the Mudd, another story

[mudling]

ok, so i havn't made up a decient name but i will. this is just the beggining and i will make things up as i go, see ya!

Chapter 1
I truged through the deserted village, looking for a sign of life, but there was none. I crawed back through the wall of fallen items and found 5 sligs. I told them there was nothing left. We set up camp upon a hill side where a thriving modukon farm once stood, now there was nothing. We found a meep and killed it, it was the only food we had had for a while.

It had all started when the grubbs made a truce with a tribe of wolvarks, forcing the clakkerz and outlaws to run for their lives. This had brought huge colonies of outlaws to come down towards the local mudokon villages and caused them to destroy everything. The glukkons senced the extinction of the mudokons and sent sligs to their rescue. One band of sligs had to come with me, I was the modukon guide, finding their slaves and my brothers. We were looking for as much mokukons as possible and a few goodies on the way.

Suddenly, the sligs screamed and pointed towards the hills in the distance, a herd of scrabs was charging into another herd of parrimites, beside them were painted grubbs. I realised we had strayed to far off track, we had to turn around, but it was too late. The grubbs had seen us, and they were coming. We all pelted off towards the mountains, there was another village on the way. A spear scrapped the side of my foot, leaking blood. The slogs senced this, as they were trained to. They new it was time to get revenge. Bursting out of thudder’s bag, they raced towards the grubbs. It was terrible; they were supposed to be for more competition, not a bunch of grubbs. Then I wondered what was expected, what dangers laid forward. I persuaded bonezy to chuck a precious grenade, then we ran through the river and into a forrest. The grubbs were too slow, and they had a compition to watch, the destiny relied on it.

[odd chick]

That was a nice beginning, Mudling. I never thought that the grubbs could side with the wolvarks! Keep this story going because I think it has potential.

[mudling]

thanks odd chick, i will now continue.

Chapter 2

I ran so hard I did not notice thudder run into a tree. we all stopped to help him up. I breathed in the warm air of the forest.
A few days ago I would have run off abandoning the sligs, but now I realised how loyal they were once you got to know them and of course plain old lazy.
They all stood where they were for a while. “Where is lunch” grumcin asked, “I what that lunch right now!” I rummaged in the small elum skinned back pack I had received as a present, or it realy was…. I tried to forget my past. It was soon forgotten as two eyes appeared out of nowhere.
I would of screamed if I wasn’t so thirsty but the sligs did it for me. Then it happened. A huge tongue appeared and started to chock me, a precious slog appeared and the sligs started shooting. The slog fell silent, on top of the carcass of the fleech. A herd of birds appeared to eat the carcass. These were not normal birds, they were modukon birds, we had arrived at he sacred mokukon village.
Suddenly I fell, or that is what I got told, so did the sligs. The mokokuns must of takan us ito the center of the city, this is we they sat and looked at my tattoo of the truce between the most of us in this area. The glockons had tricked us into having to fight my ally and their enemy. The sligs were my friends and decided I was their boss a long time ago, they would stick with me, I just had to hope my life would do the same. I became I little nervous as the spears tipped with vyker medicine were thrusted towards us. The word of the leader of this city would choose our fate. We started to scream and I closed my eyes.

[odd chick]

That was a pretty good chapter. There were a few spelling and grammar errors such as this one:

"would of"-That should really be 'would have' or 'would've'. I hope you don't get offended, I'm just trying to give you advice and help you out.

But other than that, it was good. I can't wait to see what fate has in store for the group.

[mudling]

Chapter 3

When I opened the heavy lids of my eyes I automatically looked around to see where I was. I was shocked, there seemed to be no escape. A wall of spears prevented escape as we approached the leader.
He wore a smaller mask than what our leader big face wore and was decorated with many feathers over the shinning blue paint. His voice was old and dry as he spoke an ancient language. He beckoned us into a small room. Here was where he pointed towards a painting. It showed grave stones and mudokon spirits running around them. Then he showed me the one of the only things their tribe had left of the outside world, an old news paper, the daily deception and own its front cover showed a picture of the people who had volunteered to help save our race and I was there, smiling.
He new he had been tricked and I felt that I did not need to get revenge for the glockons, they were as powerless us the rest of us, I had to save the modukons. The sligs had seen something that made them shudder. The news paper was made recently and I wondered how they had got it.
Last month’s news paper wasn’t sold everywhere and especially not here. They had got it from a slig caravan. Skilla was getting restless and wanted more money. The wolvarks had started taking over the factories and Skilla sensed that they were the most powerful. They had abandoned the glockons and made a massive exodus, killing all in their way. This had arrised resilience umong the intern and they wanted their own rights too. Storming away from their own decedents. Chaos had risen among oddworld. The sligs had watched in terror as I decided what to do. The leader had realized that the sligs were on the side of the wolvarks and grubbs and let them live. I dicided to help other mudokons and let the sligs escape with out being killed from Skilla’s grasp. I didn’t think about why they were Turing against skilla.
We had no time for good byes, the grubbs had arrived. The leader quickly led us to a exit and gave me an elum to ride and the sligs some meetles. A cloud of bats flew past us, blocking our view of the mysterious city and ad we escaped all I could here were the screeches of parrimites.

*edit* well, it seems no one wants my story, someone please tell me if i should continue or not. anyway, i will give one more chapter for those who can't reply and becuase it's there.

Chapter 4

We charged through a tunnel and onto a sea side village. I could smell the fresh sea and fresh fish. When we got there I jumped onto the soft grass and walked towards the entrance of the village. The sligs tagged along behind me and we investigated. It was a small clakker city; we had defiantly strayed too far! It was bustling with business and the smells of fish and gabbits.
The clakkerz ran off screaming like grubs and I managed to catch a small one. he started crying and his mother came rushing out. She had just started telling us off when her husband came fluttering in what appeared to be a captain’s suit.
“Now you leave my family alone”, he shouted, “ now you look like you could need some help, I thought you were a grubb! “ I’ll be happy to give you a boost in wherever you are going.” “Just don’t stay here too long”! I ignored the insult and we happily told him our story. Within a few minutes we had left the small city and the valley which stank of fish and were cruising in the sea and the clakkerz came streaming out and started shouting and waving. Then popper realized that the sea we were on was what we had seen from a distance or what it had started out to be.
We were now in a damp swamp filled with wasps and sting bees. He quickly told us and the captain gathered his son, he eagerly wanted to hear anything he said, and told us about the swamp. I started to panic when he started talking about lett ing us off soon, sea rexes and fleeches lurking about and many deasies carried by the insects that were packed in this area. This was when our adventure had just started. I did not notice the captain stop his engine abd the sligs get off the hover craft, I did not notice my self getting pushed off the hover craft. I noticed nothing whole I was thinking except a shadow disappearing the water and a faint unknown roar in the distance
. The hover craft disappeared and soon did the voices of the clakkarz. The bog consumed us and we squelched hip deep in the swamp. The captain had not told us anything about his people, him self or his city. In fact the only thing he did tell us that was interesting is that there was a mud city rumored in the middle of the swamps.
He had also added that we were going back towards home again, but it was nearly unreachable. This didn’t make our so far journey a waste of time.

[Fuzzleman54321]

Great story mudling!

Please continue!

[mudling]

thanks fuzzleman54321 i thought i'd never touch that story again. i owe you! i will continue ASAP.

*edit* i'm sorry it took so long, but, here it is!

Chapter 5

We had been wandering around for ages. I had realized that my plan didn’t make sense, why were we finding the mudokons, why didn’t that village just come with us? Then I tripped, I fell head first into a pool. Worry fish started to jump out everywhere and then the sligs immediately aimed there guns at the bushes, without even glancing at me. I soon realized what was happening, the school of worry fish had alerted a sea rex. We all looked at our submerged hips. We started to scream, but bonzey kept us quiet. Then a stream of bubbles appeared, followed by a mouth full of pointy, massive teeth coming out of the water. Straight towards me! The sligs repeatedly started shooting at it. Then it became fleech food, sinking into the water.
We continued through the mist, eating worryfish and fleeches when we needed to. We had to be quick, when the night came and the mudokon moon appeared, we climbed onto the small scarce, dying trees and hoped we wouldn’t become sea rex, fleech or any food.
I started to close my eyes, when I noticed something in the corner of my eyes. Grubb ambush! The sligs started to shoot as I searched my small bag for a spooce bow. A spear just above thudder’s head and an arrow hit the side of my loincloth. As the grubbs retreated, they were met by the cold, dark faces of the gluckons, riding there cozy sligcopter.
We were taken capture, along with the grubbs.
We were dragged out of the village we were taken to, the one we couldn’t find. It was run by glockons and they had made the mudokons the new sligs in order to survive.
We were addressed by the biigest of the glockons, the red glockstar. So, you the ones lookin’ for them mudokons. “We need help, those muds you savin are controlled by the cartel, each one has a base full of us. You find as many as you can see and then return to the cartol, then rescue squads will come for us.” I suddenly found myself shouting, “I don’t get it, we don’t you get your sliglicopter and get out of here, why don’t you just save yourselves!” “You don’t understand”, he said calmly, “we don’t need to stay here, but if we leave, the grubbs, sligs(he shuddered when he said the word) and wolvarks and many other creatures will sluagter the mudokons, they need us to get the food and weapons and moolah. This slig copter couldn’t last long in this fog, lucky we could hear your big ass fight.” Then he finished with, “if you wanna quit, we’ll contact those vykers to pick you up and bring you home.
I made up my mind, “well, where is the next village”? I asked.

[Fuzzleman54321]

That was cool! Please continue 'cause I love it!

[Abe16]

nice chapters! Keep up thegood work!

[mudling]

thanks, here is thee next chapter, hope you enjoy it:
Chapter 6
“Wait a minute!” shouted the red glockstar, “ya need to explore our little village and get some improvements and to the next village, but I can’t trust those slig, they rebelled against us!” he said. “well, didn’t we rebel against you, they’ll come with me!” then, I relaxed as the glockstar agreed with me. “Ya right! Ok, now go explore this place!” he said encouragingly.
We set off but before long we were beckoned behind a small hut. The shadow disappeared and revealed a grubb. “we wanted our land back dude! We were selfish sure, but those dam wolvarks! It was them that really wanted the land! We just want to be free again, not made into grubb cakes and grubb sticks! Just save us here, we’ll free the other grubbs and it’ll be sweet!” he said, so quickly, I couldn’t fit a word in. the sligs agreed, they were still made at the glockon not trusting them. Sure, he freed them, and that is the only resin why they were fighting for him. “ we promise no harm to no one dude! We’ve done enough! We’ll just free ourselves, we’ll put all thpse against us to sleep, then everything will go back to normal!” he said again, slower than before after realizing that we only just under stood him before. Ok, we’ll help, what do we do? I’ll give you a necklace so my brothers and sisters will not harm you, free as many as you can in the other villages, we’ll depart without harm from anyone. We’ve got this town covered, now we need you to rescue the other villages!” he said. We all agreed to help that grubb.
We then wandered into the market place. “yo! U the suce.... I mean rescuers! Da boss orders to have these.” He hands them a basket of moolah. “Wow, thanks, we owe you.” I said, amazed, the slig’s tentacles dropped, they were amazed. We spent the moolah on new weapons, giving the sligs a Varity of outlaw weapons and armor. I decided to get a pet ratz, which would come in handy if we were in danger, and spooce bow. We spent the remainder of our money on a map, binoculars, food, whistles, a slog and a couple of hand-held video games to keep the sligs busy. As we left, we gave the rest to charity. As I turned around to saw good bye, I saw a grubb wave, and a couple of them appeared on the roofs of the large glockon facilities.
We headed into a small forest and out of the swamp, this is where a village was rumored to be, but it had lost contact with the outside world.
As we headed into the forest, parrimites started to come down from their webs. Run! I said and we put on our equipment and ran for our lives.

[Fuzzleman54321]

That was so COOL! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

[mudling]

thanks, here you go:
Chapter 7
The parimites spiraled down towards us, and the sligs started letting out slogs. i start shooting at them, causing them to fall around us and spring back to life. We started to run faster and dodged the crashing tree that thudder shot down. They ran towards us and we sprinted through the dense forest. The treetops seemed to be non-existent and parrimites kept coming down.
Then we all stopped, we were amazed, in front of us were huge statues of grubbs, towering above us, and behind them was a huge temple. The parimites had stopped and I soon realized why. They were possessed, we had reached the mudokon village!
“Welcome!” said the glockon, wearing a shaman mask and a tattered piece of cloth, other, he was wearing nothing. “this is my empire, my land, no one shall take it! We stopped our victory cries and stared at the glockon. Grubbs, show these mudokons their room.” He shouted, walking closer. “But we don’t want to….” The sligs started saying when the glockon interrupted, “make yourself welcome, and call me boss!” then, all of a sudden, 2 grubbs came out and led us into the village, up a long stair case (which is where the village was) and into a small room. That is when I realized that the grubbs where possessed! “Don’t open that door!” I ordered with all my strength, shocked and scared at the same time. But it was too late, poper had opened the small door, reveiling a small factory, filled with enslaved mudokons and in the back there was a pathway.
Bonzey tried the door we came in, it wouldn’t work. Then the grubbs became back to normal, almost exploding in the process. They fell faint on the floor. I let through a scream, and then headed through the small door. We passed the mudokns, they all had big electric collars on, and they begged us to help them. It was a big rabble and risk but we decided to help them. Shooting off their collars, we persuaded them to follow us, bring the grubbs with them. We headed through the small tunnel and appeared into a cave, filled with old computer which hadn’t been used for a long time. Then we appeared at the grubb temple. “Save us the grubbs said, magically wakening, “help us, muds! Then he saw the necklace. You’re on our side? Sweet! “shut up!” a mudokon said as we crossed a short bridge.
Then we all stood in our places, before them were more grubb statues, and then further was a village, but the residents were all possessed. I screamed, on a huge statue (not sure what it was) stood the “boss”, the glockon. Underneath him were mudokns, painted in red, and chanting. The “villagers were building what looked like a massive wolvark tank, filled with weapons and pulled by two meetles, whose strength was reached by steroids. “with this”, shouted the gluckon, “I will take over modus!” I struggled a laugh, that machine couldn’t do anything campared to ever speacies in modus. But the he noticed us and addressed me with an evil smile, I could see it even though he was miles away, and then he spoke loud enough for us to hear but calmly, “seize them!” a army of possessed creature, mudokons, grubbs, scrabs, glockons, now I could see why so many people were reported missing. They wore red paint, but now I was certain it wasn’t red paint, this village had to be feed, and the possessed were the ones to go, and their blood lay on their brothers. I wasn’t going to make this easy, the sligs handed their old guns to some mudokons, then I stepped forward, I didn’t realize that I had beco e the leader, that didn’t concern me, “FIGHT!”
We started shooting, the remainders chanted. The gluckon stood there, he watched the two armies clash. Brother fought brother, it was all his doing. I realized what I had done, we were fighting our own friends, our people. That gluckon was going to come in alive! I just had to figure out how. Then a rat appeared in the outer village of the native temple, through it, the mudokons saw through the rat in the inner city. They grabbed their weapons and charged. “STOP” I screamed, get in defensive position and possess that gluckon! The gluckon only just heard me, but that was enough. The roof split open, releasing chant suppressers and floating mines. We defened or selves, the gluckon was protected but his chanting mudokon servants weren’t. I yelled at the mudokons to start chanting, the chant suppressers raced downwards, leaving the glockon a free target. Then I started chanting, he realized this but it was too late, he was possessed, we had one.
Then the chant suppressers saved him, zapping him free, they circled around him and the mudokons. Things looked screwed.