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02-05-2004, 09:41 AM
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the thing: Fears' story

This is the story of Daniel Peter Fears.

charaters:
Daniel Fears - main charater
Benson - a weapons expert
Colin - radio man
Frank - grumpy scientist
O'Neil - scientist
Mac - Doctor
Peter - chef

The man looked at fears' over the desk. The room was blank. Nothing on the dull grey walls. A single light was on in the centre of the room, above the table that Daniel and the man sat at. Behind the man was a mirror. The interview was probably being filmed. To Dans right was a door, two guards, with slung MP5II's stood by it. The man, who was wearing a white shirt, with a hostler across it, place something on the table. "Would you like a fag?" he asked Dan. "No thanks" he replied. The thing the man had placed on the was a tape recorder. He clicked it on. "March 7th, 2008. The time is 9:45PM. This is the interview with the survivor of Arctic Research station 005." he said into it. Now everything Dan would say would be recorded. "Dan, we have to take an interview about what happened at installation zero zero five. I want you to tell me everything. How everyone died, when the incident started and why the station was partially blown up" he said to Dan. "Okay" He said. He took a long drink of water and began.

January 5th, 2008
Dan walked across the deep snow of the north pole. He went towards the wreck room. "Gah, horrible weather were havin" he said when he got in. "Its the Arctic, weathers always shit" said O'Neil. Dan walked over to the couch and sat down. "Wheres Benson?" he asked. "Out with Mac, they're taking ice cores." The research station they were in was installation 005. Built ontop of an ice cavern with a river going through it. They were suppose to take ice cores and look at the life in the river beneith the base. "Colin?" he asked. "Hes in the radio room, trying to get to someone. I told him to give up, but you know what hes like" the door burst open letting in an ice cold draft. Frank walked in and slumped on the couch next to Dan. "For ****s sake, if it gets any colder out their my bollocks gonne freeze off!" he shouted. Dan laughed. O'Neil got up. "Anyone want anything?" he asked. He got no reply.

damnit, i'm really short on time. Theres a taster of my next story. The next will be up later.
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02-06-2004, 09:31 AM
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I really enjoyed reading that piece.
Youve probably said, ive probably forgot, but are you english?

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02-06-2004, 09:55 AM
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yup, i am a strong patriotic Brit.
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02-06-2004, 10:08 AM
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Yeah, the dialogue in the story strong backs that up

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02-19-2004, 02:07 AM
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this storys being posponed. I started it to quickly and rush the main piece. Moderator, please close this thread.
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