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The Robotic Guard

After 4 and a half years of RPing, I decided to have a go at writing. I won't tell details about the story itself yet, it would just ruin the prologue.

Although I can tell that I enjoyed writing of the prologue, so I will definatelly continue. Don't expect a short, half finished story, I already have the plot in mind, and I will carry it out in the best way I can. I'm also planning to illustrate every chapter with a drawing, I'll attach one to the prologue as soon as it's finished.

Feedback's appreciated, as always.

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The Robotic Guard


Prologue

Cracks in the dry copper-coloured ground, coniferous plants, small reptilians in the shade of stones and boulders which have been desiccated by the sun for centuries – this is how most would describe a desert. Avoided by most animals, except the reptiles who prefer this environment instead of lush, colourful forests and jungles. Not that they had a choice – this part of Mudos was rather scarce on trees and water, yet alone woodlands. But at least they were safe from the creatures which kept clear of the desert. The animals of the arid lands have managed to survive in the inordinate climate, and have been passing their knowledge to their descendants instinctively.

Reptiles were rather limited in observing their environment in detail, – no disrespect, their ability of survival is unmatched – so the question of why did the sky turn from blue to light gray never arose among them. The only thing that mattered to them was the large, bright sphere above which provided heat, rose from behind the eastern mountains and descended on the western plains. As long as the sphere maintained its routine, the reptiles wouldn’t even be bothered if the sky turned green instead of its natural color. They needed sunlight, and they got it – nothing else mattered.

A bird was flying across the grey sky. Seeing as it was small and its beak was not hooked, it was not a carnivore. Suffice to say that with these physical aspects, this bird wouldn’t survive long in the desert – nonetheless, it was winging its way in the sultry air, high above the cracked ground. What could have driven this lone adventurer into the hazardous desert, we could ask. „Instincts.” – it would say, but this was just an ordinary bird, so let’s asume it was not gifted with the knowledge of any civilized language.

Having the advantage of the height, the bird saw more of the desert than the reptilians who inhabited the grounds. It saw the endless plains which were only disturbed by the mountains to the east and rocks scattered over the ground, accompanied by some plants. But the sky remained grey, should it be observed from ground or air. There was a good chance that the bird noticed this, but it wasn’t bothered – the unusual color didn’t prevent him from flying. It flew towards south, doggedly and undisturbed.

What would this bird find on the other side of the desert, we could ask. „Food, trees, other birds.” - it would say. The would be no point to question this – apart from the fact that the bird would remain silent if we did anyway. This knowledge has been passing from elder to descendant among its kind for generations. They flew across the desert once in a lifetime, to find the forests and seas on the other end, where food was plentiful and predators were rare. This journey was a test, maybe law among the birds – they set off when the time came, no matter what.

The lone adventurer kept on flying, examining the ground every now and then, looking for a river, or at least a puddle to lessen its thirst. But its hopes were low – no water as far as the bird could see. But the sun seemed to be fainter than before. It was definately an advantage from the bird’s point of view. It didn’t care that the sky was also darker than before, which would seem unnerving to most. There was not a single cloud on the sky, yet it grew darker and darker as the bird sped across it.

The first unusual thing it noticed was a long formation the bird never seen before. It was like a thin, spiked, dark-grey serpent which came from the eastern mountains and led to the south – exactly where the bird was heading. The serpent didn’t move, but the bird didn’t descend to see what it is exactly. It kept on flying, following its instincts.

The sky grew darker and darker, and the bird couldn’t ignore it now. Enormous dark clouds gathered to the south, casting a bodeful shadow over the bird’s journey. But it didn’t turn back, the destination was more important – and, clouds mean rain, rain means water, as it was taught.

The bird flew towards the dark clouds, accompanied by the grey serpent running underneath. After a while, it spotted another grey formation, but this one was as large as a smaller mountain. The bird ascended higher to have a better view of it, and to prepare to fly over it. But it was still far away, yet it was clear now that the grey mountain was under the mass of the dark clouds, and the serpent was leading to it. Maybe it was the lair of the grey beast.

As the bird drew nearer to the grey mountain, it couldn’t ignore some phenomenons about this mountain. First of all, the ground around it was covered with at least a dozen of smaller spiked serpents, making the land completely grey. Then, it seemed as the grey clouds came from the mountain itself. It occured to the bird that this could be a volcano, but why were the grey serpents around it? Noone in their right mind would choose a volcano as their lair… But was it really a volcano? It seemed unnatural, organised and random at the same time. Edges too distinguishable, cliffs too smooth…

Now, with the sky being grey, the land being grey and the mountain being grey, the picture cast fear into the bird. The air became harder to breath, stinging the bird’s lung as it advanced towards the mountain. But it had to carry on, this is just an obstacle, a test to pass, like the ancestors did before the bird. It decided to fly through the dark clouds instead of descending closer to the mountain. The last thing the bird saw was a yellowish symbol on the mountain’s cliff - maybe a head, it wasn’t clear…

The lone adventurer disappeared in the mass of smoke, and after a few seconds, he appeared again, falling towards the ground. It didn’t move a wing anymore, it sped downwards and finally landed with a soft thud. The bird lay there, surrounded by other dead adventurers who took the same journey as it did.

Why didn’t you turned back, lone adventurer, we could ask…

…The bird wouldn’t say anything anymore. It was just another victim of Rupture Farms…


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06-10-2007, 09:24 AM
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Oh I see you have time to write fanfics, but not to answer PMs. *crys*
Just kidding Dripik, nice story.
You have pretty nice imagery, I was able to view the desert quite easily.
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Yeah, I kinda forgot about that PM, Venks. But this story will answer it anyway, as I already said in my asnwer.
But thanks for the comment. Yeah, I'll try to write this in a way to make things easier to imagine.

Here's chapter one!

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Chapter 1 – Raw Recruit

Let’s return to the great spiked serpent which came from the eastern mountains and headed to the south, ending in the grey mountain where the unlucky adventurer’s journey has ended. The serpent was, in fact, a railway, suspended by massive iron supports. Joists and poles ran across the whole structure, thence sprang its spiked feature. The railway was the only sign of civilization in the middle of the desert, a gigantic artificial landmark across the arid lands. It seemed endless, one end hiding between the cliffs to the east, and the other end disappearing in the distance to the south.

A metallic noise came from among the cliffs. A monotonous, self-repeating noise, getting louder and louder. Then came the source of the racket – a train, closing in on the suspended railway, making its way across the mountains. The engine bore facial features: orange glowing eyes, stern frown, no nose, strong jaws. To put it simple, it looked like a Glukkon, the self-styled leader race of Mudos. They were the heads of the Industrial processes and establishments. Ironically, reason and logic thinking was not the strongest side of Glukkons. But they had a lot of Moolah – the standard currency of Mudos – so those who were not as succesful claimed them to be the bosses. And who were they to disappoint anyone by refusing the leading position offered?

So the Glukkons were in the lead. The Industrialists had a lot of companies, factories and other facilities all over the continent. The distance between the different establishments was usually large – maybe to make it harder for one company to spy on another – and to shorten the travelling time between them, FeeCo Depot was founded to house the trains. Glukkons prefered that the engines would resemble them – so nobody would forget who’s supposed to be praised for all the progress – and since then, FeeCo cariages were pulled by Glukkon heads all over Mudos.

Meanwhile, the train descended from the mountains and continued its journey over the desert. Its approach could be heard from miles, especially near the supports. For the animals who lived nearby, the immediate area surrounding the railway was a no-entry zone. Trains travelled too high to hit any of them, should they stand right under the railway when a train passes by. The umbearable sound was the real reason why they avoided the metallic construction.

The train was made up of the engine and several longer cariages. It was a passenger train, since freight was usually delivered in smaller containers. These trains were upheld for laborers and staff, transporting them to the facility they were assigned to. Workers didn’t volunteer for jobs individually. They were sent to different companies by the Magog Cartel, the main association of the Glukkons.

The Cartel decided how much workforce did a company need, not the other way around. If the company couldn’t cope with it, it collapsed over time, leaving its owner unemployed, only to be replaced by another Glukkon the Cartel had confidence in. This was the way how they kept their factories as efficient as possible. Recognised or not, the method worked. And, of course, it allowed the Cartel to gather a high amount of available workforce instead of sending a dozen of laborers to every single company and leaving the reserves empty.

The first and the last cariage contained the security force. The Cartel employed Sligs as guards and armed force. These creatures were generally senseless, greedy and trigger-happy. Glukkons made use of these characteristics by ordering them around, giving them money and equipment. And the Sligs obeyed gladly: they could manhandle the laborers and pursue their favourite pass-time activities: gambling, sleeping and smoking. Of course, they had to be careful not to cross the line, or they would be sent to the Slig Queen. And if that happened, the individual wouldn’t have to worry about buying the return ticket…

The interior of the first cariage was lit by a few lamps. It gave the impression of a prison, yet it was still better than the labor cariages, which were not lit by anything. The security cariages had a bench on both side – the labor cariages didn’t have anything except the floor, the walls and the roof. Sligs had slightly better conditions than Mudokons (the laborers cramped inside the dark cariages).



There were eight Sligs in the first cariage. Each of them had their bags at their mechanical feet. Next to the door, there was a Slig who was trying to have a nap on the bench, but the noise didn’t allow such comfort. So he ended up pretending to be sleeping. On the other side of the door, two Sligs were sitting on their bench quietly. The one sitting next to the door cast a scornful glance at the Slig sleeping on the bench. He leant closer to his neighbour on his right.

„Look who’s having a rough life there.”

The other Slig leant forward to have a better sight on the sleeping Slig. „Slacker. There’s no way he could fall asleep in this racket.”

They fell silent again, but after a few seconds, the second Slig added. „Five bucks if you throw his gear out the train.” They both started sniggering in a Sliggish way.

On the other side of the cariage sat the remaining five Sligs. Two of them were playing cards on the left side of the bench. There were two 2-Moolah-bills lying between them – presumably the bet of the round. The Slig in the corner seemed to be waiting for the other one.

„So, want another one or you’ll stick?” he asked.

„Damnit, Dealer, could you shut up for once?” exclaimed the other Slig. „Don’t try to distract me again!” They seemed to be the only Sligs who have been knowing eachother from earlier.

Next to them, sitting in the middle of the bench was a lone Slig. He watched the other Sligs quietly, occasionaly casting a quick glance at the card players to his right. On his bag was his identification number, and under it was the name „LOGGER”. To his left were the last two Sligs. One of them was apparently telling a joke to the other, laughing himself fit just by telling. The other one didn’t seem to get the point.

„And then a Scrab came in the bar with a Slig, and… now comes the best part…” said the Slig, shaking with laughter. The other Slig was waiting for him to finish, but his hopes were not high – his neighbour was rolling about, laughing his tentacles off.

„Time is ticking, you know.” said Dealer in the other corner. „We don’t have all day just to wait until you decide to draw another card.”

„We still have ’round 15 minutes before we arrive to the place, so… Hey, are you trying to talk me into drawing another one?”

„What?” asked Dealer, trying to sound innocent.

„Yeah, don’t try to give me that stuff. I’ll stick.”

„A’right.” said Dealer, drawing a card from the deck. The other Slig watched him, looking triumphant. Dealer checked the card he just drew and said. „That’s 25. House wins.” And with that, he collected the bet from the bench. „Hard luck, Batty.”

The Slig called Batty made furious Slig noises what Dealer ignored. „Those were my last bills, Dealer!”

„You can say goodbye to them, if you like. I have a rep to keep up.” said Dealer, being pleased with himself.

„…Then the Scrab says to the Slig, he says: Sorry fella, you have to stay outside. No animals allowed.” Said the Slig on the other end of the bench, finally finishing the joke.

„Uh-huh.” said the listening Slig. „Yeah.”

„Nah, you should’ve heard it as I did. The way that guy told these jokes… Simply hilarious, it was.”

The Sligs seemed to settle down after all this. They were sitting quietly, except the one next to the door. He was lying on his back, snoring occasionaly. The other seven listened to the engine as it carried them towards their new home – and workplace. They all wondered what will it be like. Newspapers were containing articles about the amazingly high efficiency and productivity this company was running with. Its products have been delivered to every part of Mudos, seeing that the factory was dealing in everyday products…

Loud screeching came from above. It meant that the train was slowing down – they were about to arrive to their destination. Batty got the attention of the wake Sligs in the cariage by waving an arm around. He pointed at the sleeping Slig in the corner and indicated that they should remain quiet if they don’t want to miss anything. So they were all looking at the Slig, who didn’t notice anything around him.

After a few seconds of waiting, the train finally came to a halt with a sudden jerk, making the sleeping Slig bump his head into the wall. They all laughed as the Slig got up, swearing and rubbing his head. He ignored the laughter and asked. „We there yet?” The door gave the answer: it opened up automatically, revealing a platform. They all grabbed their bags and got out from the cariage. A Slig was waiting for them outside with a sheet in his hand. The eight Sligs lined up in front of the Slig. Dealer was the first, Logger the next and the others behind them. The Slig looked at Dealer and asked. „Identification number?”

„1007-2541.” Said Dealer, raising his bag to show the same number on its side. Meanwhile, Logger had a look around the platform. The Mudokons were emerging from the middle cariages, supervised by the Sligs from the last cariage. The tall, greenish laborers showed signs of numbness and thirst. Nonetheless, they were harshly rounded up by the Sligs and they made their way through a door which lead into the factory.

„Identification number?” asked the Slig in front of Logger. Dealer was already heading towards another door, finished with administration.

„Uh, 1008-0065.” said Logger.

The Slig made a tick on the sheet with a pen then looked at Logger. „Everything’s in order. Welcome to Rupture Farms.” He said in a monotonous voice.

„Thanks.” Said Logger. He set off after Dealer through the door.
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Awesome opening. I can see you becoming really good at writing once you've had a little more practice. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
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As with the prologue great imagery. Can't wait to learn about the Robotic Guard.
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Thanks again. Here's what you've been waiting for.

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Chapter 2 – „Home Is Where You Work At”

Logger entered the building through the door, leaving the train platform behind. He arrived in a long corridor with several junctions up ahead. He watched the metal walls as he walked slowly. All of a sudden, he felt a bit lost. The greeter Slig at the platform didn’t tell him any directions. Dealer, who entered the door right before Logger, has already disappeared in one of the side corridors.

The Slig who was sleeping in the cariage caught up with him. „You hang around all day, no job left to take, no Moolah for you.” he said to Logger. Speech disorder was not unusual among Sligs – possibly a natural degeneration or he just didn’t make much effort in learning the standard Mudosian language.

„Right. I just… had a look at the place.” said Logger, and they both set off to find someone to direct them to their posts.

„This just plain factory, lotsa metal and machines. What’s name?” the Slig asked.

„Logger. Yours?”

„Spatch. This how it sound, my normal name in Sliggish.”

They arrived to the first junction of corridors. They could hear machinery working from there, a constant and repetitive set of clanking, rumbling and humming. Logger saw an information screen over their heads. He scanned it through and saw the word Administration with an arrow pointing to the left. He looked there and saw a Slig not too far away – Dealer. He was in front of a window which was separating him from was a Glukkon who was sitting in a small room.

Logger indicated to Spatch that they should follow Dealer’s example and sign in at Administration. Spatch nodded and they went to the booth. Dealer was waiting for the Glukkon to finish. While they were waiting, Logger took the time to examine the Glukkon. He was bespectacled, wearing a white shirt with a checked trouser with suspenders. He bore the appearance of a Pud (the lowest status of employed Glukkons). He was bending over the screen in front of him. Logger wondered how could he control the computer without arms – Glukkons were deprived from the normal use of their arms, since they used them as legs, which they lacked – but then he thought that he might be using a keyboard under the desk.

„So, 1007-2541… Yes, engine room hand, Boiler 14. Follow the Main Corridor – that’s the one you came in here – and take the lift down to level B1. The Main Engineer will tell the details.”

„Aye. Thanks, chief.” said Dealer in a near-mocking voice, then left. The Glukkon looked after him with an annoyed look on his face. Logger walked to the both’s window. „Good day.” He said to the Glukkon.

„Could be better. ID number?”

„1008-0065.” said Logger.

The Glukkon bent closer to the screen again. „1008-0065… Guard duty, Cafeteria on level 2. Go after that wiseguy and take the lift there. The others there will direct you.”

„Thanks. And, uh… Don’t know if you have been informed…” started Logger uncertainly. The Glukkon raised an eyebrow. Logger leant closer to the glass. The Glukkon did the same.

„They sent me because of the project.” said Logger, lowering his voice, so nobody else would hear.

The Glukkon looked at him for a second, trying to decide if the Slig’s lying or not. „I’ll have to check into that.” he said. He turned back to the screen again. Logger hoped that the Cartel didn’t just make this whole thing up as a reason to send him to Rupture Farms. He was a freshly qualified engineer and mechanic, and his skills were noted by Cartel officials. They offered him two jobs in the meat plant: he’s supposed to fulfill guard duty, like most Sligs do, and he was assigned to assist in a project as an extra shift. The Cartel told him the principles only, it was a job where Logger could learn more about engineering. Since he wanted to gain experience in a real environment instead of a trainee workshop, he accepted the offer.

But – as most people do in a stress situation – he had doubts. It would fit only too well for the Cartel to offer more than he would get. There might be no project at all – maybe it was just a cover for the real purpose. But as he thought about it again, he remembered that Rupture Farms was not so unpopular among Sligs that Glukkons would need to deceive them. A large factory, meat products, decent pay… It was not that bad.

Logger was brought back to reality by the Glukkon. „Yup, we received an attachement with your commendation info. It says you’re qualified as an engineer.”

„Yes, that’s right.” said Logger with relief.

„All right. I’ll just change your shift assignments…” said the Glukkon, and continued while typing. „I hope you didn’t go around boasting with this whole project thing. I was informed by the Board that it would be best if everyone kept quiet about it.”

„No, they told me the same. I didn’t tell anybody about it.”

„Good. Level 3, Room 1-3. Your colleagues will tell you the rest there.” said the Glukkon.

„Thanks very much.” said Logger and walked away from the booth.

Spatch stepped into his place, but he turned to Logger first. „Later, see you, Logger.”

„Yeah, see you Spatch.” said Logger and made it back to the junction. There he turned left and walked along the corridor. He wondered which level was on he exactly, since he could hear machinery from below. It appeared to him that these corridors were rather deserted. No Sligs running by, no Mudokons – though laborers would have been accompanied by guards, of course – not even a single crate among the walls. The whole place seemed to be rather clean – suspiciously clean. The walls were decorated with various posters, advertising different meat products of the factory. Logger had seen a lot of these posters in FeeCo Depot, at the Magog Labor Dispatch Building, even back in his training days. Rupture Farms sure made a high reputation over the years, and noone could say that it was gratuitous. The products were indeed of good quality – well, loads better than canteen food, anyway.

After leaving the colorful posters behind, Logger finally reached the lifts. There were four of them, two on each side of the corridor. Logger entered the first to the left. He was disappointed to see that it was nothing more than a winch platform. He put his bag down on the floor and grabbed one of the ropes, but he remembered again that he still didn’t know which floor was he on. After looking around in the shaft, he saw two numbers on the wall, encased in grey arrows. The number 5 was pointing upwards, while the number 3 in the opposite direction. This was enough info to start of with.

After taking the platform down to level 3, Logger stepped out from the lift shaft and looked around. The difference was evident from the level above: the walls were crudely knocked together with screws and torch welding. Pipes were running across them like a complex vertical labyrinth. The floor was not as clean as Logger experienced on level 4. That place must have been cleaned and waxed daily. As he set off to find someone for directions, he concluded in himself that the floor above must have been the visitor’s entrance too. The Board wouldn’t keep up an area that tidy just for Sligs.

Logger spotted a Slig standing near the wall up ahead. He was apparently fulfilling guard duty, since he was leaning on his gun, gazing down on an opening in front of him which might have led to another corridor. Logger walked up to the Slig, who just noticed him. He turned his head a bit to have a better sight at the newcomer.

„Hey there.” Logger greeted him. „Can you tell me where Room 1-3 is?”

The Slig stared Logger out of countenance, then replied. „Another greenhorn, huh?”

„Well, yeah… I’m kinda new here.” said Logger perplexedly.

„Take this catwalk here in front of me.” He pointed at the opening he was gazing at previously. Logger looked at it and saw that it was the way to a catwalk. He took a few steps to get closer and examined it. The catwalk arced over a production area which was a couple of levels below – possibly on the ground floor. Logger looked at the catwalk again, seeing that the rails were not exactly high. He didn’t feel like finishing his career by landing on one of the conveyor belts by accident.

The Slig behind him saw him hesitating. He took out a cigarette and a lighter. „Don’t expect me to hold your hand, Green.” he said, lighting the cigarette.

Logger didn’t answer but prepared himself and set off to cross over the depth, grasping the rail with one hand. Looking down from such a height is a grave mistake for those who are afraid of heights – but they do it anyway, on purpose or not. So did Logger. He saw the machinery, the conveyor belts, the Mudokons, the Sligs – all this criss-crossed by pipes and other catwalks. He convinced himself to quit the sight-seeing and continue walking towards his destination.

He was halfway across the catwalk when he heard a shout from behind. „Take the by-pass route next time. Only will take you another 2 minutes that way.” Logger was so annoyed to hear this that he almost forgot about being afraid and managed to get to the other side. He took a moment to catch his breath, and looked back. The Slig was waving at him while laughing hard. He must have sent Logger across the catwalk just for entertainment.

Logger turned away and set off to find Room 1-3. Meanwhile, he hoped that the project was some sort of gun that kills in a painful sort of way – he would recommend that ’helpful’ Slig as a test subject. The corridor he arrived to was much like the one he came from, except that it was a bit more narrow and had doors along the walls. There were all kinds of junk on the floor, neatly piled next to the doors. As Logger was looking at the door signs, he noticed that there were broken tools, devices and parts among the garbage. „This place must be the Maintenance area.” he thought. He finally found Room 1-3. After kocking on the closed door, he heard a high voice answering. „Come on in.”

Logger pushed a button on the control panel, and the door opened, revealing a cluttered room. The first thing he noticed was a repair table in the middle, lit by a lamp which hang from the ceiling. Surrounding the table were all kinds of containers, desks, cabinets, tool boxes and various machinery for metalwork, all this in a near-artistic jumble. Among the equipment, Logger spotted a purple-skinned, four-armed and three-legged creature – a Vykker – who was looking at him enquiringly, holding some papers he might have been reading earlier. „Can I help you?” he asked in the high-pitched voice Logger heard from outside.

„Uh, yes…” said Logger, distracted by the large, green-lenned device the Vykker wore over his left eye. „I was told to come here because…”

„Don’t tell me that grinder in sector B3 is malfunctioning again!” interrupted the Vykker with a pained expression on his face. „I spent my whole lunch-hour to get that thing running again.”

„No, no, it’s not that… You see, I…”

„Oh wait, you haven’t been around for long, have you?” said the Vykker, just noticing Logger’s bag. He rose from his seat, placing the papers on the repair table while eyeing the Slig. „Are you the trainee mechanic?”

After Logger nodded, the Vykker seemed to be relieved. „Ah, good. I’m glad you made it. I hope you had no trouble on your way here.”

Logger remembered the long train journey, the lack of info he got from the staff generally, and finally the Slig he met at the catwalk. „No, no trouble at all.” he said, walking up to the Vykker. „My name is Logger.” He offered his hand.

„And mine is Phyl Cobardon. Phyl for short.” said the Vykker, shaking Logger’s hand. „You can put your bag down in that room.” said Phyl, pointing at a door to the right. „You will find your bunks in there, too. You’re sharing the room with Smokey. He’s the third of us.”

„OK, thanks Phyl.” Said Logger. The Vykker nodded as a response, then picked his papers up again. Logger walked to the door and opened it. He entered a room even smaller than the workshop. There were metal poles, more tools and devices piled by the walls. The room also contained a rather dirty sink and a small tray of tin cups. He saw two Slig bunks attached to the wall. One was rather ruffled, so he guessed the other one was his. He dropped the bag next to his bunk, then returned to the workshop.

Phyl was sitting on a chair again, reading his papers. When he heard that Logger have returned, he beckoned the Slig towards another chair. Logger took the seat and watched the Vykker.

„Now, as you surely have been informed, we are working on a project here which is rather sensitive. The Magog Cartel didn’t want to make it public knowledge, in case someone would intervene.” Phyl stopped here, but Logger didn’t have any questions, so he continued. „We are about to design and construct a prototype security mechanism with artifical intelligence. An armed robot which would be used for security purposes, in other words.” The Vykker paused for a few seconds, allowing his words to sink in for Logger. „I am aware that you don’t have much experience, but the deadline of this project is not pressing, so you’ll find plenty of opportunities to learn from Smokey and me. We are both experienced mechanics, we have been in the job for decades. If you’ll have any questions, we… well, I won’t speak on Smokey’s behalf, but I will try to answer them to the best of my knowledge.”

„Um, thanks, that’s very helpful of you.” Said Logger, surprised by the Vykker’s readiness. „I’ll try to do the best I can.”

„I’m sure of that. Now, the Security Officer payed me a visit earlier and wanted me to tell you about your guard duties. You are supposed to appear at your guard post every morning and stay there until lunch hour. After you had your meal, you return here and help us with the project until end of shift. That’s all, I think.”

„OK. Shall I go and report to the Security Offficer now or something?” asked Logger.

„I don’t think that’s necessary. He must be aware of your presence now, he surely received your profile from the Administration. You can have an early shut-eye if you like, we don’t have anything to do with the project yet, I’m just reading through my notes about our course of work. Smokey will arrive later, I guess he’s talking with the guys at Maintenance Storage.”

„I see. Well, see you tomorrow, Phyl. Night.”

„Night, Logger. I’ll tell Smokey about your arrival, so he wouldn’t kick you out from there. He’s getting old, you know, he might see you as an intruder.” said Phyl, returning to his notes again.

„Yeah, thanks for that.” Said Logger, retreating into his room. He was about to get into his bunk, when he remembered his bag. He opened it and pulled out a bulky laptop from inside. He turned it on, then got into his bunk. After the computer finished booting, he opened his personal logs and started typing.

„Log #0587. I’ve made it to Rupture Farms. The route was rather long, I mostly watched some guys called Dealer and Batty playing cards until we arrived here. Luckily, everyone was aware here of why I came in the first place. And the project was not a hoax either. Though I imagined that they already have made some progress. The guys I work with are called Phyl and Smokey. I haven’t met the latter yet, but Phyl seems OK for a Vykker. I haven’t seen much of the factory yet, but what I have seen was enought for today. I stumbled across a catwalk on my way here, I’m rather exhausted, so I’m signing off now.”

Logger read it through again, then turned off the laptop, and settled down in the bunk, ready to fall asleep.


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Cool, looking forward to more. I'm guessing Smokey smokes a lot?
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I thought Smokey was actually some guy that had been known to put out fires. Oh well, I will see.

Dripik, great describations of the events happening in the story. This actually puts a great image in my mind. I can only wonder what will happen next in the story. (I do hope they name the robot RG-49)
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Maybe they'll name it RG-01? And then make 48 more.
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You will find out about Smokey, don't worry. It's not a great mistery.

Now I'll have to think of a reason where did RG's previous versions go...

I finished the illustration of Chapter 1 yesterday, I'll scan it and edit the post. No new chapter for now, I was busy today and have exams to study for, so I won't be posting daily from now on until the 23rd.

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My suggestion would be they were prototypes that didn't work so well. Later models might operate better though were replaced as better prototypes were made.
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Now I'll have to think of a reason where did RG's previous versions go...
I sent you a PM suggesting an idea that would entwine our stories just a little bit, I think it would be pretty hot.
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Nice drawing! I think the sligs are a little too tall, but other than that it was good.
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I liked that story a lot, Good work!
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Dripik, I sent you the revised version of my story. Tell me if this version is to your liking.
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After a few weeks of silence (which was caused mainly by the exams and my vacation last week), here's chapter 3. Loads of dialogues in this one.

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Chapter 3 – Gearing Up For Work

Logger suddenly woke up. He didn’t know what time it was. The room was dark, but that wasn’t a surprise, since there were no windows. He was still lying in his bunk, his laptop at his left. He looked around in the darkness – his visors allowed him to do that efficiently – but he couldn’t see anyone else there. So Smokey was still out, his bunk still empty.

Before he fell asleep, Logger wondered if he could fall asleep with all the rumbling coming from the lower levels. The metal walls transmitted the noise to every part of the factory. Work hours must have been long for the Mudokons, and therefore for the Sligs who supervised the laborers. Then Logger remembered that he got into bunk relatively early, so it wasn’t a big wonder that there was so much activity.

He heard a noise from the workshop which sounded like metal sliding over metal. Then voices, some coughing and finally the same noise from the room’s door – it slid open, revealing a Slig. He wore a single-eyepieced visor mask instead of the two-eyepieced version most Sligs, like Logger used. He was carrying a battered gun, which hit his ancient-looking pants as he made his way into the room, after closing the door behind him.

Logger pretended to be sleeping. He was sure that Phyl told Smokey that he was in the room, but still, he didn’t feel like jumping at an unsuspecting yet armed Slig from his bunk. Instead, he watched Smokey’s progress. The Slig – as Phyl pointed out earlier – was rather old, but he didn’t look too skinny or weak. Surely, the years must have made him tough. He was one of the oldest Sligs Logger has ever seen, including some of the officers at training. His pace was rather slow. Logger couldn’t tell if that was on purpose, because of the aging pants or just him being old.

Smokey leant his gun against the wall, next to a container. He walked to the sink, grabbed a cup and and filled it with water. After a violent set of coughs, he gulped the water at one go. He replaced the cup on its tray and set off to bed. Smokey got out of his pants and crawled into his bunk. After some more coughing, he settled down, turning around to face his pants.

Logger could only see his back now. The old Slig seemed to be sleeping in a few seconds, breathing steadily. Logger wondered how long has Smokey been working in Rupture Farms. He hoped he won’t have to spend his whole life in a meat plant, though he didn’t know much of the place then. Thinking about the guard duty he must fulfil the next day, he slowly fell asleep.


The next day, Logger was waken by some sort of knocking coming from his right. He opened his eyes and looked there, seeing the end of a gun on the floor. Smokey was standing next to him, with a cup in his hand and his gun in the other. „Drink this, then get working.” said Smokey, placing the cup on the floor and made his way towards the door.

„Hey, wait!” called Logger after him, scrambling out from his bunk. „Can I ask you some…” But Smokey was already gone. Logger stood there for a second. He expected the experienced Slig to tell him about the everyday life in the factory, the different areas, the workforce, even some of the Executives… Then he remembered that he was supposed to get to the Cafeteria on level 2. He reached towards the cup on the floor. It was hot to the touch, and it seemed to be some coffee-like substance. He drank it and placed the empty cup in the sink. The coffee brought him to his senses, ready to start the day. He walked out from the room.

The workshop looked much like yesterday. Phyl was sitting on the same chair, reading some papers while drinking a cup of coffee. When he heard Logger coming, he looked up. „Morning, Logger. I hope you could get some sleep.”

„Yeah, it was better than I expected.” said Logger. Phyl grinned.

„Good. Now, Smokey already left, I don’t know if he gave you some details of what to do.”

„No, not really. Ain’t I supposed to have a gun or something?”

„Yeah, getting a gun is a good start, especially when you’re a guard. Check the Armory at the end of the corridor, you can get one there.”

„I’ll do that. Thanks, Phyl.” said Logger.

„Later then.” Said Phyl, returning to his papers.

Logger left the workshop and closed the door behind him. The corridor was the same as yesterday, except that there were some people around. An unarmed Slig was pushing a trolley along the corridor to the right, passing a few cups into each room. He must have been the one who brought their coffee. Logger turned left and saw a door at the end of the hallway. He made his way towards it, occasionaly looking throught some of the open doors. Sligs were getting ready to work, carrying guns and backpacks, adjusting their masks and pants, drinking their coffee or smoking. These rooms were very much like the workshop: tools and machinery everywhere, accompanied by junk and spare parts.

Logger met a Slig coming out from one of the rooms. He approached him. „Morning. That room at the end is the Armory, right?”

The Slig stopped, looked at the door and answered. „Yup. Guns, gear, ammunition… Anything you need. For a certain price, of course.” he added.

Logger swallowed hard when he heard this. The Slig must have noticed this and laughed. „Short on cash, yes? It happens, fella. You shouldn’t put gambling before gear.”

„Uh, it’s nothing to do with gambling. This is my first job, you see.” said Logger.

„Oh. Well, the guys at Security are not stupid. They know that a guard without a gun might as well join the cleaning crew. They will find you a gun you can pay for. The Armory has a good selection of firearms. You can try bargaining, but it only works when you’re buying something they want to get rid of.”

„I see. Thanks for the help.” said Logger.

„No problem. And, as a word of advice, some Sligs here don’t take new guys too well. You know what I mean, right?” said the Slig, lowering his voice.

„Only too well.” sighed Logger, and glanced at the opening with the catwalk he crossed yesterday.

The Slig noticed this. „You met Mockle out there, at the catwalk? Well, he’s a good example of what I mean. You better not show that you’re new here.”

„Good idea. I won’t keep you now. Later.” Said Logger, heading to the Armory.

„See ya.” Said the Slig, joining some others who were going in the opposite direction.

Logger arrived to the end of the corridor. It was less littered, but he still saw a few empty cartridges and ammo clips on the ground. At least it proved that he was at the right place. He opened the door and entered the Armory. It gave the impression of a well-kept storeroom, with multiple rows of shelves, each holding all kinds of weapons, Slig gear and other devices. There were two Sligs in the room. The first was sitting behind a metal desk in the corner to the right. He was wearing good quality pants and mask, showing that he was leading the place. The Slig was looking at the screen of his computer on the table, then he noticed Logger. He beckoned him to come over.

„What do you want, kid?” His voice told Logger that he’s speaking with an older Slig, though not as old as Smokey.

„Hey there. I’d like to get some kind of gun.” said Logger.

„Sure thing. ID number?” asked the Slig, turning to his screen again.

„1008-0065.” said Logger. The Slig pressed a few keys, read a few lines on the screen, then turned back to Logger, getting out of his seat. „Allright then, come this way.”

They approached the metal shelves, which were lit by built-in lamps. They stopped at the middle of the aisle they were in. The Slig clapped his hands together. „So, what would it be? Shotgun? Carbine? Assault rifle?” He pointed at the different guns stored on the shelves. „The cost might be high for these, but it’s worth it, let me tell you.” He reminded Logger of the businessmen he saw previously. When it comes to selling, they immediately move into action.

„Well, actually, I’m looking for something under the price of…” Logger broke off for a moment when he saw the cost of an expensive long rifle next to him. „…One hundred Moolah.”

„One hundred?!” asked the Slig disbelievingly, then pushed Logger out of the way, making his way back towards his desk. „Talk to my assistant, I don’t have time for small deals.”

„Thanks.” Logger called after him scornfully. He looked around, trying to figure out where the mentioned assistant was. He walked to the end of the aisle, and looked down on the neighbouring ones, but he didn’t see anyone.

„Logger?” a voice asked from behind. Logger span around and saw a Slig standing there, with a thin cleaning instrument in his hand.

„Uh, yeah. How do you know my name?”

„Me Spatch, remember?” said the Slig.

„Oh, sorry. I didn’t recognise you.” said Logger. „You’re looking for a gun, too?”

„Gun to wield, no. Gun to clean, yes. I’m assistant here, helping Barge with business.”

„I see.” Said Logger. He figured that Spatch’s only duty was to clean the guns, and not to take part in the business itself. „Anyways, your boss told me to look for you. I’d like a cheap gun, preferably under one hundred.”
„Barge likes no small cred, cares for good deals only, he said. Come, I show some guns for you.”

Logger followed Spatch among the shelves until they arrived to a corner where some low class shotguns and pistols were stored. Most of them were a bit rusty and battered.

„This place deals with used guns too, then?” asked Logger.

„There some used weapons, yes. But not all. Barge proud of good guns, he thinks them as trophies, things to collect. That why prices high for them.” said Logger, picking up a pistol from the shelf and started cleaning it. „Check guns, take to Barge what you like, you pay there.”

„OK. Thanks, Spatch.” Said Logger, checking the weapons on the shelves. He examined some of them, picking them up and aiming at different points in the room. He decided to buy a pistol in the end, since he needed ammo too, which would also cost him some Moolah. He picked up two ammo clips for the pistol and walked back to Barge’s desk. The Slig watched him as Logger placed the items on the metal desk. Barge checked the pistol. „A Mergson-80 automatic pistol, used, 73 Moolah. And two clips, 8 Moolah each. That’s 89 Moolah.”

Logger opened a compartment on his pants, and pulled out a few bills and coins. He gave the money to Barge, then recovered his new pistol and the clips from the table. Barge put the Moolah in a metal box which was on the shelf behind him. Logger left the room without saying anything to Barge. The business Slig did the same.

Outside, Logger loaded one of the ammo clips into the pistol, pulled the slideback of the gun and put the other clip into a holding compartment of his pants. He looked at the pistol again. The name ’Mergson’ was indeed imprinted on the handle. It looked a bit old, but it seemed to function. Of course, he will find that out the first time he shot with the pistol. With that, he set off to his guard post.

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Woo, good stuff. Nice intro to various characters. looking forward to more!
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Great way to introduce the main characters in the story and how to explain how things are done in the factory. That gave me a clear perspective. I never knew you had to pay to get a weapon in the Armory....

Good chapters! I'm sure there will be more to come.
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This is not like the Armory you know from W@RF. I thought Sligs must have a place where they could spend the money they earn. And what do they like the most?... Weapons, gear, all that stuff.

OK, a new chapter done. I liked writing this one, made up a few new characters to make things more interesting.

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Chapter 4 – Supervised Catering

The factory was springing back to life as the sun rose above the desert in the distance. One could only imagine this phenomenon. The rusted, grey walls of the meat plant haven’t seen clear, undisturbed sunlight since the towering smokestacks started effusing smoke towards the sky. Every day began with a sunrise, which transfered into sunset and finally into darkness. Noon was missing from the daily schedule, rendering a monotonous twilight over the factory.

Nobody bothered about this inside Rupture Farms. The workers, guards and their superiors were separated from the world which was on the other side of the factory walls. Mudokons were always led to their workposts by Sligs. They lost their sense of time over the months of toil in the meat plant. If one of them dared to ask the time from one of the guards, the reply would have been ’beating time’, and the punishment would be carried out accordingly. Because of this, Mudokons could only orientate themselves by the main events of the day: the loud and occasionaly violent wake-up call meant morning, the tasteless muck – which was somehow related to the leftover meat chunks from the grinders, as Sligs always told – in front of them meant noon, and their return to the sleeping quarters meant night.

Between these events, the workers had to be at the workpost they were assigned to. Operating the conveyor belts, grinders, carrying containers – just to name a few. Cleaning counted as an elite position on the worker’s ladder. Mainly because the only places which needed cleaning were those corridors which were used by Executives and their visitors. The Glukkons didn’t bother to use their resources for keeping the working area clean – it wouldn’t bring any profit. But the visitors, who came to the factory to sign contracts, or at least place an order on meat products, were more important. The Executives wanted the visitor’s entrance, the neighbouring corridors and the fifth level to look as convincing as possible. So Mudokons who were assigned to clean these areas were literaly above their unfortunate brothers.

Logger had found his way back to the platform he used the previous day. He quickly descended to level 2, where his post supposed to be, in the Cafeteria. He arrived to a corridor which was in worse condition than any he saw before. Logger halted, his mechanical feet rested on the slightly damp floor. The air was different from what he got used to since he arrived. It was a mixture of steam, the smell of meat and rusted metal. All in all, it wasn’t exactly pleasant, but that was to be expected. The walls were patched with various sheets of metal and decorated with yellowing posters. But as far Logger could see, there were no signs. He didn’t know where the Cafeteria was.

He set off to the right, trying to find someone for directions. Meanwhile, he examined his surroundings in detail. To his right, pipes were coming up from the floor, bending to follow the ceiling and disappearing in the wall to the left. Logger thought this could mean that one of the many production sections was on the other side of the wall, and the boilers were, naturally, underneath. He remembered the Slig called Dealer taking a platform down to the boilers on level B1 the previous day when he arrived. He wondered what could be on the levels between B1 and 2. His first guess would have been more machinery, but then he remembered the Mudokons. They must have had sleeping quarters somewhere, not to mention the Slig’s quarters, other Cafeterias, equipment storages… A factory is not only made of machinery.

As he walked along the corridor, he checked the posters on the walls. Most of them were advertising products, just like the ones on level 4, except that these were not framed and colorful, but stained and yellowing pictures. Logger noticed that the newest posters were depicting a Mudokon next to a floor waxer machine. According to the title, he was the Employee of the Year. Under the picture was the name Freg.

As he walked along the corridor, watching the various posters, he reached a junction where he bumped into a Slig he didn’t notice. They both staggered a little, regaining their balance. Before Logger could apologize, the Slig took a swish with his baton, nearly missing Logger’s head, emphasising his intention with a nasty grunt.

„Sorry, sorry, didn’t notice you, it was an accident!” said Logger, trying to calm the Slig down, while taking a few steps back.

Instead of attacking Logger, the Slig froze for a moment, then lowered his baton, looking at Logger with mild interest. Logger thought of this as a good sign, though he found it strange that the Slig hasn’t even said a word yet.

„Well, yeah… You see, I’m looking for the Cafeteria. I don’t know where…” as he said this, he realised his mistake, remembering what the Slig told him before he went to the Armory. He should at least pretend like he has been at the factory for months. Apparently, the Slig didn’t notice this, since he didn’t show the slightest sign that he understood what Logger just said.

„Anyway, do you know where it is? I need to go there, there’s my guard post.” He hoped that putting in some detail might make things clearer for the Slig. His hopes were too high, though. The Slig scratched his head with the baton, while grunting quietly.

„You know, the place with tables and chairs. Where people eat food.” Logger came close to a mocking tone, miming eating. He was starting to get impatient, which didn’t happen very often. He had met some degenerates in his life, but those Sligs were at least able to use and understand some basic words. But this case beat all of them. It came to his mind that the Slig might have been acting stupid on purpose, making things harder for Logger. Nonetheless, it was rather annoying.

Another Slig appeared behind the baton-wielding one. He looked like he has been in the meat plant for a few years. He was carrying a shotgun, which was enough proof that this Slig had more experience than him. Or more money, it didn’t matter. He seemed to know his way around the place.

He approached the Slig Logger tried to communicate with. „There you are, Dim. You better get back to your post, you know Zero is not forgiving about these things.” He just noticed Logger. „And what’re you doing here?” he asked in an offensive tone.

„I’m sear… heading to the Cafeteria.” Logger tried to avoid the mistake he made earlier. „And who are you two?” he asked from the Slig. „I tried to talk to your friend here, but he’s not very talkative.”

„Big wonder, that. His brain is totally mangled, we don’t know why. No point asking him though, right?” said the Slig, sniggering a bit on his own joke. „He’s not exactly dangerous, more like to himself. He could get lost here, or examine a meat grinder from up close, if you get my drift.”

„I guess I do. Sounds a bit like you’re babysitting him.” These words came out before Logger could realise what he was about to say. He watched how would the other Slig react, thinking of how could he defend himself if the other attacked.

It seemed that the Slig didn’t take it as offense, in fact, he sniggered some more. „Well, it’s not just me, there are a few others at the Cafeteria who don’t mind keeping an eye on him. Some others think Dim – oh, that’s his name – is annoying.”

Logger scratched his neck. „Wonder why would they say that.”

„Go figure.” Said the Slig. „Anyway, he can do his job when there’s some action going on. Of course, we’d rather not give him a gun, so he’s on the ground level of the Cafeteria, watching over the Mudokons when they stuff their faces at noon. If any of them complains or does something… undesirable, the baton Sligs take care of them. If things get real nasty, we take care of it from the catwalks. Simple.” He raised his shotgun. „My name’s Croe.”

„And mine’s Logger. So, shall get back to the Cafeteria?”

„We better do.” Said Croe, turning Dim around and leading him forward. They went down the corridor to the right. At the end, a large hall came into view. „I haven’t seen you around here before.”

„Yeah, they… transfered me here yesterday.” Said Logger.

Croe nodded and remained quiet. They walked towards the hall. Logger now could tell appart the grey tables and benches from the wall. After a while, he asked Croe. „Say, who’s that Zero guy you mentioned earlier?”

„I’d rather explain when we’re up on the catwalks.” Said Croe, lowering his voice while looking around. A security camera was sweeping the corridor from the ceiling. Logger looked at Croe questioningly, but the latter shook his head. They carried on towards the Cafeteria.

„We take this here.” Said Croe when they were about to enter the hall. He pointed towards a platform to the right, built into the wall. Then, he addressed Dim. „OK, you go and take your post. You know, there, near the benches.” He pointed where Dim was supposed to go. The Slig seemed to understand this. He let out a low grunt, and walked inside the Cafeteria.

Croe led Logger on the platform. They ascended to the catwalks, which ran along the four walls of the Cafeteria, a few meters above the ground. A few Sligs were already up there. They greeted the newcomers with nodding. Logger and Croe walked around the hall to the other side, so they could see the entrance they came from. Croe leant on the railing and looked down at the benches. Meanwhile, Logger took a moment to examine the hall.

The tables were almost as long as the width of the hall, and the benches were of the same lenght. They were completely empty, except for stains of grime and Odd only knew what else. He turned to Croe, joining him at the railing. „Say, where’s the food coming from?”

„Food?” asked Croe, looking at Logger. „That’s not exactly the right word in my standards, but I get your point. The kitchen is down underneath us. The Mudokons line up before it and get their portion of muck. After that, they sit down, eat, then they are escorted back to the processing line.”

Logger imagined that treatment for Mudokons couldn’t be any better here than other places. „What do they get to eat exactly?”

„Heh, that’s the local speciality. Meat, scrubbed down from grinder blades, collected in buckets, mixed with some of the expired products and minced into a stew-like substance. Best served when cold.” Said Croe in a lofty voice. When he saw Logger’s bewilderment, he added. „Almost makes you wish you were among them, eh?”

„Almost.” Said Logger sarcastically. „I nearly envy them.” After a few minutes of silence, Logger asked. „And, what do we get to eat?”

„Don’t worry, our meals are better than what the workers get. Naturally.” Added Croe. „Mostly unprocessed meat, cooked or roasted. But sometimes we get some of the meat products too. On special days, like when the big boss is in a good mood or something.” He pointed towards the ceiling with his thumb. „But that’s pretty rare, mind you, so don’t expect too much for lunch. And we get coffee, of course.”

„Yeah, I know that.” Said Logger. „So, what’s so special about that Zero guy?”

„To put it simple, he’s the Head of Security in Rupture Farms. Not technically, of course, a Glukkon called Bernov is the real boss of Sligs. Zero is just his lapdog, but that doesn’t mean he’s not respected among us. He’s like a spokesperson of Bernov, and he takes part of the security tasks. His ego is rather high because of his position. Wearing armor all the time and carrying a special energy weapon… I think he got that from the Vykkers, not sure. And if that was not enough, just think of his name.”

Logger thought about it for a second. „Zero?… I don’t know about you, Croe, but that sounds rather pathetic to me.”

„From a certain point of view. Think of the dozens of Sligs who are all identified by their ID numbers. Zero thinks he's better than all of us, so he puts himself to the first place. But that’s already taken by number 1, so he became Zero, which is before number 1. Tricky, huh?”

„Yeah. Real genius.” Said Logger wearily.



They watched the Cafeteria silently. Minutes were passing slowly, while Logger wondered why did the Cafeteria need guards if it was completely empty that time of the day. The other Sligs must have got used to the boredom, but after the months of training, it was unusual for Logger. Croe passed the time by lighting a cigarette occasionaly, and humming to himself. Logger decided to clean his pistol a bit. He rubbed the stained barrel with his fist, with no particular effect, but at least it helped time to pass faster.

After a while, Croe spoke. „I think the Mudokons are coming.” Logger could now hear dozens of thudding footsteps and quiet conversing from the corridor, occasionally interrupted by a Sliggish cursing and a louder thud. Logger looked around at the other Sligs, trying to find out how they react on the approaching workers. They had their guns at the ready, watching the opening where the Mudokons were about to appear. And they did. A large number of the tall, green-coloured laborers walked into the Cafeteria, aligning in front of the kitchen. They were looking around nervously, some of them eyeing the Sligs on the catwalk, others looking forward, eager to get their meal. The line slowly progressed, and those who got their portion went to the tables and took a seat.

Croe drew a last whiff from his cigarette and threw the stub into the line. It hit a Mudokon in the head, who hissed when the stub burnt his skin. He looked up, but rearranged his expression and pretended like nothing happened. „Amazing. They fear us.” Noted Croe. Logger looked at him, then back at the Mudokon, but didn’t made his opinion audible. He wasn’t a supporter of these laborers, and didn’t object against necessary violence towards them, but humiliation was maybe a bit much.

The Mudokons all sat down to the tables and started eating. Logger saw that the food was just as tasty as he imagined, after he heard Croe’s description. Some Mudokon started eating the disgusting substance, knowing that it’s the only meal they get that day – eat it or leave it. Others were not so pleased with the food, but ate nonetheless.

Suddenly, Logger noticed a heated conversation between two Mudokons in the middle of the Cafeteria. One of them pushed his tin plate aside indignantly, while the other indicated him to shut up and keep eating. The other seemed to reach boiling point. He stood up, grabbed the plate and flung it across the hall. It flew over the heads of the Mudokons who eyed it with their mouth open, following it with their eyes until the plate shattered on the wall, leaving a large splatter of minced meat on it. The Sligs above leant over the railing, trying to see the result of the throw.

Every eye was on the mutinous Mudokon. He looked around cautiously, looking at his brothers. „I had enough!” he shouted. „Why are we…” He broke off when a Slig ran to him, ready to swing his baton. The Mudokon was ready for that move – he grabbed the baton, and pulled it while reversing between the rows of benches. The Slig, who was still holding the baton, lost his balance because of this, and landed on the ground with an audible thud. The Mudokon bent over the Slig and took a massive swing with the baton to the Slig’s head. The Slig didn’t move.

There was silence. The Mudokon stood up and called to everyone generally. „I have enough of the broken promises! We hear them all the time! Edible meals, good workhours! Empty words, all of them! I became Employee of the Year. But was there any difference? No!” he shouted, brandishing the baton. Some Mudokons shook their heads wearily, some looked at eachother, while one on the other end of the Cafeteria called out loudly. „Well said!”

Logger looked repeatedly from the Mudokons at the Sligs, then back at the Mudokons. He nudged Croe. „Shouldn’t we do something? Or the others down there?” he asked.

„Let’s wait some more. This might get interesting.” He said. Logger looked at him questioningly, but Croe nodded reasuringly. Logger turned back to see the Mudokon in the middle. Now he recognised him as Freg, the Mudokon he saw on the posters, who continued speaking to the others. „…we all deserve more for our work than broken promises!”

„You want a promise to come true? Well, I promise you, this will hurt.” Called a voice at the Mudokon. Everyone in the Cafeteria looked around, looking for the source of the sound, but before anyone could spot anything, a bright bolt of energy sped across the hall, striking into the Mudokon. He cried out in pain, dropping the baton, and finally collapsed on the floor. His skin seemed to be a few shades darker, and smoke rose from his whole body.

Logger finally spotted the source of the voice and the killer bolt. At the far end of the catwalk stood an armored Slig, holding a complex weapon in his hands, pointing it at the middle of the hall, where the mutinous Mudokon stood seconds before. He lowered the device. „What do you know? It was painful.” He called at the corpse.

„His Ferociousness, Zero the only, in his full might.” Noted Croe quietly behind Logger.
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Awesome chapter, Dripik! Finlly some action!

At the mention of batons I had a thought, since this is supposed to be a prelude to W@RF. I reember in W@RF 1 there was a slig called Obi who had worked in Mullock's Rupture Farms, who was armed with a baton and kept a skateboard hidden in the factory. I think there might have been other W@RF characters who once worked in Rupture Farms, though I can't remember any in particular. Anyway, it would be cool for some of them to make an appearance.
The other thing I thought of (which I'm guessing crossed your mind, too) was Abe; is he working there at this moment in time? Was he one of the mudokons that worked 'upstairs', since he 'thought he had a good job'? Will Logger ever notice a mudokon with odd-coloured skin?
And also, what happens to Logger when Rupture Farms shuts down? Will he still be present or will he have left by then? Will he be killed by Abe?

One last thing was that in Abe's Oddysee, I think in tunnel 2, there was a mudokon worker to save who appeared to be cleaning a cope of the Rupture Farms logo on which someone had drawn a pair of glasses and a moustache. The rest of the tunnel is covered in graffiti so maybe it's the glukkon's vanity making them order the mudokon to clean the picture? Just thought of that when you started talking about keeping the factory clean (or not keeping it clean, as the case may be).

Phew, long post!

EDIT: Looking back, turns out Havoc's charater, Nick worked at the old Rupture Farms. This could be a problem since he was a high-ranking mechanic. Of course, you could ignore it altogether and I'm sure no one would mind. It's up to you, or you could come up with some reason for him not to be involved in the RG thing.
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I never get tired of your work Dripik. I don't know how you do it but when I read these words the images appear so easily to my mind. Keep up the good work!
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Very impressed with this chapter. It clearly shows what kind of life a Mudokon and a Slig has in this factory. I'm utterly flabbergasted by this new style that you have been using in the past chapters. Only inspires me more to continue writing I write now in RPGs.

I loved the scene of the Mudokon making a speech toward the entire crowd. Although, that Mudokon had a lot of nerve. The Mudokon must have known that by causing a disagreement with the brainwashed knowledge that they have, he would be shot. The others, would only be left with the idea that they were in danger and were scammed from a living. Assuming all of the Mudokons listened to Freg. So did this Mudokon die to save the others? If so, I appluad him. If he did it just to make a point and did not think for once that he would get killed for, one, assulting a Slig security member, and two, causing a speech, then well. I like the idea, but not why he did it then.

I still can't wait to see if other characters will get involved, and when does the Robotic Guard come in play.
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Most of those questions shall be answered in the right time. I already have some ideas, don't worry.

Freg was just a Mudokon who was fed up with the treatment he got. He though he deserved better than the rest, seeing that he was higher on the ladder. No particular role in the story.

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Chapter 5 – Technical Difficulties

Logger watched the armored Slig walking slowly towards them on the catwalk, while adressing the petrified Mudokons, who didn’t dare to help their fallen brother. „Those who have problems with our promises shall speak now and suffer the same fate as that scumbag in the middle. It wouldn’t be trouble at all, don’t get me wrong. I’ve been eager to test my bolt caster anyway.” Said Zero in a smug voice. He stopped a few meters away from Logger and Croe, and looked down at the crowd. He waited for a few seconds, and, when nobody spoke, continued. „Good. I’m glad noone disagrees with our methods.”

He turned to the Sligs who gathered under the catwalk. „Take care of the remains. And you, my friend…” he turned to the Mudokon at the other end of the hall. „…you deserve a few hours in the Detention Chamber for supporting Mr. Crispy here.”

The Mudokon froze in horror as the baton Sligs walked along the tables and grabbed his arms. „No. No, please!” he called at Zero, then at his captors. Croe shook his head unbelievingly next to Logger. „Tsk. When will they learn? Pleading to a Slig like Dim…”

Logger looked at the baton Slig who was pulling the Mudokon off from his seat. He recognised him as Dim, the loud grunts confirmed this. The Slig apparently had enough of the gibbering and smacked the Mudokon out cold with the baton. The two Sligs pulled the Mudokon towards the exit, his feet scraping the floor as they made their way towards the Detention Chamber. Meanwhile, another Slig pulled the corpse away in the opposite direction, and disappeared under the catwalk. Logger looked back at Croe. „Why is he pulling him in the kitchen?”

Croe seemed to be lost in thought for a second, then said. „Oh, yeah, the secret ingredient! I almost forgot about it!”

Logger fought the urge of retching all over the Mudokons’ heads underneath. Instead he watched the knocked-out Slig regaining his conciousness. He stood up, looking around awkwardly. Zero called at him from above. „Quite embarassing, losing your baton to a Mudokon, isn’t it? Too bad you can’t just disappear like Mr. Crispy, eh?” He let his words some time to sink in for everyone. „I’ll report this to Bernov. Expect a cut of your payment.” As a conclusion, he addressed all the Mudokons. „Looks like we need a new Employee of the Year…”

With that, he turned back and walked towards the corner where he came from. Logger watched him as he made his way towards an opening in the wall and disappeared. Meanwhile, the Sligs who escorted the Mudokons were shouting orders to the laborers. The Mudokons got up from the tables noisily, and let the Sligs lead them out of the Cafeteria.

Logger turned to Croe, momentarily short on words. „Is Zero always like this?”

„Most of the time, yeah. He makes sure that Mudokons don’t start spreading propaganda and stuff like that. Always making an example out of how rebels end up. But sone of them get broken under the pressure and goes nuts like that guy. You saw him, he was desperate to stand up for his so-called rights.”

„Yeah. Maybe you’re right. I guess that energy bolt disorientated me a bit, that’s all.” Said Logger, while they walked back to the platform they took some hours ago.

„Shocking when you first see it, yeah. All we have are these traditional guns…” he raised his shotgun a little. „…while Zero has a top-notch-overkill-disruptor thing.” They got on the platform, and Croe started pulling the ropes.

„That gun must use a lot of energy to create a bolt as powerful as that was. And the way I saw it, Zero didn’t have any energy packs on his back, so the gun might be functioning with a built-in energy cell, which needs frequent recharging. From this point of view, a simple pistol like mine is loads more lethal.” Said Logger casually.

Croe stopped pulling, making the platform stop. „You really got this mechanic sort of stuff in your head, don’t you?” They continued descending and arrived to the Cafeteria’s level.

„Comes in handy when you’re a mechanic, actually.” Said Logger. They were walking towards the kitchen.

„A mechanic? So you’re a half-shifter?”

„Yeah, I have to… give Maintenance a hand in my other half.” Said Logger cautiously. Even though the project hasn’t started yet, he didn’t want to tell anyone about it.

They walked to the kitchen counter, where the other Sligs were already getting their lunch from the Mudokons working there. Logger found it strange that the factory employed Mudokons as kitchen workforce, too. He wondered how could the laborers make such disgusting meals for their brothers... Not to mention meals which contained mutinous Mudokons. Then he spotted a couple of armed Sligs inside, watching over the cooks. Their presence explained it all.

One of the Mudokons pushed a plate of roasted meat into Logger’s hand. He seemed to be avoiding eye contact with the Sligs, which was somewhat understandable to Logger. He followed Croe to a table and sat down. They ate quietly, possibly thinking of the events they just witnessed. Logger found the food relatively good, but he wasn’t as hungry as before. He unwillingly kept looking for pieces of cloth or hair on his plate.

After he finished, he bid farewell to Croe and headed back to the corridors. On his way back to the Maintenance area, he saw other Sligs who were going towards the Cafeteria, longing for a good meal. He suddenly remembered Smokey. He didn’t mention where his guard post was. But, then again, he didn’t mention anything else either. Logger hoped it was only because of morning weariness, which might have disappeared after the coffee.

He took the platform up to level 3 and saw the Slig he met the previous day, before he walked across the catwalk. They glared at eachother while Logger headed towards the by-pass route. With a pistol in his hand, Logger felt more confident than when they last met. The Slig must have noticed Logger’s new sidearm, and remained quiet. Logger booked this as a minor victory and proceeded towards the Maintenance area. Along the way he met other Sligs guarding the corridors – chatting, smoking and dozing off, in other words. Either way, everything seemed to be quiet and calm. Only the sound of the factory rumbling underneath broke the monotony.

Logger arrived to Room 1-3. He knocked on the door and opened it. Phyl and Smokey were already in the workshop. They seemed to be discussing something, but they broke off when they saw Logger entering the room. The Vykker seemed to brighten a bit of Logger’s arrival, but Smokey remained unconcerned.

„Ah, good. Did everything go well on your first shift?” asked Phyl.

„You could say that. Except that I saw a Mudokon get roasted.” Replied Logger, closing the door behind him.

Phyl looked surprised, but it was Smokey who spoke first. „Zero and that bolt caster.” He picked up a box of cigarettes from a nearby desk, and lit one. After a few whiffs, he continued. „Always uses it when there’s some distraction…” he was broken off by a set of coughs.

Phyl sighed. „I can’t say I approve that the Vykkers Conglomerate tests that weapon in a factory environment. Being so powerful and mentally shocking, its presence might demoralize the workforce.” He shook his head, then looked at Logger. „Well, we were just talking about our project here. I came up with an idea today, while you two were out for guard duty.”

„That’s crazy, Phyl. We don’t need outer sources to…” interrupted Smokey.

„As I was about to say…” said Phyl loudly. „…I came up with the idea, and set it before Smokey to get his opinion about it. As you can see, he disapproves.” He glared at Smokey.

„It doesn’t make sense at all. We always handled designing ourselves. Buying finished schematics would eat up half of the funds we have.”

„It doesn’t mean that we can’t change those schematics once we have them in front of us! It saves us a lot of time!” said Phyl heatedly.

„It saves you a lot of time, not me! You rarely allow me to touch the blueprints you work on!” retorted Smokey.

Logger saw that an arguement was about to start, so he cleared his throat. „What’s going on exactly?”

Phyl looked at Logger. „I insisted that we should buy a finished schematic of a security robot I saw on Magog InfoNet…”

„The schematics of the RG series!” called Smokey suddenly. „The RG series, I ask you. It’s suicide!”

„Our friend here is refering to the fact that previous attempts of perfecting the RG unit have resulted in premature malfunction and self-destruction.” Said Phyl between gritted teeth. „Nobody ever managed to solve this problem, but tried nonetheless, since the design itself is rather promising.”

„And you think we can solve the problem?” asked Logger, uncertain about Phyl’s idea.

„Definately. I have a few guesses of what the problem could be. And, as I said yesterday, we are not in a hurry, we have time to analyze the schematics in detail.”

They all remained silent for a while. Then, Logger spoke. „I just wonder why noone ever managed to find out what causes the malfunction. There should be a detailed description of every component of the robot, right?”

„I guess there should.” Said Phyl. „Maybe a component is not compatible with the other parts, and that causes the malfunction.”

„Let’s get this over with. We don’t have all day.” Interrupted Smokey impatiently.

„Right. Those in favour of buying the schematics and perfecting it?” asked Phyl, raising one of his arms, while looking at Logger and Smokey. Logger feared that his vote is going to decide the matter.

„And those who want to stay with the traditions?” asked Phyl, lowering his arm, while Smokey raised his. They both waited for Logger to decide, watching him.

Logger’s suspicion was right. Depending on his opinion, one of his colleagues won’t be too glad afterwards. Phyl seemed more tolerant than Smokey, but he also seemed more capable than the latter. He reminded himself to keep prejudices to a minimum – he has been knowing them only for a day.

Voting for the schematics might win Phyl’s trust while losing Smokey’s. He decided to choose his words carefully. It might mean a lot in the end. „As Smokey said, we don’t have all day for this. I vote for buying the schematics.” Smokey shook his head slightly. „I don’t think it will mean that we won’t have any work with it. Correcting the schematics will take some time, if not more than designing from scratch.”

„True. Well said.” Said Phyl, putting his hands together. „See, Smokey? I’m not doing this to make my work easier. Just think of it… Us, building the perfect RG model… That would mean a lot of reputation and respect for us. And a right headstart for Logger’s career, of course.” He nodded at Logger.

Smokey snorted, which was followed by a set of coughs. He pulled out a cigarette and lit it. „Be it, then.”

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„Log #0588. My first day at Rupture Farms was more action-packed than I suspected. Bought a pistol in the Armory, then made it to the Cafeteria. There, I met a Slig named Croe, he seemed OK. He’s watching over the Cafeteria too, along with some others. There was a bit of disruption at lunch, a Mudokon went berserk and smacked a Slig unconcious. In return, he got roasted by Zero, the Head’s assistant or something like that. It seems that we at the workshop are going to work with ready-made schematics. Thing is, earlier version used to self-destruct for some reason. We’ll try to fix that problem. Hopefully, we’ll succeed, or my career will be shorter than expected. Until we get those schematics, we won’t have much to do. Just hanging around, mostly. Phyl handled the business end of the plan, and Smokey received a call from one of the boilers, must have been some malfunction, but he finished quickly. Appart from that, nothing happened in the afternoon. I better get an early shut-eye again, so I’m signing off.”

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Woo! Bravo! A triumph!

Cool chapter. The mention about the RGs self-destructiong made me think of greeters, which never worked like they were supposed to, but the glukkons made use of them anyway.

Heheh, just pictured RG-49 exploding in the middle of the cafeteria
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Logger woke up a bit earlier than he did the day before. He didn’t open his eyes for a while; instead, he remained in his bunk, recalling what happened on the previous day. The arguement about the schematics was the first thing to pop into his mind. Logger wondered how much work will they have with the correction of the faulty blueprint. He tried to believe that they will succeed, although he had doubts. It was strange that how many technicians and engineers have tried to perfect the RG schematics, and yet all of them failed. And there were they: an over-optimistic Vykker, an ancient Slig on the verge of suffocation by constant coughing, and himself, an unexperienced greenhorn…

Greenhorn… The word brought him back to reality, reminding him of the day he arrived. It seemed like a long time has passed since then, and yet it was only two days ago. He remembered the Slig who sent him across the catwalk for entertainment. Someone mentioned his name the previous day… Maybe Croe. Or was it someone else? Maybe the Slig he met before he found the Armory. Logger put that matter aside, since it wasn’t exactly important. From all that he has seen of Sligs in the factory, it seemed that good equipment is a status symbol, like at all Industrial places where Sligs set their mechanical feet.

He opened his eyes and turned his head to the left. His pants were there, standing next to his bag. His laptop was at his left arm, with his pistol on the top. He gazed at the weapon for a while, thinking that he actually made a good deal at the Armory. The gun seemed to be functioning well – the clip didn’t jam when he loaded it – and, by the looks of it, the only fault of the pistol was that it was rusty here and there, and the grip was a bit worn-out. He extended his right arm, picked up the gun a started examining it in the darkness. He adjusted his mask to see better, but he realised that he might have done all this with a bit more noise than he wanted to. He froze, trying to remain silent, and looked to the right.

Smokey was lying in his bunk, facing his pants on his right, breathing peacefully, although in a rasping manner. It seemed that Logger didn’t wake him up with his clattering. He wasn’t exactly sure why was he so worried about whether he woke the old Slig or not. Maybe because of an unconcious respect, or just by the superstition that early people can be rather grumpy. Judging on how Smokey behaved the previous morning, Logger didn’t want to experiment on the matter. Instead, he wondered if he could get into his pants and leave the room quietly.

Logger scrambled to his arms slowly and grabbed his pistol with his tentacles. This move was, of course, natural to him and most Sligs. According to scientists who studied the origins of different Mudosian species, Sligs in ancient – and unmechanical – times also used their tentacles to climb trees to reach food, and to use tools in later times. It was almost like a third arm to compensate their lack of legs.

He crept out of his bunks quietly, trying to maintain a firm grip on his pistol. He reached his pants and pushed a button on the body, next to where the left leg connected to it. The mechanism lowered the body to ground level, so Logger could get into it without the risk of toppling it. He climbed into the pants and pushed the button again, raising him back up to normal level. He replaced the pistol into his right hand and sneaked out from the room. He silently cursed his mechanical legs for making such noise, but luckily, it didn’t make Smokey stir. After he passed the threshold, he closed the door of the room, which slid down, thudding into its place.

The workshop was deserted. From the looks of it, Phyl was wither inside his room or out for some fixing to do. Logger now had a chance to examine the equipment from up close. Along the wall were various containers and counters, all stocked with tools for working with metal: wrenches, welders, screwdrivers, hammers ranging from small to enormous – just to name of few. There were some more complex machines between the containers, which also seemed to be used for fashioning metal: Logger saw a heavy press machine just across the table in the middle of the room, and some gas containers next to it. Logger noted for himself that the room was well-equipped for such plans as theirs. Although he did not see any tools for more delicate processes like programming and production of complicated integral parts, he was sure that they could handle it. Maybe Phyl did all of the detail work inside his room, undisturbed by others.

Done with examining the room, Logger decided to leave and explore for a bit before he went to his post in the Cafeteria. He made his way to the door and opened it, just to nearly bump into a Slig with a cart. The Slig noticed him, and grabbed three mugs from the cart. "Caught me on time. Here." He said, passing the mugs to Logger. He looked into them, and saw that it was coffee.

"Oh, right. Thanks. Nearly forgot about it." Said Logger, turning around to place two of the mugs on the repair table.

"Good for you." Called the Slig from behind. "Then you ain’t gonna bother me with pleading for more at noon."

"Why? Is that common?" asked Logger, leaving the room with his mug in his hand, closing the door behind him. The two Sligs set off along the corridor.

"Quite. They keep coming for more if they find themselves dozing off. I’d be rich if I received a two’o’bill for every mug I give away, lemme tell you." Said the Slig.

"I see." Said Logger, taking a sip from his mug. "I guess it’s like money. The more you receive, the more you want to have."

"Good ’nalogy." Said the Slig, stopping at the next door. Logger drank the last gulps of his coffee and placed the empty mug on the cart. "Well, I won’t keep you. See you some other time."

"Likewise." Said the Slig, passing a couple of mugs to the Slig who opened the door. The latter seemed to be on the verge of falling asleep.

Logger made his way to the platform and descended to level 2, just like he did the previous day. Since he was still a bit early, he saw a different picture on the corridors. Sligs were ushering smaller groups of Mudokons as he walked along towards the Cafeteria. This was the first time Logger saw the Mudokons from up close – except his short meeting with the Mudokon cook at the Cafeteria. The laborers looked rather helpless, being pushed towards their work posts by his collegues. Some of them looked annoyed, others slightly pale – maybe from hunger or exhaustion – and the rest just walked along, casting nervous glances behind, only to be smacked in the back by the stock of a rifle.

As Logger headed towards his post, he passed the yellowing posters again. He noticed that something has changed among them. Here and there, the wall looked a bit lighter and cleaner in a rectangular shape – the places of freshly removed posters, Logger thought. As he walked on, he saw a bunch of pipes running towards the ceiling at the wall, with another clean area next to it. He remembered it from yesterday: there was a poster of the Mudokon called Freg there, the laborer who was Employee of the Month until the lunch break of the previous day. And a few steps ahead, he saw a Slig tearing another Freg poster down from the wall and throwing it into the container he was carrying on his back. Fame in Rupture Farms was as temporary as the effects of coffee.

He finally reached the corridor which led to the Cafeteria. Logger saw a few others heading there, although he couldn’t recognize any of them from that distance. Sometimes, it was even hard from up close. Of course, there were some particular signs which could help with identifying a Slig. Be it a special weapon - like Zero’s energy rifle - , the way of communication – like Spatch’s unusual use of Mudosian, or Dim’s complete lack of intelligent speech - , or an appearance feature – like Smokey’s aging equipment or just him looking old. But the guards up ahead were nearly identical for Logger, so he didn’t really bother with recognising them.

He reached the platform in the wall and took it to the catwalk level. He got off and walked to the place where he and Croe watched over the laborers the previous day. On his way, he only saw about six Sligs in the Cafeteria, most of them on the ground level below. He leant against the railing and watched the others. This didn’t prove to be entertaining, since they were doing just the same as Logger. Time passed on slowly, now that there wasn’t anyone in the vicinity to talk to. The rest of the Sligs on the level didn’t look too talkative anyway. The closest one, who was standing to the left, over the wall where a plate of minced meat shattered yesterday, was cleaning his gun in an aggressive manner. It seemed that some cartridges had got stuck in the ammo shaft, and he couldn’t load them into the barrel at all. He ended up smacking the gun against the railing hopelessly, adding a set of Sliggish cursing. Logger decided to leave him alone, seeing that the Slig was not exactly in a talkative temper right then.

After a while, other Sligs arrived to the Cafeteria. Logger thought he recognised Spatch among them, and this was justified when he heard his wierd manner of speech from underneath the catwalk he was standing on. Apparently, Spatch just came over to talk with the kitchen guards. He was not fulfilling guard duties in the Cafeteria, as far as Logger knew. Later, two Sligs appeared in the entrance, whom Logger instantly recognised as Dim and Croe. The latter indicated to his companion where he should go, just like the previous day. The baton Slig obeyed, trotting along the opposite wall and took his post next to the benches. Croe looked up and noticed Logger on the catwalk. He raised a hand as a greeting, which Logger returned. Croe took the platform and a few moments later, he was standing next to Logger, leaning his shotgun against the railing.

"You got here real early. How long have you been standing here?" he asked.

"Uh, maybe a couple of hours, I don’t know." answered Logger.

"Heh. What, did they chase you off from Maintenance for messing up a grinder or something?"

"Nah, it’s just a slow day at the workshop, that’s all. Nothing to do right now. "

"Uh-huh. Still, it’s the same thing going here." said Croe, looking around in the Cafeteria. "Nothing happens here until the Mudokons arrive…"

They stood there for a couple of minutes in silence, waiting for lunchtime. Logger was calmer than he was the previous day. He knew what to expect and what to do. That is, lots of Mudokons and practically nothing. After a while, the Mudokons were huddled in the Cafeteria by Sligs. The labourers lined up for their plates and took seats. Logger noticed that some of them cast anxious looks towards the catwalks, possibly looking for the owner of a particular energy weapon. But they ate as quietly as they could.

"Heh. It seems that Zero made his point yesterday." Said Croe quietly next to him. Logger nodded, turning back to see the Mudokons. None of them seemed mutinous that day. After they finished eating, they stood up and left the Cafeteria, escorted by the usual Slig guards. The remaining Sligs, including Logger and Croe, made their way to the kitchen and took their plates.

Logger and Croe was sitting next to eachother, eating their portion of roast meat. Logger looked up from his plate for a second, then turned to Croe. "You saw those posters being removed? About that Freg guy who was killed here yesterday?"

Croe swallowed a bite of his food. "Yeah. He’s been already replaced. "

"Already?" asked Logger in disbelief.

"You expected a funeral for him or something?" Croe shook his head. "Yeah, the new posters are already out there on the walls. Some wierd looking Mudokon. Never saw anything like it."

"What do you mean? What’s so strange about him?" asked Logger.

"He’s blue." finished Croe, turning back to his plate.
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Heehee, it's great to see more of this appearing, and the reference to Abe is cool.
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This is one story i'll definately keep up with. Keep up the awesometastic work!
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About time for me to post a new chapter. Sorry for the delay; university business, I guess.

Lately, my chapters have been turning out shorter, I hope it doesn't ruin the fun of it.

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Chapter 7 – A Sequence of Surprises

As lunchtime ended for the guards, the Sligs left the Cafeteria to hang around for a bit, or to tend to their other duties, just like Logger, who was leaving the hall after he finished eating. The meal was the same as it was the previous day, and he ate in a calm manner, seeing that there were no Mudokons who got dragged into the kitchen as ingredients that day. Although when he mentioned this to Croe while eating, the Slig tried to reassure him that pieces of Mudokon clothing were rare in the guards’ meals. This decreased Logger’s appetite to some extent, but he carried on eating nonetheless. Finally, he said goodbye to Croe and left the Cafeteria to head back to the workshop.

On his way back to the platforms, he noticed some new posters on walls. He stopped at one of them to have a closer look. These posters were printed on the same cheap paper as the others, but these weren’t so yellowish and dirty. The picture was much alike the one he saw the previous day: the one which depicted the Mudokon Freg next to a floor waxer. The new one was nearly the same, except that Freg got replaced by another Mudokon. According to the title, he was the new Employee of the Year, and under the picture was the name ’Abe’. Logger remembered Croe saying that the new guy was blue instead of green. He couldn’t tell that from the picture, since it was a cheap monochrome photo, but he did seem a bit different from the other Mudokons. If the skin didn’t, then the stitched mouth reassured Logger of this.

After he finished examining the poster, he set off again. He didn’t want to hang around too much; those schematics might have already arrived. He was eager to start working on something which was related to the project itself. Guard duty was not that hard, appart from the monotony, but designing or creating a device was much more interesting. Not that Logger had too much experience in constructing mechanisms – some of tasks he had to do back at training included the creation of a small flashlight from scrap, and designing the aiming sight of a simple rifle. He and the other trainees learned the more advanced techniques only in theory. But the lack of experience didn’t reduce his morale – he hastened his pace towards the elevator.

Finding his way up to the Maintenance area, Logger hurried towards Room 1-3 and opened the door. The workshop was empty, just like when he left that morning. As he took few steps inside, he heard noises from the left where Phyl’s room was. It was like rapid clattering. Logger wondered what the source could be; it sounded bit like typing, but it was a lot more different from the sound he made while writing his logs on his laptop. More metallic, maybe.

An image of an armored Slig soared into Logger’s mind, bending over Phyl’s computer and reading sensitive information – possibly the schematics of their secret project. His fingers fiddled unconfortably on his pistol’s handle. Was it already time to test his new Mergson? In his imagination, he used to picture the first ’victim’ as an empty can or a mug – anything inanimate. While walking slowly towards the door, he reminded himself that, supposing that the intruder is indeed armored, he would need a rather accurate shot to render him unable to move. Logger felt the veins in his neck beating a bit harder than usual, and it started to get slightly hotter under his mask. He finally reached the door, and, luckily, the clatter didn’t stop, suggesting that his approach was inaudible. With his left hand, he slowly reached towards the control panel of the door, while raising the pistol in his right. As a final thought, he wished he had seen the layout of the room beforehand. He didn’t know where the computer was, so it would take a few moments to aim at the intruder, which is quite enough for a counterattack… After taking a last breath, he pushed the opening slider downwards, and the door slid open.

Inside the dimly lit room, Phyl let out a short squeak as he saw the Slig pointing his pistol at him with a shaking hand. A few seconds later, they both recognised eachother. Logger, still shaking a bit, lowered his pistol. "I’m… I’m sorry, Phyl… I thought…" As he looked up at the Vykker, he noticed his hands over the computer’s keyboard, ending in sharp claws… How stupid he was…

"What’s going on, Logger?" asked Phyl, utterly confused.

"I’m sorry… I heard this clattering, and I thought…"

"Clattering?" asked Phyl, raising his brow, then looked down at his hands. "Oh, I see now." He said, with a tone of understanding. "You thought there was someone else in here?" He asked Logger with a toothy grin.

"Yeah, something like that…" said Logger, still panting a bit.

"Don’t worry, I never leave my room without necessary security measures." Said the Vykker reassuringly. "Anyway, it’s good that you came, even in such a sudden manner." He beckoned Logger to come closer, who obliged. He was still upset, but relieved at the same time. Glad of the thought that he wasn’t of the quick-trigger type Sligs, he remained quiet and listened to Phyl.

"I have good news. I acquired the schematics through the Magog InfoNet. The sellers were quite happy that someone got interested in buying it, actually. It cost quite much, despite the fact that it’s a blueprint of a malfunctioning robot. Either way, it’s detailed enough, so we weren’t tricked." Phyl looked at the screen, and Logger followed his example. It displayed a mass of data about different aspects of the robot they were about to construct: material information, component lists, battery specifications, amperage levels, circuitry layouts and so on. A mixture of white letters and numbers on a dark blue background. To Logger, it seemed complicated, but Phyl seemed to be able to find his way through the maze of data. The Vykker scanned through the documentation with discernible admiration.

"Now then…" said Phyl after a few moments of silence. "For a start, I will analyse the schematics in detail, maybe I’ll see something which could be related to the malfunction. But I can see that you’re eager to help too, and that’s also why you came here in the first place, so…" He turned back to the screen for a second, then back to Logger, lost in thought. Finally, the Vykker looked down at the pistol in the Slig’s hand. "…What would you say if I gave you the task of designing a weapon for our robotic friend?"

"I… Me?" gasped Logger, taking a step backwards in surprise. "Designing a gun?" The promise of such an important task made him forget about the ’intruder’ incident. "But… We don’t even know whether the robot will work or not!"

"As I said, I will make sure that there will be no more malfunctions in the history of the RG series." Said Phyl. "Once the robot is finished, it will need some sort of weapon, seeing that its main purpose is to fulfill guard duty." After a few seconds, Phyl raised a brow. "Or do you find yourself unable to design one? I can manage such a task if you refuse…"

"No, of course I’ll do it!" said Logger suddenly. He was glad that he finally got something to do in the workshop – it should make guard duty more bearable.

"Good." Said Phyl with a smile. He turned back to the screen, looking at the properties of the robot. "Judging by the size of its frame, I would suggest a longer type of gun. It will have no difficulty in wielding one. Still, make sure that the gun will be neither too short nor too long – look, here are the measures of the upper limbs." He checked a table on the screen, then he started typing again, and after a few moments, a piece of paper came out from a printer nearby. He gave it to Logger. "Here’s everything you might need."

"Thanks." Said Logger, checking the paper. The data he needed was neatly organised on it. He looked up at Phyl. "I better go and start working on this, then."

"Right. If you need anything, ask me or Smokey – I guess he’ll be back soon." Said Phyl, casting a glance at a clock on the wall.

"OK. Later then." With that, Logger turned around and left Phyl’s room, with his pistol in one hand and the paper in the other.

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And so we recieve another glimpse into daily life at Rupture Farms! Another interesting chapter; your writing is improving.
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