spiral

[Fez]

finally i have got a good story that i'll work hard on, this does mean a longer wait for thw wildfire saga though.


the year is 2013, a huge corporation called "spiral" will be developing for the military for the next 100 years. A huge double domed city has been built by the corporation, for the employes and experiments to be housed in, the entire city is run by an AI, called Dean. Dean is a very smart computer, smarter then most humans, which scared most of the corporation, so they desperatly tried to shut Dean down. Dean defended himself, by closing the city and releasing all of its biological experiments on the citizens. Dean then began building more artificial computers like itself. A elite 5 man special forces team, and 3 black operatives are en-ruit to the city, do destroy Dean, and kill all of the experiments. Here is the team:

special forces:
copland: Leader
Tower: heavy weapons
Beret: sniper
Phillips: hacker
Lucas: assault

black ops:
Hawken: leader
Koch: communitcations
demit: assault

i will start off when Dean went homicidal.

Jim woke up, it was a normal day for him at the Spiral city research centre. He got up as soon as his alarm went off. Dean turned the aircon on for him, a soothing breez blew on his face. He took a cool shower, and got ready, slipping on his labcoat, and putting on his ID badge. He pushed the button next to his door, and it slid open, revealing a long white corridoor, with doors on all sides."all spiral members must wear their ID badges at all times" said Deans voice. Jim sighed, and walked down to the end of the corridoor. He went to a lift, and 3 people went running past him, very fast. "Jerks" Jim thought. He got in the lift, and went to the car park. He had just been transfered from a smaller spiral facility in newyork, and was still amazed at how white everything in the citys was. He got in his car. "Good morning Jimmy" said a voice from the car, and his chair turned to face him. He sat down and the chair swiveled back into posistion. On the touch screen pad he hit, biological materials, and the car sped away to the destination, Jim relaxing.


Scott walked through the doors into a huge room full of computers, people sat the the desks, writing up reports. "Good morning Scott", said the security guard "Can i see some ID please" Scott showed him his ID badge, and he was let through into Deans chamber. He walked down a corridoor with lights on all sides. At the end was a door. "Please place hand here" said a computerized voice. Scott put his hand on the pad, an loud buzz went off. He wiped his hand on his shirt, wiping away some of the grease and sweat "stupid machine" he said. He placed his hand on the pad agin, and was greated with a welcoming "Accesss granted" from the voice. He entered a large room, with a very big computer screen. "Good morning Scott" said Dean "stupid machine" he replayed Scotts voice, and a question mark appered on the large screen. "Sorry" said Scott. "Are all the experiments going on well?" he asked "all on time, i am very pleased with the bio-matter" replyed Dean "It was a very good idea" "thankyou Dean". The door slid open, and Tracy walked in, he was a young good looking boy, who had done wonders for the company. "Scott? a word please" he said "One minuet" Scott said to Dean. They walked into a corner, "Turn your voice sencors off Dean" said Scott.
"so what is it?"
"its Dean"
"huh?"
"he is much smarter then he was programmed to be, we wanted him to learn, but not this fast!"
"whats wrong with that then, all the more we can trust him"
"i'm scared Scott, i think he might rebel or something"
"Tracy, please, this is the most high-tech facility in the world, and he would need hands to rebel, one thing he doesnt have"
"yeah, but...i think we should shut him down, start again"
"are you crazy!? the moment we shut him down, we lose money, jobs, you name it. Sop many people depened on him, in fact the whole city!"
"okay okay, mabie i'm just being paranoid, thanks Scott"
"dont mention it"

Tracy walked out of the room. ""i'll go too, by Dean" said Scott. He walked out too. Dean had not turned his voice sensors off, he kept playing the same sentence over and over again. "he was much smarter the he was programmed to be!" so the humans were scared of him, he didnt like that, mabie if he had just a little revenge...no, alot, they dezerved it, scared just because he is smart. Firealarm activated appered on the large screen.

Jim's car stopped, and a loud siren had gone off. The door opened and his chair swiveled round. "what the!?" he said "he jogged to the fire escape port closest to him, lots of people crowded around him. "Damn fire drills he said" Suddenly, the doors to the fire escape port closed, people started banging on the doors. "Whats going on here?" said Jim.

Back on Deans screen a new message appered, releasing knock out gas.

Jim was suddenly startled when a blue gas came down from the ceiling, everybody started couighing, and falling over. Jim felt drowsey, and fell over, going straight to sleep.

a new and deadly message came on Deans screen, releasing experiments...

to be continued...

[Hobo]

Hobo's all tense now. Hobo Says carry on..........

[Fez]

Ryans team was in the lift, coming back up from the hive. Suddenly the lift stopped. "Wha!?" said one of Ryans men. The lift started going back down again, at a huge speed. "WOOOOOOOOW!" shouted everybody. It hit the bottom, and the doors opened into the armoury. The troopers personal lockers locked, and other weapon lockers opened. "Dean!, what the hell is going on!" shouted Ryan. His team grabbed the M-8's from the lockers and loaded them. The doors to the hive opened. "Okay team, its just another bughunt" said Ryan, how wrong he was. The bugs came in large groups, the team fired, the bugs not even flinching, one jumped at Ryan, he pinned it and fired point black at its head, nothing happened. There was a fire flash though, and a cartridge came out. "SHIT! Dean filled these weapons with blanks!" shouted Ryan, the doors to the armoury locked shut. One of Ryans men pulled out his knife, but it wasnt enough. The entire team was slaughtered.

Scott and Tracy were locked in Deans chamber. "We gotta get out of here!" panicked Tracy. "SHHH, listen..." Scott said. A whiring noise could be heard from the walls. Standard defense autoguns activated came up on Deans screen. "HOLy SH-" 4 small gun turrents came out of the corners, and fired at Scott and Tracy.

15 hours later...

Jim woke up, startled. He had had a horrible dream, where the bugs had escaped and killed all the people in the city. People had died all around him, some torn apart, some swarmed in small insect type things. Others just falling down dead. He got up and checked his watch. 10:00PM He had been asleep for almost 15 hours. He looked around. it was dark in the city, bodies were every where, torn up, cut up, or just lying dead. Fires had started in some places, cars had been wrecked. Military vehichles were turned upside down. SWAT vans runined. Normal cars, on fire or destroyed. "What happened here?" Jim said. He was scared, why was he still alive? so many questions came to his head. He went to a turned over APC, and saw 3 dead soldiers inside, he saw a bloodystained M-8, he took it, and loaded it. He suddenly felt a cold chill, he looked up. Part of the dome had been blown up, and a M-22 osprey was hovering over the hole. He could just mkae out 8 shapes, diveboming from the ship. The osprey flew back out of the hole and away and the 8 shapes got closer. At roughly 30ft. from the ground, each person pulled a cord, releasing a parachute, then at about 5ft. the people pulled another cord, and the parachutes dropped, the people fell 5ft., and looked up. Jim could now make up the people, they were wearing black clothing and vests. They had gasmasks on, and were carring M-8's. He could see 3 people with M-29's and one person with a familiar desert eagle. 2 of the people pushed him down, and handcuffed him. "Check for more survivors, get an ID on this one." said one of the soldiers. One of the soldiers looked at a small laptop on his wrist. "James H. Rakkenfield, biological materials" he said. "SIR!, no other survivors!" said one of the marines. "Check thermal cameras" said the same soldier, who Jim had worked out was probably the leader. "No sir, noone" said another marine. "Check this one for infections". A soldier ran up to him, and put a injection in his arm. "HEY!" Jim shouted, it was no use. "He's clean" said a female voice. "Sir, bio-matter air form is not in this region" said another soldier, who was holding a weird moniter. "What do we do with him?" said another man. The leader took of his gasmask, revealing a male face, with short blond hair, and blue eyes. "We take him with us" he said. And with that, Jim still handcuffed, the team moved throught the city, fast, and checking every alley, taking their gasmasks off one by one.

to be continued...

[Fez]

to add to the imigination, here are some pictures, unfortunetly, i can only get them in attached files. sorry!

[Fez]

XM-29, used by the black ops.

[Fez]

a not clear but still a pic of what the marines look like.

[Abe's son]

Amazingly good! Continue or I will be forced to bludogen your head in with a golf trophy!

[Fez]

the team walked up to a very large building. Many of its windows had been smashed, and it had bullet holes in the windows. "This is it" said the leader. Jim had read Copland on his vest, must be his name. Copland put his gasmask back on. "Tower, Beret. Stay here with the survivor, and get all the intel you can about the experiments." Two soldiers ran over to him. One was holding a M-8 with a twin drum magazine, and the other had a SL9SD sniper rifle. Copland went in, and the other marines followed. He had noticed that 3 of the soldiers had different weapons, armour and gasmasks. The two men, Tower and Beret, took of their gasmasks. Tower, who was a black man, with a beard instanly lit up a ciggerette. Beret was a young looking soldier, with very short hair. "So... who are the guys with the black uniform?" said Jim. They both looked at him, Beret answered. "They are black ops, soldiers who dont work for spiral, here, because they think they are better then us, and have to control conditions" Beret made the quotations sighn when he said control conditions. "I dont know what they mean by it, but i dont really like them, except Demit, shes lovely, abit mean though" said Beret. Tower laughed "Yeah, you might accutally get laid after this is over" he said. Beret gave him the finger, and started laughing. Beret coighed, and looked at Jim. "So...the boss said to get intel of you about the experiments, whats the worst?" "that would have to be the bio-matter" replyed Jim. "Its a blue thick liquid, like a gel, but is made out of trilleons of cells. It is capable of going to liquid, its normal blob like form, to air, to get inside you and fill up your lungs and travelk through airvents. To make parts of it go solid, to throw at you." Beret and Tower looked abit scared "but...under extream cold or heat, its turned entirly into a solid, whick kills it" Tower looked relieved, but Beret was still looking scared.

Copland went in the lead. He came up to a t-junction in the building. "Phillips" he said, one of the soldiers, with a small computer on his wrist typed some things in. "Left" he said. The team moved left, they came to an area where the power was out. Phillips and Lucas lit some magneseium flares. The green light lit up the room bright. Two elevators were infront of them, both looking very busted up. Phillips said "the elevators are out of power, give me a mo, and i'll restore it" "okay, but i want Lucas and Koch to go with you" replyed Copland.Phillips went to the right, donw a coridoor. Lucas, the only female member on the special forces went in lead. Koch, the black operative went behind, covering their six. Phillips came to a room that said elevator and lobby power. "This is it" he said. It was dark inside. "Stay here, i'll go in first" said Lucas to Phillips and Koch. She lit a flare, and threw it into the room. She entered slowly, her flashlight on her M-8 checking every where. She thought she heard a scrathing rustling sound coming from one of the corners, but she had checked them all, no concact. "Clear" she said. Phillips went in, Koch stayed at the door. Phillips went over to a large box on the wall, and took a wire from his wrist console into the box. He typed something in, "bingo" he said. The lights turned on. "We have power" Koch said over his radieo to the other team. Little did they know this was the worst mistake they would make.

to be continued...

[Fez]

more detail... Berets SL9SD sniper rifle.

[Hobo]

Keep writing or I shall unleash my pet hamster, who is an expert in many a martial art.............

[Abe's son]

Originally posted by hobo
Keep writing or I shall unleash my pet hamster, who is an expert in many a martial art.............

Then I'll sick my attack kitty on you!

[Fez]

Koch, Lucas and Phillips ran back to the rest of the team, who were in front of an elevator. "Okay, we'll take 2 teams up" said Hawken, the black ops leader. "I'll take my team up first, to the spiral city destruction centre. Copland, take your team to Deans control centre and disable him, now lets move!"

"Were moving up now, but Copland wants you to to stay with the prisoner" said a voice over Towers radieo. Jim didnt like being called a "prisoner". Beret sighed, "once again, i'm missing out on all the action" he said

"I havent killed anything in months!"
"Steady on Beret, you'll get your chance"
"oh yeah, when"
"now, we got hostiles!" shouted Tower

5 bugs came around the corner.

The bugs were biogenicly engineared living organisums made by the workers in the "military footsoldier replacement centre". I dont know why they were called "bugs" because they dont look insect like, except for their ant-like ways. They are about 5 foot tall when huanched, and walk on 2 legs. They have 2 strong large muscular arms, and 4 skinny, boneless, tentical like arms, coming from their backs. these arms have small mouthes on the end, which each have a 2 ft tounge. The muscular arms have mouth like things too, but instead of a tounge, they have a long boney spike that comes out. Their head is a very square shape, with a large mouth and 6 white eyes, in 2 rows of 6 going vertically down their heads. They are a brown to black colour and are very hostile.

"God i hate these things" said Tower who fired automatic on the oncoming bugs, he killed them all with ease. They were torn apart and left dying. One screamed and tryed to crawl away. "I'll get it!" said Beret, who looked throught his rifles scope, and fired at the bugs back, killing it instantly. "Nice one" said Tower "But technically, you didnt kill it, it was going to die anyway after i wounded it". They both laughed, reloaded their weapons, and lay down, checking for any more hostiles. During the firefight, Jim saw it as an opertunity to run away, he ran as fast as he could, down an alley way, and into a building.

Beret lay down, scanning the area for more hostiles. "WHERES THE PRISONER!" shouted Tower. "Oh shit!" shouted Beret.

Copland's team went into the right elevator. "destination?" said a pleasant voice from the elevator. "Level 50, Dean control centre" said Phillips "password?" Phillips hooked up his wrist computer to a panel in the lift and typed something in. "Access ganted" said the voice, and the lift moved up at astonishing speed.

Beret ran down the closest alley way, and it wasnt long before he found the hostige, hiding in a building. "What the hell do you think you are doing man!" he shouted "would you rather go out and die?" he said. Beret took Jim back to the camp where Tower was, "good to see you" Tower said. "I just got a call from Copland, he wants us to go into the complex behind us and regroup. Lets get moving" he said. They walked into the buliding, which was now lit up, as were most of the other buildings.

keep in mind, Copland hasnt made any calls on his radieo yet...

[Hobo]

OOOOOh! More.......

[Fez]

Copland came to level 50. The elevator doors opened, to reveal a bright white room. The team went in two's, hugging the walls and stafing to a control pannel in the centre of the room. A dead security guard lay on the desk, his body riddled with bullets. "What did this?" said Lucas, who sounded scared. "Deans defense turrents, he has four of them, installed in the hallway behind that door" he pointed to a big door at the end of the room. "They track heartbeats, and then dont stop firing untill the heartbeat is gone, they fire 7.62 rounds, and hold up to eight-hundred each. I should be able to disable them in minutes" said Phillips "then get to it" said Copland. A voice came over Coplands radieo "Sir this is Beret, what floor do we have to get to?" "what do you mean" "didnt you just call us to come to your level?" said berets voice again "no, i havnt made any calls on this radieo, stay in the lobby and set up a samll rendevoux point" "yes sir". Phillips sat down at the desk, and hooked his wrist computer up to the three computers already on there.

"the captain didnt call us" said Beret to Tower "But i'm sure i heard something" mabey your going mad?" said Tower. Beret gave him the finger. "Well, we'll just stay here untill they need us for backup" he said again.

Hawken, Kock and Demit moved through the bright corridors of the building. Koch in the the lead, suddenly he put his hand up in the air, and the team crouched and looked in every direction. "A shadow" he said. A human shaped shadow was on the wall, it moved slowly. Then a human appeared from around the corner "at last!" he shouted "help!" he ran twords the team. A beeper went of on Demits arm "he infected" she said the team fired their F2000's and the survivor was torn to peices as the 5.556 bullets hit him. Blue blood came out of him, which quickly evaporated. Koch moved up to the body, pulled out his colt .45, and shot it in the head.

the big door opened in Deans chamber. "Lucas" he said, She cocked her MP2000, and moved down the long corridor, there were bullet holes in the walls, but no bodies. She came to the door at the end. "Clear" she said Copland went down the corridor, followed by Phillips, they all started putting C4 on the door to blow it down. Back at the desk, a computer said "secondary defences activated"

i ve decided to change the weapons of the teams to make them more "special forcy" Coplands team now have MP2000 except for tower and beret, who have a M269 and a SL9SD. Hawkens team are using F2000's.

[Fez]

Coplands teams SMG, the MP2000, its just like the picture but without the sliencers.

[Fez]

the basic F2000 used by Hawkens team.

[Fez]

"AW CRAP!" said Phillips, who had run back to the desk to get something. "GET OUT OF THERE!" he shouted. To late, the door slammed shut, locking Lucas and Copland in. "Stay calm" Copland said, a long robotic are camedonw from the celing, just outside of the door to Dean, it had some sort of weapon on the end. The end started to glow, and then it fired a thin yellow beam. Copland and Lucas doged it, but it started to glow again. "PHILLIPS!" shouted copland "WHAT THE HELL IS THAT THING!" "Deans secondary defence, a laser weapon they made by magnifying light to such intensitys that it can burn, hang on a sec and i'll deactivate it" it fired again, this time cutting the vertical grip off of Lucas' MP2000 "shit" she said. "Its coming again!" she said, the laser charged and fired again, but copland fired back, but the .45 bullets didnt seem to do much damage. "Forget it its a sythetic metal, only .50 and above can peirce that, or high explosives..." phillips was still typing in some passwords on his computer "c'mon" he said to himself. The laser fired again, Lucas did a graceful back flip out of its path, but Copland tripped over, it was coming up between his legs, when suddenly it stopped, and went back into its hole in the ceiling. The door opened, and Copland got up, looking quite embarrased. Lucas was snigering "what a close shave eh?" she said to him. "Yeah it was" he replyed.

Hawken and his team came to a door that said "Spiral city destruction centre" he went into a circular room, with a large control pannel going all the way around it, opposite him there was a large computer screen. He nodded at Demit, who walked over to a pannel, and typed a few things in. "Destruction of city in 18 hours" a computerized voice said. Demit smiled and they walked out of the room, back onto an elevator, and up to leverl 50, where Coplands team was waiting for them.

this is the weapon that Tower is using.

[Fez]

Copland and Lucas went up to the door again, Phillips pushed a few buttons, and the door opened, revealing a dark room with a large copmter screen on the wall to the left. Phillips hit some more buttons, and the lights went on, the room was very white. "Okay, Phillips, get over here and deactivate it" Suddenly the screen flashed to life, and evil laugh filled the room. "You must be the team sent in to destroy me" said Dean "no, there are more of us" replyed Copland. "I know, i have been traking you through my city" "hmm, well you cant stop us now can you, so..." phillips walked over to the coputer and pushed a button. A large pannel opened, revaeling a clear motherboard with lots of glowing blue wires. Phillips pulled the biggest one. The computer voice said "Dean backup power disabled" "backup power?" said Phillips. Dean voice came back to the room, "i took to the time to seperate my mian drives around the city, there are four left and you'll never get to them. I have also made some...friends who are much more like me as well as my own biological experiments." he said. On the screen it showed 3 huge mechanical things, that reminded Copland of "the alien". the screen then switched to show a large room, filled with tubes, and each tube had a strange yellow worm in it with a large mouth. "spiral city destruction deactivated" said the computerized voice. The screen fuzzled out. The Elavator doors opened, and Hawkens team came running in. "He's-" Demit started "we know" said Copland. "We have a new mission, we have to find what is left of these harddrives, they will need a aclose power scorce, so look near the generators and power plants" said Copland "Tower, Beret did you hear that?" Copland said down his comm. a very destorted "r....ger" came from the comm. "Deans blocking our communications" said Phillips. "Okay, i want Hawken to take his team to the West side of the city, we'll meet up with Tower and Beret and move East, no move it people" said Copland.

"Damn comm." said Beret "i think the sarge wants us to regroup" a clear message came through the comm. "Tower, Beret, take the prisoner to the lobby, we'll meet you there" said Coplands voice. "Lets move" said Tower "C'mon Jimmy, were rollin'" He said to Jim. They moved into the bulinding behind them, and went behind the reception.

Copland, Lucas and Phillips went into the elevator first. "Destination?" said the voice "lobby" said Lucas. The elevator sped down. "So what do we do about the mission?" said Koch, after Coplands team had left " We still got alot of info to save and get out of here" "we'll carry on with our mission, to get intel on ALL of spirals experiments" said Hawken "What about the others?" said Demit "We'll leave without them, let the beasts finish them off, if they come they will only be a liability" "yessir" said Demit and Koch. They went into the elavator, and went to leverl 30.

[Fez]

Copland came out of the elevator to meat Tower, Beret and Jim in the lobby. "Lets move" he said. The team went out side and found an APC, it was a little damaged. Phillips went inside and sat down at the drivers seat. Lucas went to the control pannel on one side, and the others sat down. Phillips pushed a button. The door at the back closed. After pushing a few more buttons, the APC came to life and started moving. "I've put it on auto-drive to a small part of the city, near the outskirts, there is a large power sorce coming from it". Tower climbed up to the .50 caliber gun at the top. "Nice..." he said. Lucas typed fast on the control pannel. "Okay, we should be there in about 5 minuets, but this APC has got a leak in the fuel tank, we'll have to ditch it asap." "Fine" said Copland.


Hawken and his team walked out of the building. They saw the APC take off. "Right, the bug DNA first. We have to go past the main hive to get to it, which is in an elevator in the centre of the city. It will be loaded with bugs, since they'll go back to the hive with there food." Said Demit "I hope your right..." said Koch, who was looking at 5 dead bugs, their bodies riddled with bullets. They moved through the now nearly pitch black city, taking off their gas masks and putting on their night vision goggles. Demit checked her GPS on her wrist. "Here" she said. Infront of them there was a small buliding, they walked in to find a circular room With an elevator in the middle and computers all around the edges of the room. They went into the elevator. "This should take us to a small armoury, and then to the hive." The elevator moved slowly, and it was very creaky. "Its damaged, must have fallen down at great speeds." Said Demit. When they reached the bottom, the doors opened, and they were greated with a horrible sight. A team of marines torn to pieces. Blood on the ceiling and walls, Hawken went over to a marine who looked like a leader. "Ryan" it said on his vest. "Dean let the bugs in, and trapped this team down here..." said Koch. "And these weapons were firing blanks, they didnt have a chance." Demit went up to a big blood stained door, and pushed a code in on the pannel. She then took out a card and swiped it, the lock blew open, and the door opened. They all crouched down. "Koch" said Hawken. Koch moved into the darkness, after about 5 minuets, a green flare went off, lighting up a huge cave, slime dripping from the walls, the cave split into lots of tunnels, that went in every direction. "The lab used to be at the top" Said Demit "But it was then moved down to the hive so that the bugs could be studied more easly, this way..." Demit lead the team down a dark tunnel.

Behind them, 15 objects started to move...

[Silversnow]

When people are talking, try to make it like this:
"Hello"
"Hello"
It's easier. And now write more or I'll... um... well, it would be painful.

[Fez]

Koch flipped around, the flashlight of his gun lighting up his six. He thought he saw something move, he walked backwards slowly. Then something definetaly moved.

"did you see tha-"

Hawken and Demit were no where to be seen. He cocked his rifle, and called over the radieo:

"where are you guys?"
"I see you on my GPS, go left, then left again."

said Demit. He ran, left, then down a long tunnel, he could hear footsteps behind him. He spun around to see a bug raise up over him. He fired. 10 bullets went into the thing, and it died, letting out a shreak. He could see 5 more things moving in the dark. He ran the lext left, and saw Demit and Hawken.

"Down there, at least 5 of them"

he said

"Its okay, were here"

said Demit, who pointed to a wall, with windows at the top, and a large thick door at the bottom, it had blood on it. Demit swiped her card again, blowing off the lock. The door opened, and they went inside. Demit ran over to a console, and started putting all the data f the "bugs" onto a minidisk. Glass shattered. Koch and Hawken aimed their F2000's and the stairs. Suddenly 4 bugs ran down the stairs. They fired, putting down the bugs before thery even reached the bottom of the stairs. An air vent burst down, and 2 more smaller ones came out. Demit pulled out her desert eagle and fired two bullets, missing one of the bugs but the second bullet hit it square in the chest. Koch finished the other one off.

"Finished, lets go!"

shouted Demit. she pushed a button and an elevator door opened.

"This should take us back to the surface"
"then why didnt we come down that one!"

shouted Hawken, who was firing at bugs which now poured down the stairs.

"because it was in the same direction that Copland went, we have to look like were are following his orders"
"okay, MOVE!"

Hawken ran to the elevator where Demit was waiting.

"FIRE IN THE HOLE!"

shouted Koch, who threw a grenade at the stairs. It went off. He ran to the elevator and smiled to the others, a bug behind him was just about to bit his head off when the door closed, and its head was severed. It landed on the floor infront of them.

[Fez]

more changes, this time with Tower. Since most of the combat is close quarters, i have repleced his M249 SAW with a more CQB machine gun.

the H&K M23E

[Fez]

the APC came to a halt out side of a tall building. "This is it" said Phillips, he typed some things into his wrist computer, "scaning... Okay, i was right. There is part of Deans harddrive in here." the team came out of the APC. "Tower, Beret, watch the survivor again" said Copland "what, again!?" moaned Beret. Jim was happy to find he was now being called a "survivor". "dont question my orders privet!" said Copland "yessir" replyed Tower. Copland, Lucas and Phillips once again went into the buliding. "Man, i hate babysitting" said Beret "shut up you idiot, lets just do as the bossman says, and let them do the hard work." said Tower.

Hawkens team came out of the elevator, and into the streets. "Nice one Demit" said Koch "now where to?" "we go to the biomatter research centre, lucky no biomatter was ever kept there, so were safe" replyed Demit. "Okay then, lets go" said Hawken. They moved swiftly through the shadows, not making a sound, only the light from their laser sights visible. Koch looked at his watch 11:13, "mission duration 1 hour 13 minutes..." he said "...and 24 seconds" "not bad" said Hawken. something moved. Koch spun around, staring into the darkness. "Guys, movement" he said, Hawken and Demit, stood next to Koch. "NV's on" said Hawken, the team took of their gas masks, and put on their night vision. Something ran infront of them, fast. Koch shouldered his F2000. Then the attack happend, not from the front... but from behind. A large bug jumped out of the darkness and grabbed Hawken "ARGH!" he screamed he dropped his F2000, and pulled out his colt .45, he fired over his shoulder, not hitting anything. "AAARRGGGHHHH!" he screamed. Koch and Demit couldnt get an aim at it, they spun around to find 13 bugs running twords them, they fired. "YAAARRRRRGHGHGHGH! Koch turned around just to see Hawkens head ripped off. Blood splattered all over Koch's face. "SHIT! THE BOSS IS DEAD!" he shouted "damnit!" said Demit, who turned around, filling the bug who had killed Hawken with bullets. Koch stopped to realode, no time, he pulled out his colt .45 and fired into the incoming bugs, Demit finished them off. One bug lay on the ground, screaming in pain, Koch walked over to it, and finished off his clip on the bugs head. He realoded his colt and then his F2000. "shit..." said Demit, "great, where do we go now!?" said Koch. "We find the others, we wont survive here long in a two." she said "take his ammo and equipment, and then move on" she said. Koch picked up all the colt and F2000 mags he could find from his leader, then he took his grenades, night vision and gas mask. He turned to Demit, shared out the ammo, then they both ran, as movment was behind them.

Copland went into the lobby of th building, it was on of the many research centres for the bugs. He went to an elevator, "power scorce is on level 12" said Phillips. They went into the elevator, "12" said Lucas, and they went up. They stopped at level 9 "what the hell!?" said Copland "the elevators busted" said Phillips, we'll have to get off here and find another elevator to go the rest of the way. They got out, into a white corridor, they went left. "shhhhh..." said Lucas, suddenly "voices..." "i hear them" said Copland. They turned another corner, Phillips pointed at a door. "3...2...1..." he over rided the doors lock, the door slid open, and three figures with M3 super shotguns turned around...


please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need feedback!

[Silversnow]

Yay, excitement!
I like the ending there, it really makes me want to read more of what you write. And, um... Yeah. Really nice story, ferill, and the weapon pictures gives it... feeling.

[Fez]

"FREEZE! DROP YOUR WEAPONS!" shouted one of the people, all three of them had their flashlight on their shotguns on. Two of them were in the middle of the room, around a cooking pot, and the other was by a desk. "Its okay, were friendlys, let us in" said Lucas. "NO WAY MAN, YOU GOT THEM IN YOU, I KNOW YOU DO!" shouted one of the marines. Phillips looked at Lucas and nodded. Lucas took off here gas mask, leting her long blonde hair fall down. The marines stopped shouting. "...get in..." said one of them. They went in, and Phillips locked the door behind them. they were in a small room, it was dark, the only light coming from the TV screens. It had two long desks, going from wall to wall on the left and right hand side of the room. There were lots of chairs at these desks, and lots of screens built into the wall, as well as some small computers, there was a small storage room at the back, with a red light on inside. Lucas scanned them, no biomatter present. "I'm Captain James Copland, this is my team. We were sent here to shut down Dean after he went homicidal. Who are you?" said Copland. "I'm luitenant Hicks, of the Spiral Outbreak Containment Team. The SOCT. When the outbreak happened, most of my team were lost, so we came to this CCTV room, it moniters all bulidings on this side of the city, and we have enough ammo and food to last us a long time, we were waiting for a team like you to get us out. Did you say that Dean caused all this?" said the one of the soldiers in the middle. The pot started to boil over, one of the marines ran over to it and turned the heat down. "Yeah, Dean went homicidal, and released the main doors to the hive and biomatter containment. Didnt you know this?" sai Phillips. "No, we were just sent in to clean up, we thought it would be easy, but i think were the only ones left." Said Hicks.

*flashback,(metal gear solid style) shows Hick's team in the middle of the road, shooting tons of bugs with shotguns, Hick's team are getting killed.*

"We were sent in to control the streets, it was only suppose to be a small mission, but we were over whelmed, even with the most effective weapons like these M3 shotguns."

*end of flashback*

"Let me show you my team, i'm Hicks, this is Terry" he points to the marine by the desk, who has gotten back to looking at the CCTV screens. "And this is Spoon, the funny one"

[Fez]

Koch and Demit ran, they were being followed closly by a large group of bugs. Koch stopped to fire a few rounds into them, but it didnt do much. They saw a car that had been "untouched" Demit ran to it and jumped in the passenger seat. Koch ran around, a bug jumped on the top of the car, he shot it, and then jumped in the drivers seat. They closed and locked the doors. "They are at the 3rd bug research centre, go go go!" Koch pushed on the touch screen to the 3rd bug centre, and the car sped off, running over a bug on the road. Koch took the handguard of his F2000, and pulled the 40mm grenade launcher out of his backpack, he put it on, and opened his door. Luckly, the doors opened sideways. He leaned out, and fired a 40mm HE grenade into the following bugs, the explosion took out some of the road and most of the bugs, wounding the rest. He reloaded and closed the door. "Nice shot" said Demit.

Beret and Tower saw something coming twords them. "What the hell!?" said Beret. it was a car, with green bug blood on the roof. It came to a stop infront of them, and Koch and Demit jumped out. "Nice to see ya, did yo get Deans other harddrive?" said Tower "erm... yeah" said Koch. "Wheres ya leader?" said Beret, Demit and Koch looked down at the floor, in sorrow. "Oh..." said Beret "...sorry...".

"Where is Copland and the others?" said Demit "They are inside, shutting down one of Deans harddrives"said Beret "good, we'll go and find them." Demit and Koch ran into the building.

Spoon smiled at Lucas "Helloooooooooooooo" he said. Lucas rolled her eyes. "So what do you have?" said Phillips to Hicks. He walked over to the locker, inside there were tons of packets of food, 7 boxes of 12 guage shotgun shells, 2 FN Five seveNs and a browning 9mm HP. There were also lots of 9mm and 5,7mm bullets scattered on the shelves. Hicks picked up a Five seveN and put it in his holster. He also pocketed some of the 5.7mm rounds. "Are we gonna go now?" Said Terry, who was now serving up some noodles to Hicks and Spoon "sorry i dont have enough for you guys" he said. Spoon ate quickly, but hicks didnt eat. "Yeah, prepeare to move, we'll go down to the lobby with you guys, and then Lucas and Phillips will go back up to shut Deans harddrive.

Demit and Koch came out of an elevator and heard voices. Demit put her back to the wall. Koch pulled out a flashbang. Demit put plastique on the door lock, which blew it open, and Koch lobbed in his Flashbang.

The door blew open and a grenade of some kind came in. It exploded, a long whistling noise went off, deafening everyone, they were blinded to by a bright flash. Everyone screamed. Koch and Demit came into the room. "Its us you asswipes!" shouted Copland "oh shit..." said Koch. The flashbang cleared and everyone got up. Spoon had trodden in his food "GODDAMN IT NOT MY NOODLES!"he shouted Lucas smirked.

[Fez]

"Did you shut down one of deans harddrives ?" said Phillips. "Yeah, we did." repleyed Koch. "Wheres Hawken?" said Copland "he didnt make it back" "oh, sorry..." said Copland. "Who are these guys?" said Demit. "They're part of the SOCT, and probably the only people left in this place." said Copland "could you take them down to the lobby, and stay there with the rest of my team?" said Copland "sure...will do" said Koch. He moved out of the room, hicks and terry following. "but what about my food?" said Spoon, "leave it and c'mon, were safe now" said Hicks, Spoon followed him out of the room.

Copland went out after Phillips, and continued down the corridor. "Cap, theres something not right here..." said Phillips "There are 4 parts of Deans harddrive, including the main chambre. If we disabled the chambre, and koch says he disabled another one... shouldnt there be 2 left?" "yeah, so?" "Koch and Demit havnt disabled anything, i think they are up to something" "okay...hang on" said Copland. He trusted every member in his team alot, so he went on the radieo to Beret" "beret, i want you to watch Koch and Demit, they've been acting strange lately..."

[Reptile]

Your stories always tenderise me Ferill, come on I need more!

[Fez]

Beret got the call from Copland. "Yessir" he replyed. Tower and Beret both turned to see Demit, Koch and 3 new people come down the elevator. "Whos the noobies?" said Beret. "I'm captain Hicks, of the SOCT. Were the only people left." "oh...hi" said beret. They set up a small camp in the checkin desk at the lobby, a dead security guard was dead on the desk. Tower threw his body off, and propped up his gun. Jim went over to the dead guard, and looked in his holster. One FN Five seveN, two clips and one extended 30 round clip. He grabbed them and hid them under his coat, he also took the holster to keep them in and the flashlight. "Hey, what you doing?" said Demit to Jim "getting some defence, i dont want to be without a weapon if we get attacked." said Jim. "Oh, well..." Demit pulled a grenade from her belt, "take this...you never know..." she handed him the grenade, and closed his hand around it. "ah..." she got up and walked quickly away to join Koch, who was talkin to Tower and Hicks. "So how many experiments were there?" said Tower "you heard them in the briefing dumbass" said Beret "about roughly 78 bugs and the bio-matter." "okay..." said Tower.

Copland got into another elevator. "Level?" said the plesant voice. Copland looked at Phillips, "12" the elevator went up. They got to level 12, the doors slid open, to revieal a body fall into them. "holy cra..." said Phillips. "Jumpy?" said Lucas. They walked into another coridoor, it looked just the same as all the others. "Here" said Phillips, and he pried open a door, to see another CCTV room, this one with a large screen at the back, a small light was on in the corner. Phillips went over to it and started disabling it. After about 5 minutes he said "finished lets WHAT THE HELL!" he shouted, as anotherevil message came up on the supposidly dead screen...

[Silversnow]

Those kinds of endings are good, now I can't miss the next chapter.
And I hope you don't think I'm rude or something, but Spoon isn't very funny, just childish and loud... Maybe that's the way he's supposed to be?