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Arrow The Cold Secrets RPG [Chapter 5]

Part five of the former TC RP is now born! Continueing under the new shiny name: Cold Secrets RPG.

RP Name: The Cold Secrets RPG
World: Earth, with a twist...
Available Species: You can be everything you want, but please keep your characters in tone with the story when you introduce them.

Background of the RPG:
The original RPG, taking of under the name The Community RPG, officialy started on April 5th, 2004. Many of players that joined back then had little to no experience in role playing, and the story had a rather bumpy start. But things slowly picked up, and soon the foundation for what would be an RP of huge proportions was laid.
The story started with Charger [Havoc], an anthro tiger living in a small mountain village called The Community. While sitting in the bar, Charger met Kix [T-nex], a small blue cat, and Drakko [The Brew Master]. As they moved out to do some hunting in the woods, the money hungry bounty hunter Arthur [Dave] is right on their tail.
After some encounters with local mobsters, demons and Drakko's 8 kids and ex wife, Charger recieved a phone call about a villa he enherited from his father, which he killed himself back in the bar for his own personal grudge against the guy. The gang made their way over to the huge villa, and as they got there it yet again got into a showdown between several characters. Arthur was hunting Kix for a big reward, while two new characters entered the stage. Blaze [Dave], who is Charger's long lost brother, was being chased by The Gunslinger [Also Dave]. As it came to a showdown infront of the villa, the good and the bad eventualy split up and headed to a large city called Los Santos [The RP world equivelant of Las Vegas] after Drakko announced he had some private bussiness to sort out.
Upon ariving however, Drakko was taken by the local maffia, and yet again the gang was in for a load of adventure, as they were introduced to the underworld of Los Santos, new dimensions, and spiritual powers which they never encounterd before. Fisher [Dave], a mysterious figure traveling between dimensions, developed a deep grudge against Charger and the gang as they ruiend his plans and ruiend his cover on Earth. It had been Pseok [Splat] especialy who ruiend his plans, by burning down the circus the cover was housed in.
Charger afterwards decided it would be best to get out of town as soon as they could, and they went underground, litteraly. Following the subway lines to the train depot, they made their way up to the Uber Dam [RP World equivelant of the Hover Dam] to get out of the city.
However, Drakko, who had been electrocuted by a monkey and brought back to life by a spell Kix did, had been suffering from some side effects. Being possesed, it came to a show down between the two old friends on the top of a slowly collapsing Uber Dam. Drakko eventualy fell over the edge, minutes before the dam collapsed, and could be seen floating around by Pseok after the flood had began.
Charger was badly injured, having a broken arm and bruised all over, but at least they were save. This is where chapter four left off... and where chapter five continues...

Full Backstories:

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 4

[Chapter 3 unfortunatly got lost in some hassles with the old website. Even though it wasn't too long anyway, and some info from this chapter is still in the above background discription.]

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If everyone would be so kind to post their character profiles again in the first upcoming post, then we can carry on .



My Characters:

Name: Charger

Species: Anthro Siberian Tiger

Age: 25

Sex: Male

Background: Has an extreme hate against most humans, especialy his father who he killed not to long ago. He usualy wears a white tank top, jeans and a neckless with the image of a tiger on it. Charger has a deep crush on Kaira, and his mood can swing suddenly when she's around.

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Name: Kaira

Species: Siberian Tiger

Age: Lets say 7 in tiger years

Sex: Female

Background: Chargers long lost mate. Ran off on him a while ago only to return to him shortly there after. She is the foundation Charger live's on and she's practicly the only one who can talk him out of things when he realy has mind set to something.


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Kaira jumped out of the back of the truck when she saw Charger being carried to savety. She quickely ran up to him.
'Darling! Charger! Are you alright'
He groaned, his hand still on his arm.
'I think I broke my arm...' he grunted and pulled a painfull face.
Water was still rushing down into the valley before them, slowly flooding and demolishing the city. Some buildings wern't build to withstand the huge water force, and entire casino's gave way under the unmeasurable force of the water.
Charger looked over the flooding.
'They never had a chance,' he noted blunt.
'At least we're all save...' she said and rubbed up to him, leaving Charger in screaming pain.
'Oh... sorry,' she grinned.
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I guess I'll give it a go.

Name: Swick

Species: Human?

Age: Mid 20's

Height: 6'2

Weight: 175 lb

Background: You see him here, you see him there, but what you never see is the truth within him. He's a former elite soldier from the West called a Gankin, a semi samurai warrior wielding gun and sword at the same time in combat. However, since the closing of the great wars in history, his group has been persecuted as "enemies of state" in many countries for their supreme combat skills. He hides his weapons, only revealing them when the time is right.

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Swick was enjoying the taste of his cobbler, only to be interrupted by the stampeding sounds sand waves of the water that had been spilt from the Uber Dam.
"Damn!" he thought, "so, Los Santos has finally fallen. Ha! Serves em right the scum suckin bastards!"
He had been trudging up the slop to safety when another peculier sight too his notice, was it really that tiger he had seen only just a few days ago?
He took a hollar and yelled, "Hey! Why in Bella's Bayou are you stragglin up here for? Come over here so I can see that wound!"
He began preparing his medicines and bandages for the strange creature.
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Oops! sorry about earlier , ill try again.

Name- nerves
Species- talking chicken
age - mid 30's

Appearance - A shaky character , dressed in a dark purple tuxedo ( he won this )
and spats , with a purple fedora with a little feather in it . His feathers are pale white , from years of getting the worst out of every situation , his eyes are black .

Bio - nerves came to this place because he thought he could get lucky and hit it big . Instead he borrowed money from the local crime boss , and is extremely in debt , he has been shot at , tortured , beaten up and many other things , and therefor is emotionally unstable , and is always shaking , he is also an extreme coward , and will flee at the sight of anything unnatural . He tries to hide his true self under his big purple tux and hat .

Weapons - nerves carrys a small flickknife on his belt , and a tiny little pistol in his pocket , yet it is very weak , he'll steal any other weapon when the oppurtunity arises .

Nerves was in a pickle , he had bet his tuxedo in this game of poker , and he didnt have a good hand . He knew this was going to end in trouble . Suddenly a big Wave erupted and hit the small hut he was playing in . He grabbed his tux , and shot off like a rocket , squeeling , and shaking , up to the nearest hill , when he saw a " gankin " , he had heard of these elites before , so he ran over to him , hoping to hide behind him for protection or something like that.
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Name: Krisha
Age: 22
Specie: Talking Cat
Personality: Traitorous and sneaky.
Bio: Same size as Kix. Has grey fur, with white and black stripes, and light, red eyes.
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Name: Kix
Age: 20
Specie: Talking cat
Description: A dark-blue cat with dark stripes. Turn's gold when hit by full moon light.
She hasn't understood the purpose of life yet, and still looks for a happy life.
Personality: She feels a sadness inside her all the time, and many times wishes she was dead. But she cares about other, and fears to loose her friends.
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Name: Akky
Specie: Talking Cat
Age: 21
Description: Is large compared to other cats, and has black fur.
Personality: Was in love, and still is, with Kix. But Kix kept rejecting him, which resulted a screwed, evil cat, who can't think about anything but Kix.


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Kix almost got surprised when she was grabbed by dave, and began crying when she saw Charger being left alone with drakko. But she was too weak at that moment, and could do nothing but look back at Charger who was fighting against Drakko. She looked away.

"I thought Drakko was in coma." Krisha said, who was also looking back.

"Well, he is NOT!! And something must have happened to him... IT's MY FAULT!!" Kix cried, "I shouldn't have used that spell on him!!"

When they had gotten away in safety, Kix was trying to calm down but couldn't. She was too worried.
Then the dam cracked, and Kix and Krisha ran to safety with the other. Kix noticed that Charger had come back, alive... He had a wounde here and there, and he had a broken arm, but he was alive. And that was enough for kix. She ran over to him, and Jumped on him, licking his chin.

"You're alive!!" She shouted happily.

She whent off, and studied him, to see where else he had some wounds.

"If you want me to, I can cure some of them wounds." She said.

"Hello, and welcome back Charger." Krisha said´, as she didnt know what else to come with.
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Swick was growing slightly tried from all of the running, his head began to throb because of the thunderous noises echoeing across the valley Los Santos.
"hey!" he shouted, "are you folks alright?"
He saw another familar creatue, that eccentric cat from the same night before. She was moving her hands in ways he had not seen since his days in the northern battlegrounds. She was healing him. Lights of emerald, saphire and ruby were flowing around the tiger's injured limb, sealing cuts and lifting bruises. Crackling sounds were emitting from the limb as well, the bones were snapping themselves back together.
"Well I don't believe it," Swick whispered to himself, it was indeed a surprise for him, healers were not of common sight these days.
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OOC: Lol... sorry Outlaw, I appreciate the efford but you're not good material for this RP, sorry mate. Go learn how to RP in other places first before coming back here. We want people who have experience and know how to blend into an RP...

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A talking chickin is not the way to do it... c ya later Outlaw.

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Charger vaguely smiled and smirked a painfull grin when Kix jumped up to him.
'Ouch ouch... carefull...'
He petted her a bit and smiled, noting Kaira was looking a little bit jealous. He gave her a look.
'Kaira...'
She looked away.
'I'm sorry...'
Charger looked down on Kix.
'I saw what happened to Drakko, Kix. No thanks, I'l just go to a hospital or something...'
Right then behind them he heard a voice, calling him over. Curious as he was, Charger painfully rose to his feet, Kaira quickly joined in to support him.
'Who are you?' he yelled back.
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Swick was running hard to escape the tumultous noises erupting form the waves. Finallt he reached the very top of the knoll and the cool breeze from the water relieved him of his travelling.
He almost did not notice the tiger asking for his name. Swick began to aproach the feline trio, breathing softly, yet enourmously at the same time.
"My name is Swick," he said declaratively. "I see you managed to avoid that bounty hunter for sometime now."
The tiger's face looked perplexed at this notion.
"I saw you in the bar that night, quite an episode you through, I have herbs for wounds like these."
Out form the shadows being cast from his broadly brimmed hat, multicolored leaves and roots were resting in his leathery palms.
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Charger grunted.
'What bounty hunter? Him?'
He pointed to Art who was standing next to the car, a couple of hundred meteres that way.
'He's a poor excuse for a being... And unless those are some very nifty spices, I don't think it's going to fix A BROKEN ARM!'
Kaira stepped in.
'Relax, he's only trying to help...'
'Yea well, I don't know him,' he breezed at Kaira. 'And right now I don't feel like relaxing. This is the third time in three days I cheated death, I'm pretty worked up right now!'
Kaira kept quiet...
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OOC: Uh, Havoc ... Art's been unconscious. Blaze carried him to safety and put him on the ground.
Anyhow, character recap. Holy hell, I've got a bunch.

Name: Art D'Angelo
Species: Human
Occupation: Man for Hire
Age: 29
Height: 5'11"
Other Details: Art is a man for hire. He wears ratty, secondhand suits. He has scruffy brown hair, an ugly face, but an extremely charming smile. He carries two handguns and an assortment of knicknacks, and is prepared for almost any situation.

Name: Blaze
Species: Anthro Tiger
Age: 25
Description: Charger's and Streak's brother. Looks more human than tiger, but is still a very large and muscular man. Set out to find his lost siblings and succeded in finding them all, but was only able to stay with Charger and Streak. Slow to anger, but fierce when riled.

Name: Streak
Species: Female Anthro Tiger
Age: 25
Description: Charger's and Blaze's sister. Has an appearance similar to Charger's, but slimmer and not so tall. Spent much of her life as an attraction at Sombra Circus. Also a Breaker, or a person with strong psychic abilities. She can cause events to happen by writing them out on paper. She doesn't seem too eager to stay with her brothers, but figures she owes them and their friends for saving her from the Circus.

Name: Robert Fisher
Species: Ancient Vampire
Occupation: Owner of Sombra's Travelling Circus, vice president of Sombra Enterprises.
Age: Ageless. Often takes on the form of someone in their early thirties.
Height: Not fixed, but often takes a form between 5'8" and 6'4".
Other Details: Fisher is a being who darkles and tincts. This means he exists in multiple worlds at multiple times. Though he is a vampire (the cannibalistic, ancient hell beast kind, not the Dracula kind), he does not need to drink blood to live. He is skilled in the dark arts, which he uses to travel between dimensions, change his appearance, and direct events in the lives of others. He doesn't seem to work for anyone, but he does answer to a mysterious figure yet to be introduced.

Name: Dave
Species: Human
Occupation: Student, Dishwasher
Age: 18
Height: 5'11"
Other Details: Dave comes from another dimension - one almost identical to the one you and I live in. He is, in fact, my counterpart in that dimension. For a long while, he believed that the RP he participated in was merely that - an RP. But by a chance encounter with Fisher and The Gunslinger (now a discontinued character), and by an untimely death in his dimension, we find him in the dimension where the events of this RP take place. He is usually quiet and rather submissive, but can be really stubborn if he believes in something. He has no combat experience. The fact that he was able to create the above characters while in his dimension suggests he might be a Breaker of some kind, but this notion has not been mentioned, and not even Dave suspects that this is the case.
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Blaze: "Er, Charger.... I carried Art to safety. He's not near the car. You probably didn't notice, but we had to leave it when Art accidentally crashed it..."
Streak was more interested in this Swick character. "Have you been following these guys? And for how long? No offense, but that is highly suspicious." She turned to Dave. "You. Kid. Ever read about someone named Swick back home?"
Dave shook his head, and didn't say again that he didn't want to be called Kid. "No. Someone must have ..." he paused. He wanted to say 'must have made a new character,' but he didn't feel like bringing all that back up again. No sir.
But another idea occurred to him "Streak ... could you rewrite the dam? I have a notebook and pen here (OOC: look here so you know I didn't just make this up), and you could undo the damage, right?"
Streak shook her head. "I could, but it's dangerous to undo something so big. Chances are good that people died in that flood, and fixing the dam and undoing the damage is one thing, but bringing all those dead people back is another. I tried it once, but ... he went mad. I won't do it again."
Blaze turned to her. "Then at least fix the damage. You can do that much."
Streak shook her head again, more violently. "No! How would we account for all those deaths? It's ... it won't help. Stop asking!"
Blaze looked ready to argue, but Dave shot him a look. It shouldn't have stopped Blaze - he had laughed down more threatening looks than that - but something about Dave's demeanor told Blaze it would be best to drop it.
Instead, he turned back to Swick. "So yeah, you. How long have you been following Charger?"
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02-20-2006, 01:38 PM
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I have one question before I post my character. Does it have to be an actual animal that exists?
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OOC: You can be anything... As long as it's not some Monkey/eagle/dragon/horse hybreed, which spews fire and ice on the same time.... =)

"Um.. Havoc, how did you know that it was because of me that Drakko went lunatic?" Kix asked confused ((OOC: Yea... how did he?? Or... hav i somehow mentioned or?? bleh whatever)).

She looked at him a bit, "Besides, that was a very dangerous spell I used..." She looked a bit ashamed, "But Drakko would have died otherwise, but I'm sure there is a way to reverse the 'side-effects'... I can do normal healing you know... Even though it's dark magic, it's not dangerous... not a simple healing spell."

"Hey... And that is coming from you???" Krisha asked amazad.

"Yea... I might have exxagerated about the whole not using magicv and stuff." Kix said, and jumped off Charger, "By the way, I don't think it would be wise by you to go into a hospital... like that...."

Kix hoped He'd let her heal him, seeing him so injured hurt her. Then Swick appeared,

((I'm a bit confused about who Swick is talking to and all... :-S))

"Um.... Hi..." Kix said, and thought it was weird how he just came up and talked to them like they were normal, regular people on the street, "Im... Kix."

"And I'm Krisha!" Krisha said, and butted in, "But the question is... Who are you? And what do you want here?"
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He gave an angry glare at Charger as he returned the various plants to his pockets.
"Sorry for appearing to you so abruptly," he said to Kix and Krisha as he wiped off his mouth for classic effect.
"But I am afraid we might need to stick together, as challenging times are at our doorstep."
Swick was still perplexed at their expressions.
"You see, los Santos was home to more than just a tub of casinos, it welcomed more than just tourists and businessmen."
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OOC: Used, you're not allowed to control other ppl's characters... Just so you know If you're gonna do something that will affect someone else, you must first get his/her approval. You can't just make Havoc's character do what you want. Its against the rules, sorry. You might wanna edit your post a bit, and see what Havoc has to say in this case
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OK, then. Here it is.

Name: Wane
Spieces: Guppilu
Age: 277
Descirbation: Pink medium-sized fish with 2 tentacles. This creature was the result of a creation 2000 years ago. This spieces can disable another animal's brain with its extermely long tounge. The mindless animal's brain is then replaced with the Guppilu, making its host. It slides into the host's head by deflating itself to the length of a human hair, so the ear is a easy enterance. This animal usually settles on the ocean floor.
Mood: Easily can get angered if you mess with him. Wane, however can be sweet if he is on a good mood.
Hieght: The size of a human head

I'm not going to post until I see if this is an ok.
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OOC: Okay, I have two issues with this kind off.
1. Did you read back, at least the previous chapter? Yes it's a long read, but it's a requirment to join.

2. I'm kinda skepticle about your character. Yes... it's original, but I don't think it's very practical for this RPG. Especialy since your character can 'control' other people or animals, which is not allowed.
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How about this instead?

Name: Kob
Age: 12
Spieces: Talking lobster
Describation: Redish-black color. A result of a mutantion in a lab. The diafram was altered to speak human like and has enormus claws with spikes growing along the face of the claws.
Bio: First 7 years were torcure to him. He was treated like a clown. Series of tests were on him, which made him the way he was. He escaped to the use-to-be dam for a hide out from the sciencists. He had meet a weird frog creature that had the same experiences. Now that the dam was gone, he wants to see the other side of dam.

Name: Geep
Spieces: Hopelin
Age: 67
Describation: Has a huge skull, with a frog face. The Hopelin has flub all over the body and has flippers. The skin is pale and the legs a like a frog's, but it stands on them, like a human. He has no arms.
Bio: Unaccepted by other Hopelins and traveled to half across the country. When he meet Kob, he found his first friend. Now that the dam is down, he has the same dream as Kob's
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Would it be okay if i made my " chicken " a lizard or dog?
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OOC:

Nice new name, Havoc!
Here I go...


Name: Silvia Di'Cola
Species: Human
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Bio: Silvia used to spend her time wandering between cities, with just a few packs of necessities and her horse, originally seeking information on her father and the person she believed responsible for his death, "J. K. Slade," but at some point in time something, or someone, caused her to lose all memory of exactly what it was she was looking for and what she already knew. This lasted up till the day "The Flaming Arrow" (aka Daniel) ambushed her and kidnapped her, somehow doing away with all of her possessions (such that she had). However, she was able eventually able to escape and is now in the company of a not-so-amiable police officer... ()
Equipment: Silvia used to carry around a variety of things, but with recent events all that is left is:
A pair of binoculars
Ammunition for her old rifle and her (now wrecked) pistol
A few throwing knives
Appearance: Short black hair and bright blue eyes. Medium height and build.
She usually wears an old-looking grey jacket with a few patches here and there and black jeans-type trousers.

>---------<

Alias: The Flaming Arrow
Name: Daniel O'Reagan
Species: Human
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Bio: Daniel has been training in the arts of dark magic for more than 10 years. He took up his title of "The Flaming Arrow" from his preferred choice of weapon and has never used his real name since. He works for the mysterious Joseph Slade, but he is rarely seen and those that see him don't usually get to tell anyone about it. Deep down, he questions the reason for doing these things, but so far he has made no effort to change it.
Equipment: Daniel has the ability to "summon" practically any item he wishes, as long as he has learned how to summon that particular item.
Appearance: Short dark brown hair and brown eyes. He stands at about 6'
He wears an outfit of complete black except for an orange pentagonal star on his front, but sometimes he wears a brown jacket and cloak over the top of these.

>---------<

Alias: Light Spark
Name:Olivia Di'Cola
Species: Human
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Bio: Olivia is Silvia's younger sister, thought dead by Silvia, but in actual fact she was taken by Slade and trained by him since she was 13. Because of this, she is unquestionably loyal to Slade, and would knowingly execute her own sister with no hesitation if it was the will of Slade. She has similar powers to Daniel, except where his mainly revolve around fire, hers are based on light and electricity, hence the title of "Light Spark." Unlike Daniel, who prefers to use older weapons (his bow, for example), Olivia will use anything she can get her hands on as long as it will be useful for the situation, regardless of how modern or ancient it may be.
Equipment: Olivia has the same ability as Daniel to "summon" items.
Appearance: Medium length red hair and blue eyes. Her height is about 5'6"
She wears an outfit of complete black except for an orange pentagonal star on her front.

>---------<

Name:Joseph K. Slade
Species: Human
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Bio: Slade considers himself to be a master of dark magic, but even he knows how much more power there is he could have and, knowing this, he constantly works to increase his power. He isn't restricted to the use of a single element, but perhaps due to his cold nature, he most often uses ice based power. He hardly ever shows himself to what he refers to as "the common people" these days, preferring to get those who work for him to do this, but when he does show himself, few ever find the experience pleasant.
Equipment: Slade likes to carry as little as possible at a time, but he has the same ability he has taught Daniel and Olivia to be able to summon items.
Appearance: Medium length white hair and black eyes. He is about 5'9" tall. His face is almost completely absent of distinguishing features to show any age.
He wears an outfit of complete black but for the grey cloak he has wrapped around himself most of the time.

>---------<

IC:

As Slade's elevator continued to descend, he could hear the crashes and other noises that spoke of the complete destruction of the city of Los Santos, but he was unperturbed. He knew that anyone who mattered would be able to escape safely, and the rest didn't concern him.
He made a slight movement of his arm and the elevator stopped for a few seconds, then started moving upward...

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Olivia was not impressed with Daniel's answer.
"Slade grows impatient with your constant delays. We should act now if we are going to get her at all... Or is it just that you don't want her to be brought to Slade?"

Daniel opened his mouth to make some retort, but before he could say anything, a small rumbling sound started from below, then a metal elevator suddenly rose from the ground in front of them, passing right through the earth. The doors opened the instant the elevator had stopped and Slade stepped out. Then the doors closed and the elevator sunk back beneath the ground.

"Greetings, friends," Slade spoke cheerfully.

Something's up, thought Daniel, he shouldn't be as good-natured as this...

"How are things going with retrieving your hostage?" Slade looked at Daniel.

"I did have everything under control until the dam blew somehow..." started Daniel, "but she left towards the city with the officer a short time ago. I think I have an idea of -"

"Forget it," cut in Slade, "I think it's time we caught our mouse."

Daniel raised an eyebrow, "Oh? And how are we going to do that?"

Slade grinned, "Ever heard of the magic carpet?"
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OOC: Slaveness, I'm sorry but I'm going to have to ask you to leave for the same reason as I did with Outlaw. Nothing personal to either of you, but we have given this RP a certain level of profesionalism and we would like to keep it that way. Yes your profiles are both creative, but do not fit this RP at all. Should you have read back a chapter and gotten a feel for the kind of characters (like Used did, for example) you might have come up with a better fitting character.
So again, just join some other RP, start reading back from the start, or from chapter 4, to get a feel for the story and the set universe, and then come back with the gained experience and knowledge and try again (And I'm not talking tommorow, nor am I talking next week or next month).
RP'ing at the level this RP is at takes getting skilled. Sounds crazy, but it's true, ask anyone in here.
So with that I wish you both the best of luck with practising.

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Name: Pseok
Age: 21 years
Gender: Male
Species: Great Eagle (Basically, a big, intelligent eagle thats about 5 feet long in body with a wingspan to match)
Backstory: Pseok was one of the tribe of Great Eagles (for lack of anything better to call them) from the mountains to the north. All was hunky dorey till one day some guy caught him (possibly a friend of Fisher?) and experimented on him for a while. When he escaped he returned to his tribe, but when they found out what the guy had done to him they decided he was too dangerous and exiled him and he flew South. After a series of elaborate and completely irrelevent adventures, he found himself flying over a tiny village surrounded by forest on the southern border of the mountains where he met Kix and the others and agreed to carry Roland (discontinued character of Dave's) to Los Santos when the others refused to take him in Charger's jet.

Name: Ettether, Lord of Flames
Age: A few hours at most if you're thinking collectively
Gender: Male
Species: Phoenix
Appearance: Big firey bird with feathers of flame and beak and claws of rock-meltingly hot gold.
Backstory: The result of some bizarre experimentation on Pseok by an evil nutter who looked rather similar to Fisher, Ettether generally emerges from Pseok in phoenix form everytime Pseok gets angry or is in danger. As a phoenix, he has a habit of burning anything that can burn (a side effect of being made largely of fire) and melting anything that can't stand the heat of his claws or beak. Ettether will remain in conrol of Pseok's body as long as there is danger. It takes a lot of water to begin to hurt him.
Unfortunately for Pseok, once the danger has gone, Pseok takes control of the body but won't turn back into the great eagle body for some time, so he's prone to...accidents.

Name: Grace Fuller
Gender: Female
Age: 34
Occupation: Lost Santos police officer.
Bio: You can probably guess. Grace Decided to join the Los Santos police when someone she knew was murdered, possibly her father or (pregnant) best friend. Rather disappointed that she didn't start with homocide cases, she left the force to study forensic science and then returned, hoping to get herself a big case. She's still hoping. Short fused, impatient and not fond of working in an office full of men, she's the typical female cop. now believes she's stuck in the middle of some deep mafia plot which 'those tiger people' are heavily involved in.


ooc: Here we go again. Tell me if you have any complaints Gretin.

Grace continued to drag Silvia up the hill.
Grace: "Don't worry, i doubt you'll be running much longer. How about swimming, you recon you can do that?"

At which point a sound best associated with many tons of water crashing through a city knocking down buildings and throwing people and debri around in its wash grew to a roar that blunted out all sound and any reply Silvia may or may not have made.
Pulling Silvia with her, Grace leapt through the door of a house whose occupent had left the door open in their understandable hurry. She pushed Silvia down under a table in a corner and pushed herself down afterwards. She shouted something at her but her words were swallowed by the noise of the water.

Then the wave hit the house.

=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=

Pseok floated above the dam, cursing the second he'd seen that figure being swept away by the water pouring past the wreckage of the dam. He thought of what Charger had done, accepting him even after he'd almost killed them all, helping him get away from the circus and so on. He tried to force himself to feel for Charger what he felt for his clan, what he'd felt for Roland.
Pseok: "Good Odd, help me."
He turned into a dive and swooped for the figure floating in the water that he thought was Charger.


Trying to keep himself as far away from the water as possible and to avoid looking at it (or, in affect, the person he was holding) as that might dissolve his current like so many trucks of sugar, and make him let go, he grabbed Drakko and pulled him with all his strength through the flow of water to the side of the valley opposite Charger and the others.

Then he looked down at who it was he was pulling.
Pseok: "Wuh, HEY! You're not.... WHO ARE YOU?"
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Charger looked up to the stranger.
'Yes, your point?' he asked anoyed.
He hardly payed any attention to what Psoek was doing over the dam. His arm claimed most of his attention.
Charger looked at Kix.
'You mentioned healing him and that he was in a coma back at the circus...' Charger added (OOC: Don't pin me on that, I'm not totaly sure XD). 'So I'm assuming thats what threw him off track.'
'What happened up there anyway?'
Charger grunted.
'He wanted to fight... he lost... he fell...' Charger sighed.
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Swick cringed at this news. he hafd assumed since the first day he saw that creature that he was a solid brute. But realising immediatly what was happening, he put his hat on his heart, thus revealing his face.
A few flies buzzed about above his hair, so he decided to return the hat to his head.
"I am sorry about this loss," he said, "but I think we need to be movin on, and fast, for I fear a greater hardship is dawning."
He gazed across the lake and spotted an eagle above the water.
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Blaze looked up at where Swick pointed. "That's a friend. But whether or not you are remains to be seen. So I think that if we're all to 'move on' with you, you should explain yourself a little better."
Streak looked ready to argue, but thought better of it.
---
Fisher had stepped into a point in town where he suspected Silvia would soon be. It was an empty house. The inhabitants had abandoned it in a hurry. He sat comfortably in one of the chairs in the living room, waiting. He took a moment to think to himself that he should protect the house he was in from the wave of water coming on. And it was so.
Soon enough ...
Pulling Silvia with her, Grace leapt through the door of a house whose occupent had left the door open in their understandable hurry. She pushed Silvia down under a table in a corner and pushed herself down afterwards. She shouted something at her but her words were swallowed by the noise of the water.
Then the wave hit the house.

Fisher heard the water strike the house, and indeed it did rattle it, but the house stood.
Fisher moved over to where Grace and Silvia cowered under the table. He crouched and reached out for Silvia, as if to help her up. "Hello there!" he said, with a charming smile.

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Charger pulled a painfull face as he stood up. Looking out over the city, most of it was by now overrun with water. Rubble was floating everywhere, buildings were collapsing. It was a downright disaster.
'I don't care of the guy comes or not, but I want to get out of here.'
He tapped Kaira's back as a gesture to follow him and started hopping over to the car a while back. He leg took a beating, but he could still walk on it a bit, if he had Kaira to lean on.
'And he will have to find his own way to hitch along, cuz the car is full,' he said flat out, not even looking back.
When they got closer to the car, he saw Dave (OOC: Dave is still with the car isn't he?).
'Get that car started, kid,' he grunted, opening up the backside of the car to get in the back without having to climb over the edges.
Kaira meanwhile leaped right into the back and saw Art trough the back window.
'Is he alright?' she asked Dave.
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OOC: Havoc, that's two strikes. Art wasn't at the car, Dave wasn't at the car, we left the car behind when Art crashed it. Did you read this post? So that makes it kinda hard for me to move on with your last post...

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Charger pulled a painfull face as he stood up. Looking out over the city, most of it was by now overrun with water. Rubble was floating everywhere, buildings were collapsing. It was a downright disaster.
'I don't care of the guy comes or not, but I want to get out of here.'
He turned to Blaze and Streak, limping on one leg, as his other took quite a beating as well.
'Anyone have any ideas?'
He looked at Streak in particular, knowing she might be able to help where others couldn't.
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Streak knew what he meant, but really had no ideas. She gave Swick a look over and, much to her discomfort, was unable to tell what he was up to, or what his motives were.
She sighed. "I guess we have no choice but to come with ... Dave, can I have that pen and notebook?"
Dave handed it to her and she wrote "We have a good car suitable to our needs, Art isn't unconscious, and he has the keys in his front pocket." on the first blank page.
Nothing extravagant happened. The car in question was sitting nearby, just as if it always had been there. It was easily big enough to seat everyone comfortably without being too much of an eyesore. Art was leaning against it, fully awake, but a little confused. "Wasn't I just driving?"
Streak rolled her eyes and scrawled a quick line - "Art knows what's been going on since the car crashed." - and Art's look of confusion disappeared. He pulled the keys out of his pocket. "So where to, Swick?"
Blaze interupted. "Hello?! Charger's arm is broken? Can't you do something about that?"
Streak shrugged. "Not without his permission. Besides, I don't think Charger would deign to accept such help from me."
Dave spoke. "You didn't get Art's permission before waking him up."
Streak shot him a look. "That's different. I did it out of neccesity. I'm under the impression that you can't drive, even though you're 18 --" Dave looked down, embarassed "-- and I never got a chance to learn, Blaze doesn't know how to drive, Charger can't with a broken arm, and Kix, Krisha, and Kaira are less than equipped." She turned to Swick. "And because I'm not sure about him, I don't trust him driving us anywhere. That leaves Art. And we do need to get going. So ... please."


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An uneasy look began to grow on Swick's face, and finally he uttered, "I'm affraid I can't drive, but what I can tell you is that I think we should be headin south, into the bayou. I doubt many uneasy folk will be able to trap us there."
He gazed again across the enourmous body of water with rubble of all shapes aand sizes were floating in.
"the trip will take some time, so I suggest we move to a village with an inn, we can make plans there."
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