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08-31-2004, 10:26 AM
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Expert's Past

Yep for all those who play the RPG should know Expert.If not hes a cyborg slig who was possessed and killed.And brought back to life as a half machine.I'll be starting this story soon.This story will explain his past and how he got possessed and killed.
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08-31-2004, 10:35 AM
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right then you start that soon
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08-31-2004, 10:39 AM
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Glukkon : Some more of these slig lackeys are coming in.One of the poor guys is gonna have to guard the boiler

Expert was one of the sligs being shipped in to the soulstorm brewery...and he would guard the boiler room....the place Abe needed into.The ship landed and the sligs came out.They each got some guns and were told to go thier jobs right away.However they goofed for a bit.

Slig : Whoa nice room.Must be a gluk's.C'mon lets sleep

The sligs rested on the couches.Expert did'nt feel like snoozing off.He looked up in a glass window and saw a large minigun

Expert : Whoa I wish I had that gun.Its so big

Slig : In yer dreams.It belongs to the bosses big bro.and I doubt you could hold it anyway if yer not a big bro

Expert : I guess

A glukkon came into the room and the sligs had to hide.Fast.However Expert tripped and up and fell off his pants.A glukkon came into the room and expert was in trouble.All the other sligs were seen but he did'nt care.He just told them to get lost.Expert was sent to the detention centre for an hour.

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cool keep going.....
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it looks cool.
Like alpha said : keep going....
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09-01-2004, 05:41 AM
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Thanks all next chapter

Aftr an hour a flying slig came and picked him up and released him

Slig : Sorry but no pants or rotors/Yer still on punishment

Expert : Why me?pfft

He was crawling on the floor around the place.One of the veteran slig gangs laughed at him and kicked him at the walls till he fell down a vent shaft

Slig : Thats the last we're gonna see of him!

He could see everything now.He came to a room above a vykker laboratory.

Vykker : Thanks guinea pig...err I mean slig we will try these steroids on you tommorow

Expert : Steriods?then.....I could be a big bro!

Vykker : What was that?Ratz in the vents I bet.Im gonna toast em

The vykker wen't to the vent control and turned it up to ''HIGH'' and expert could feel the vent heating.He had no choice but to drop down the next vent

It was the armoury

Expert : The armory?How convienant!

He got some pants on and a gun and came out

Expert : Now if I'm gonna get those steroids I gotta kill that slig but pose as him....Ths should be easy...

But he forgot that his own race all looked exactly the same...fortunately the slig had a tatoo on his back which made it easier.Expert set off to find him
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09-01-2004, 06:20 AM
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I find it amusing Good idea to make a story about a RPG character.

Good stuff, Cyber-slig.
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09-01-2004, 06:24 AM
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thanks oddish.I wanted to him to have more of a backgorund rather than just another slig who got possessed and killed.It details his pain and suffering in life.Which is why he goes berzerk sometimes.He was always the one with the bad luck.Getting detention and the sligs don't is one and then out of atleast 10 sligs guarding the boiler he was the one possessed.Pure rotten luck
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ey , cyber-slig i have an album that is full with GOOD stories of oddworld.
Can i put you and youre upcomming capters in it??
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Sure if ya wan't . Chapter 3 soon . I'm gonna try and get inspiration....I don't wan't this to be comical I would rather more of a sad story which would drive you nuts in the end if it was you
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*HELP WANTED*

I need someone who can draw pictures and scan them.I would but I don't have a scanner.If yer interested PM me . Whoever does it gets us much credit as me on this
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I'm good at drawing.
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09-02-2004, 06:07 AM
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OK so you want the job also? Send me a sample of Expert . Just a slig with half shut eyes . Depress like so black or purple eyelids . Feeco Exec is running for the job too . I'll pick one but if I can't choose you can both do it .
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why do you need pics for your story anway to start off a chapter with cool pic? or is there something else?.
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09-02-2004, 07:45 AM
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What? Dude you don't make sense .
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i meant why are you looking for someone whos good at drawing?
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I want pictures for the story . They attract allot more attention
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09-02-2004, 07:56 AM
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ah.... so whos been giving the better suff(pictures)? or have you not seen any of thier pictures yet?.
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No pics yet . Oddish and Feeco Exec are running for the job
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Well good luck to both I would have entered too but I dont know how to use my scanner(it came with PC).But erm.. how are you gonna advertise these pics and by pics i mean pictures.
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I know what a pic is . Advertise? It's up to people if they wanna see this story or not
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just a thought and besides i only said what a pic was cause you gave out to me when i said it last time.
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No because yer posts don't make sense . You jumble up the words allot .
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09-02-2004, 08:29 AM
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not my fault i keep going fast when typing and type the wrong letters.
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I couldn't put attachment on PM, so i have to do it here.

Nice banner Alpha!
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youd say that you made it!
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eurm guys....
cyber-slig , would you get on with story??
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09-02-2004, 09:22 AM
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yeah do i wanna hear more
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09-02-2004, 10:00 AM
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Ehm...pic please oddish? And hang on Tim . I'm still gettin' ideas
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take youre time.
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