The Young Prince 3

[Abe16]

Hello and welcome to the 3rd part of this epic Story. In this one, Luke grows up and has a son.Note:Even though a girl is in this story, well, you know. Its my story, my rules.

It's a bright day, Luke had gotten married and had a child named Miles. Miles, had a pretty normal life, unlike his father. He never did anything exciting. Then, Ricardo's father, (Ohno! not again!) Heard the news! And he was angry as Hell! "ALRIGHT PEOPLE! Since the death of Jonathon and Ricardo's death, we haven't had any luck taking the crown." Joseph the father said. "We will create an army so large. It will over run the Kingdom." Joseph said.

Miles was playing with his friends one day when he saw some mudokon troops marching up and down the streets. "hey, why are those mudokon troops marching?" Miles asked. "Didn't you hear? Some evil guy wants revenge on your father so bad, he's not caring if he's the last man in his army!" Said his friend. "uhoh! i better tell my dad!" Miles said. "Dad! some guy wants revenge on you!" Miles said. "Yup, he wants me dead." Luke said. "Who wants dead?" Luke's wife Shila asked. "Ricardo's father." Luke said.

Um, i'll finish later. *yawns*

[odd chick]

That was a good beginning, Abe16-much better than your second story in this series. I'd like to see where this story goes because it's interesting.

[Abe16]

Okay, sorry for not writing that much, my mom had me doing laundry.


"um, dad who's Ricar-Ricor- that guy you were talking about!" Miles asked."It's a long story son, I dont wanna talk about, just go play with your friends." Luke explained. Miles thought he heard marching outside the kingdom, so he took a look. "What the, they must be the guys who want revenge on dad! I gotta warn him! but first." Miles got out his bag of marbles that Luke gave him and made them trip!"Woah!" The troops screamed and fell.
"Dad! The guys who want you are outside the gate!" Miles said. "miles, this isn't your buisness, now I'll show you that, RICARDO"S FASTHER IS BREAKING THE DOOR OPEN!" Luke screamed. Miles sounded the alarm and everyone but the warriors ran inside.

CRASH! "Ha! we're gonna get you bad!" Joseph said. "Attack!!!" one of the warrior's said. Wepons shot and spears flew rocks flew and even 90 pound Boulders! flew.CRASH! BANG, CLANG, CRACK! "Miles, get everybody and move them out of the kingdom make sure no one gets hurt." Luke directed.

I will only write 2 paragraphs. please dont complain.

[odd chick]

Oh, it's okay if you write two paragraphs. I won't complain as long as you don't write only one or two sentences! Anyway, the story is getting hectic early on! But I understand why it is whereas I didn't in your second story. Your writing skills are getting a bit better-keep it up!

[Abe16]

"Okay! people! follow me! The king said so!" Miles orderd. "Hey! that twerp is leading the entire kingdom out! Get him!" Joseph said. "Huh!? okay people, a little faster!" Miles said. Warriors caught the guys who were chasing miles. he opened the gate and let the people out. "Miles!" Luke and Shila yelled. they caught up with Miles. "Good work son." Luke compliments Miles. BOOM! A big machine tore the half the gate and resident houses down! ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZT! The electricty burned down the vykker hospital, and the Paramite pie shop! "NOOOOOO!*sniffle* he took dow the Paramite pie shop!" miles cried.

Luke got dressed up as a native. "No one, tears down the paramite pie shop!" Luke said. Luke got his spear, his spooce bow, and his sweat head band. "YA!" luke cried. Half an hour and 3 spear hits later. Luke came back. he explained that he was the only one left! "You can do it dad!" miles encouraged Luke, it didn't work. "*sigh* I cant, i'm out of spooce shrubs and my spear broke. Joseph, had gotten the crown which luke had left in he throne room.

There, that's all I'll right today.

[odd chick]

Joseph is taking over the kingdom? That's awful. Keep going with this story-it's interesting.