons they had on display; One named Shlack, Gryde, Dripek, Aslik,Phleg, even Molluck! Abe came across a slig on duty beside an executives office.

"Hey! Don't let anybody get through here without my say so! Ya got it?" A Wanna-be yelled at his slig.
"Yes sir!" The slig called out.

Abe hid in a shadow. The slig was watching over three mudokons. As a cruel joke, he decided to create a symphany of mudokon cries. The slig started to gather two other sligs to beat on the muds. Abe gritted his teeth and snarled at the sligs.

"Yodoyodoyodo..." Abe chanted a possession orb.
"Yeaaargh!" A slig yelled out as he was being possessed.
"Somethin' wrong?" The 2nd slig asked.
"N-no. I'm fine." Abe said as a slig.
"Just, don't blink."
"What?"

Abe shot down the 2nd slig. The 1st slig gawked in horror at Abe's possessed slig.

"You just shot him down! Freeze!" The 1st slig called.

Abe shot that slig down too. Suddenly, the mudokons were bewildered at what they just saw; A slig, killing his other bretheren when they were beating on them. Abe then was about to destroy his slig when...

"What the heck is going on out there!?" The Wanna-be yelled out.
"Uh, nuthin' boss! Nuthin'!" Abe yelled out.

The Wanna-be walked out. "WHY do these two sligs look like they were shot DOWN!? TELL ME!" He ordered rather harshly.
"Well, I, uh, heh," Abe stammered.
"HELP!"
A slig shot down from a pipe. "Kill'em!" The Wanna-be commanded.

Abe's slig was destroyed. The Wanna0-be turned around and ordered the slig to watch the three mudokons. The slig nodded, and when they both turned around.. the mudokons were gone.

"Abey! You're here! Yay!" The mudokons cheered silently, making sure not to alert any sligs nearby.
"Yeah, yeah. Now we need to find you guys a bird portal."
"Yeah, whatever,"
"Sure Abe," The mudokons said.

So off they were, Abe leading three mudokons to find a bird portal.

[Abe16]

I would really like a response soon.

Chapter 8:

Finding the bird portal wasn't hard. The challenge itself was pretty complicated. It was on top of a bank roof. And the bank was guarded pretty well, on account of, because it was a Big Cheese office. And, the Big Cheese was paranoid, even though Exec. Mike and Sean said everything would be fine. So, Abe thought up a quick plan. He would find a ladder nearby, and have the mudokons follow. Abe found a broken ladder, with some steps missing, but in all, was in good shape. Once the last mudokon was on the last step... A slig had came by the ladder to smoke.

"Where'd this ladder come from?" The slig asked.
"Hurry up!" Abe whispered to the mud.
"Gotta put this back where it came," The slig muttered.

The mud quietly leaped for the ledge of the building as the slig was putting the ladder away. Abe reached his hand out to give the mud support to climb up. Abe then, chanted and the mudokons ran in.

Abe jumped down off of the bank and was faced with filing cabinets. Almost everywhere Abe looked. He was amused that Sean and Mike kept hard core files. Suddenly, a slig had arrived looking for glukkon files.

"Let's see, Grakon, the G file, g, g, g, here we are." The slig said. He grabbed a file and flipped through it. "Heh, oh Sean is definately going to like this."

Abe crept through the giant file zone looking for any suspicions. And that's exactly what he found. A large hole, looked as if a laser beam had just destroyed it. Abe peeked inside. There were excavators. Vykkers, trying to determine what it was and where it came from. It was obvious, but the vykkers hated the obvious. It was a giant ring. Not any ring, it was a giant ring. Of birds. Abe gasped.

"If I eliminate the vykkers, I can lead all the mudokons to this portal!" Abe thought.

So one by one he killed the vykkers. Their screams of terror were muffled by explosions of their friends. Abe snickered, and went to findthe mudokons he was planning on saving.


"Where are those sligs with ABE!" Exec. Sean ordered.
"Take a look," Exec. Mike said.

Sean wobbled over to see that the two sligs were wasted, sitting by the well with about 10 bottles of SoulStorm Brew lying around.

"Oh, I could just kill them, right now." Exec. Sean muttered.
"That ABe guy could be anywhere right now, Mike. Think of how many slaves he could've rescued by now, how many deaths, to our sligs he could've done!"
"Relax.He hasn't reached us yet, has he?" Mike said calmly.
"Well, how am I supposed to know. He could be anywhere!" Sean said.

Mike walked over to the inter-com and made an announcment.

"Attention all personel; We have reasons to believe that the mudokon terroist Abe, is in our Bank. If you see him, shoot him! That is all." Mike said walking back to Sean.
"Everythings going to be just fine..." Mike said, now having doubts.

[Abe16]

Chapter 9:

There were mudokons spread about the mine field. Some on ledges with UBX bombs by them. Abd sligs, slisg were guarding them. Well, not so much as guarding as sleeping. So had to sneak, but also jump and land ever so softly, that he won't wake the sligs. Abe looked at the area. Here's how the Area looked; Abe was standing right in front of it. ANd right in front of Abe, were three mines with gaps in between each one. And on several ledges, were mudokons scrubing, with UBX bombs right beside them, leaving a clear edge for someone to climb up. And then there was a slig. Five sligs to be exact. They were nearby a mudokon who was surrounded by UBX bombs. Abe scowled at that.

Abe hopped the first three mines and looked at the sligs who were sleeping. Not a sound. So far so good. Abe crept to the first ledge, climbed up and tried to disable the UBX bomb. No problem, he thought. But these ones were no ordinary bombs. On them, they had a special device, for you needed to access a system. 'Top of the notch security,' Abe thought.

"Let's see here, um, press blue button to start, ok... done. Now match he number with it's opposite and each color with it's same." Abe whispered to himself.

Just a couple of seconds later, Abe had finished his first Advanced UBX bomb. He had about three more left. So Abe got to work. Carefully trying his best not to wake the sligs off or sound off any alarms or worse, have the bomb explode, kill him, and his mudokon friend and alert the sligs. So Abe ended up disarming bombs.

"Pssst, hey!" Abe whispered to each one.
"Hey Abe!" They all said back.

Abe had led them off the ledge, so quietly, and had them jump over the mines so quietly, that one mud got cocky and tried to run out of the area while running. He bumped into a wall. Which woke one slig up. Abe signaled the others to sneak fastly. And they did.

"Well, here you are. A quiet sanctum for you guys, for now anyway." Abe said smiling.

THe mudokons ran to the back of the room where no one could hear them and play. While Abe left to find more mudokons. As Abe went along, the number of mudokons on the status board kept changing. All the time.

Employees at Work: 54
Guards at work: 34
Casualties:21

Then...

Employees at Work: 41
Guards at work: 20
Casulaties:34

And then...

Employees at Work: 12
Guards at work: 7
Casualties: 47


"Mike! Take a look at this!" Exec. Sean gestured over at their Status Board.
"Oh my god, this, this all that Abe guys fault!" Exec. Mike said.
"And we only have 7 sligs on duty! What're we supposed to do in a situation as like this one!!" Sean paniced.
"Attention all personel, get yer damn slaves and yourselves to mine and Exec. Sean's office immediately. Do it!" Exec. Mike said over the inter-com.

Abe heard this decided to save the mudokons near the portal first. He ran thorugh the halls, past the banks, through the gates and over the benches and reached the sanctum. The mudokons were chatting up a storm in there, with glee, worry and excitement.

"Ok, ok settle down folks. This must've been one of our ancestors bird portals, I, I guess. So, I'm gunna try and use this. Yodoyodoyo..." Abe chanted.

The portal Flashed with emmence light and brightness. The portal seemed more holy when someone chanted, some of them thought. But that light and Abe's chanting had echoed off the walls of the slient bank...

"Hear that!?" Sean asked.
"Sure do, you sligs. Go find the source of whatever that is and kill it." Mike ordered.

The mudokons were shy and scared. They stood in a group and silently muttered to each other.

Half of the mudokons were gone inside the portal when the sligs, acting like they were apart of the SWAT team, came in. A slig motioned to Abe and the portal. The other slig nodded and went in. ABe's chanted had abruptly stopped.

"FREEZE!" The sligs said.

Abe and the mud's had their hands up fast. The two other sligs walked out of the room, going to report to Mike and Sean, which was a stupid idea leaving one slig in a room full of 40 mudokons.

"...." The slig sweated and gulped.
"Go beat'em up!" Abe yelled.
"Let's go!" the mud's said, grinning as they beat up the helpless slig.
"Now let's do this quickly before they come back! Yodoyodoyodo..." Abe chanted again.

The mudokons jumped in and cheered for joy, but that was when Exec. Sean and Exec. Mike came in with the 12 mudokons and the two sligs. One foolish mud tried to jump in the portal quickly, but was shot down. Abe jumped at that.

"Well, well well. If it our little friend, Abe the terrorist. We were watching what you were doing, and thought if we buffed up our security forces, we might have a better chance at killing you. But that didn't work, so I decided to go the easy way; Taking a shot at you. And, once we kill you. My personal velt slig right here will push a button his a remote which'll signal my blimps in the sky, causing them to drop UBX bombs and mines all over the mudokon villages spread out in the forest.

"I have captive enough mudokons, so that I need none of the ones who will be slaughtered by the bombs! SOme may think what me and Mike plan is inhumane, but heck! We absoulutely do not care! Hahahahahahaha!" Sean crackled again.

"It is inhumane!" ABe yelled out. That's it, take him and his friends to the slaughtering room, *whistles*." Mike ordered.

Two Big Bros appeared from the dark and shoved them towards the direction of the slaughtering room. The room was a pity. It kind of looked like the room where Abe was in at the started of Abe's Oddysee. And that's exactly what it reminded him of. The two sligs glared at Abe and his friends. Not soon after, the Big bros turned to each other and talked, leaving the mud's out of their line of vision. Abe silently broke of a piece of metal from the floor and was about to climb into it when... Swish! The doors shifted open.

"Just where do you think you're going?" Sean asked.
"Get yer damn body outta there." Mike asked. Abe glanced around and hesitated.
"Follow meeee!" Abe called out as he fell down the hole he made, which actually turned out to lead some place. 6 of the mudokons followed, while the other 6 were shot, and one shot mudokon who was wounded made it down the slide.
"Where the hell is he headed!" Sean ordered.
"Sector M4 sir," The Big bro said.

So Sean, Mike and the Big Bros were headed to where Abe was going. But where Abe was going, well, was a mystery to Abe...

[arkaznor]

Nice story, I thinks it's really good.