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07-02-2002, 09:43 PM
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Oddworld episode 1 the gathering.

The night was quit. the forest swayed with the wind in a gentle motion. Above the mists of the cloud shine the bright moon, its perpetual glow lite the town of Mudu'Gla. In the town, singing and laughing could be heard. For it is were weary travelers from all around Mudos come to stop. The town was runed by peaceful Mudokons and a Shaman who once was part of the mighty tribe council.
Tonight was a special night. The Shaman Kujo was holding the anuall festival known as, the gathering. The gathering is a time for all to site together in peace, enjoy good food, and to just have fun.
" Attention " Kujo shouted " Attention please, tonight is a glorious one, shall we celebrate our freedom and peace together."
The crowd reveled a great cry to announce the start of the celebration.
"Perhaps i could assist you" said a large and muscular Mudokon who had happened to see a girl sneek some food into her sash.
" Um.......no, thats ok i need no assistance" the girl said seeming to hide something.
" I know what you did, steeling food is not necassery." the Mudokon replied."
As soon as those words were spoken the girl jumped on the table, now just as tall as the male.
" i steel from who ever i wish!" she barked at the male
And as soon as that was said she jumped on her Elum whom was tied to the table, unhoked the leash and rode away.
" Damn her " the male shouted " come on Muds.
The trio of Mudokons clinged to thier Harnesses, boarded their Elums and were off. They could see the girl in the distance.
" Come on we need to catch up with her" the male shouted " shes going up the mountain"
The girl was heading up a steep mountain leading to the tribe of the mountain dreweds, Mudokon alchemist who prefer to work at night and did not like company. The girl reached the tribe with enough time to tell the dreweds of what was coming.
"masters Mudokons are coming" the girl panted.
" why is this, my child" the old one spoke very calmly.
" im not sure master" the girl said staring up at him on her neas.
The Mudokons arrived at the tribe, bearing tomahawks and Bows. they had body tatoos. they were warriors.
the oldest drewed spoke "why are you here"
"that girl stole from the gathering" yelled the male.
"did you do this my child" the drewed said putting his hand on her head. the girl said nothing.
" we are taking her to the gathering to return the food" said the male as he started toward the girl.
" you will not touch her yelled the drewed" as he through up his arms and created a force feild of energy and hurld it toward the warrior. the impact sent him flying as the others watched in horror, the fall alone would kill him. Suddenly a figure flew into the air and grabed the warrior before he fell, gently placeing him back on land. the figure then raised up from the ground and remained suspended in the sky.
"Kujo" yelled the elder drewed as he also took flight and met up with the now revealed shaman.
Kujo stared at the drewed and said " i dont want a fight i am here to take my warriors back, fighting over food is not worth the pain" Kujo said calmly
" I dont care what you want " barked the elder as he grined at Kujo. then he began to create a massive beam of energy. the alchemist were more like wizords who study destructive magic, wich is why no one would ever bother them. The beam was hurld at Kujo who dodge it and quickly reared up then lifted his warriors to the sky. they were know able to suspend themselvse in the air with the help of Kujo. The fellow dreweds joined them as a airiel fight was about to accure.


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well believe it or not i just made this here and now. I know it sucks. anyway i just thought i should write something.
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07-02-2002, 10:52 PM
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Wow, thats really good! I can't wait to read more.
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07-02-2002, 11:26 PM
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Kujo was quick to posses the dreweds wich he forced to strangle the elder.
" I see you have great power Kujo" he said in a choking voice as he flew his dreweds down and locked them in a force field.
" but now you cant do anything" the elder said as he rushed at Kujo, who quickly took the lifes of the dreweds so he could fight back. but it was to late the elder had Kujo by the throut and with one great swipe his hand glowed and decapitated Kujo in an instint. the warriors fell to the ground now powerless to fly.
"Kujo!!!" yelled the male.
" run boy, run to the gathering and tell everyone to leave, gather a group and i will guide you when you reach the oasis. now go!"
" yes kujo" said the male almost tearing for the life of his mentor. he ran with the others back to the gathering. The elder remained by Kujo.
" a life for a life" said Kujo. the elder stared at him and realized kujo was going to take him with him. As the warriors fled back a loud explosion could be heard followed by a blinding light and then silence.

Episode II the group.

Two days had past since the battle and still the town wept for there leader.
"We must be strong" said Mod the warrior who was at the fight. " Kujo has told me to gather a group"
"what for!" yelled a commoner "he must know there is no way we can make it to the Oasis.
" i will go" said a figure coming out of the crowd. it was Kumo the wise one of the town now that kujo has gone.
" I will go as well said a lonley Mud up in a tree.
" and so will I" said a glukkon.
" Ok i think we have enough.
The group began their long journey to the oasis.

There journey will begin but for now writers block has got the best of me. So i thought why dont i do a review. well this story takes place before the industrial age so Muds and Glukkons are still cool with each other. I have made up the dreweds to be the future bad guys of this story but you will later see what real evil they are up to. The ariel battle is a good scene that i like and yes Kujo took his life by exploding himself and yes the Elder is dead and so are the other dreweds. episode 2 is going to be very exciting but i dont want to get to into it to soon. the group is now only made up of 3 Muds and 1 gluk the mudarchers are not in the group but there will be more to come just give me time i wont keep you waiting long
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Great job, I hope Im not rushing you on this?
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07-04-2002, 08:24 AM
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yo kaimana your a great odd-writer!your stories rule!
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07-04-2002, 07:19 PM
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why thank you episode 2 is coming soon.
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