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02-08-2003, 10:44 AM
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They're here....

Abe ran through the door.

"RUN!" He cried as a huge UFO landed nest to the shack.
"What the helll is that!?" Alf shouted.

!SMASH!

The door flew open revealing a...
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02-22-2003, 04:26 PM
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preety kool start but i think u should of
made it a little more belivable in my opinion
well its a kool start to a story
any way im dieing to hear wat
is revealed in the craft write some more
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