The new guy

mitsur · #1 02-26-2002, 11:36 AM

How is this?

(This happened before the happening and the Sligsquad)Ken was walking through Parimite Forest(It's the only safe place from glukkons in that time)when he saw somthing move across the ground. "Yummy! A parimite" he whispered.moving only when the parimite did'nt look at him, he caught it. Draging it to his house, he saw somthing watching his moves(and no it wasn't a parimite)

(anyone can join now,and tell me what you think)

dark_xinos · #2 02-27-2002, 07:46 AM

Nice start.

It was a different kind of fleech (a very big one) that had spikes along its belly so it could move faster (like a catterpillar). It started at him. Ken started to run...

( I hope that my reply wassent to bad...

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mitsur · #3 02-27-2002, 11:18 AM

(It's okay, but I did't have that in mind.I will make a person in this story for you) As ken was running he bumped into somthing.He got up, and said to the mudokon,"We have to get out of here! By the way whats your name?" "My name is Zac" (I cound't think of anything good)

dark_xinos · #4 02-27-2002, 01:13 PM

"Ok", Zac replied. "And you'rs is?" "Ken". "Lets go said ken". "Right" They started to run. Zac was following Ken, notecing that the fleech was ceeping up, "is that paramite heavy?" Zac asked. "I will manege" Ken replied.

(gotta go)

mitsur · #5 03-02-2002, 12:10 PM

"Are you saying to give the parimite to the fleech then kill it?"Ken asked Zac."Yeah.The parimite will destract it"Zac said.So Ken through the parimite body to the fleech and it started to eat it.Then taking carful aim,he fired at it with his crossbow.

dark_xinos · #6 03-03-2002, 10:47 AM

The arrow wissled trough the air and burried itself deep into the fleech. "Nice shoot said" Zac. "Lets go take a look at the paramite" was Kens reply. They walked over to the dead fleech and paramite. "Only the head it ruined" Zac said. "Ya dont eat that part anyway."

Al the Vykker · #7 03-03-2002, 12:33 PM

Is this an RPG, or a Fanfic? Not entirely sure. Just asking.

Teal · #8 03-03-2002, 12:38 PM

Looks like an add-on RPG-type fic, if you ask me...

dark_xinos · #9 03-03-2002, 01:00 PM

Its more a rpg game only we would probebly be kicked if we tried this there...

mitsur · #10 03-03-2002, 01:19 PM

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Originally posted by dark_xinos
Its more a rpg game only we would probebly be kicked if we tried this there...

Huh?

Anyway move this if you have to.

Okay back to the story.
"So Zac do you want to come to my house?I'll share my house with you if you don't have a home."Okay"Zac said.(and from that day on they were friends forever.But it's no over yet.)

dark_xinos · #11 03-05-2002, 12:50 PM

I sure hope that its not over yet... Ok. Time jump.(about a week)

One morning Zac whent up early, cuas he heard a strange sound in the distance. He grabed his spere (wich he maid a few days ago) and whent out to investigate. The sound was mechanic like from big machines. He climed up on a small cliff and att the foot of the cliff was...

mitsur · #12 03-06-2002, 11:58 AM

...a huge NEW glukkon indrustry!

dark_xinos · #13 03-08-2002, 11:49 AM

There where truckloads of stuff, just whaiting to be biuld! (i know thats sounds "ODD", he he)

Oh my god, said Zac. He ran back home and toled ken.

nads · #14 03-13-2002, 10:42 PM

word . Is Ken a mudokin ?
anyway , i'd say that your piece is
interesting .

nads · #15 03-13-2002, 10:44 PM

dark_xinos · #16 03-17-2002, 02:59 PM

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Originally posted by nads

Please try to ceep you're coments in the same post... An angry fuzzle dosent tell me much. And yes, hes a Mudokon

dark_xinos · #17 04-13-2002, 06:13 PM

"Oh, my oddness!" Zac said with his jaw hanging whide open.
"Ive got to tell Ken!". When Zac burst into the door at Kens house, Ken was already buissy making scrambeld slig eggs.
"There you are" Ken said. And Zac looked pantingly at him and told him what he had just seen.