Oddworld Blarg's Oddessy (Remake)
Hello everybody well this was my first ever fan fic that I ever wrote and now I am going to redo this to the actual and original story I concieved two years ago. This story was ment to be sort of emotional filled with a hope that ultimately leads to hopelessness. This story will have Illustrations throughout selected chapters.
Backstory
It was evening in the great seas of the lush Oddworld. A flock of birds were flying off onto the great distance in the horizon where the sun was setting in the west. The waves were crashing against the shores of land and peace was everywhere and prosperous. A race of prosperous advance people known as Lokens lived their lives in harmony with the land. For this was a time on Oddworld that all life relied on the Lokens to watch over them. For this was a period of Prehistoric times on Oddworld and all was well.
The Lokens were a powerful race whome ruled their lands with a just hand. The creators of land is what the Lokens were known as. And their great powers gave proof to this. For they were able to teleport at will with their unieque technalogical advances with their teleportation spheres. They were also known to naturally create new lands with the ability to create elements of nature. With these extroidinary powers the Lokens were invinceble. They even lived for a 100 million years.
But all was not as it seemed for an even greater power of nature would bring them to a demise. Bleeg the great king of the nation of Lok was carrying his larva children to the sea where a large shell was waiting for them.
"Children of my kin our days are over but you will live to see another! I place you in this shell. Find a new land and establish the new kingdom of Lok!"
Suddenly the skies began to glow as fire balls came raining down upon them. In an instant a large fire ball came crashing onto the shell which held the Loken larva. All the Loken larva were killed except one. Just then an enormous fire ball came hurtling into the ociean as it picked up the sea into a vast wave of destruction. Bleeg grabed hold of the shell as the wave picked them up and threw them far out to sea. Lok and the nation of the Lokens was destroyed as Bleeg klinged on for life.
He noticed the last of his larva and he named it Blarg the last one.
"You are the remainder of my kin you will find land and bring the new kingdom into your rule. Go young Blarg my time is over go!" The waves over took Bleeg as he slipped into the churning waters and drowned. Blarg was left behind a drift in the Oddworldien sea in his giant shell for it was the end of prehistoric Oddworld. The last Loken in existence until it happened!
2 million years later
Oddworld Blarg's Oddessy
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Last edited by paramiteabe; 03-11-2004 at 11:08 AM..
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