Fanfiction: Oddworld: Munch's Exoddus

Marco the Glukkon · #1 06-07-2006, 06:50 AM

A small lamp flickered back and forth in a long, dark corridor. The light from the sunset that was slowly decending shone through the large vertical windows that lined the corridor walls, like soldiers in a march. A figure suddenly appeared down the corridor; the sound of gears and wires from it's mechanical legs moving up and down bounced off the walls. The sunset's light reflected off of it's black scales, as well as it's huge spikes stationed down it's back The spikes twitched occasionally as the figure moved down the corridor. Along it's waist was the change from mechanical "pants" to organic, reptilian skin, with a holster that held many weapons.The creature was very fit, having a 12-pack set of abs. The black skinned reptilian creature's red eye flashed, allowing enough light to shine on the long scar that decended from the top of his eye to the end of his cheek. A red badge, containing the five stars of general, shone as brightly as it's eyes. This creature was a Slig.
The Slig finally reached the end of the corridor, which stood a door. The walls were cracked, wall paper peeled like tape, revealing a large brick wall over half of the wall itself. Obviously, noone had taken the time to fix it up. The Slig shook it's head in disgust, then opened the door. It was odd for a Slig to open a door unannounced, but this particular Slig had the authority as general of his squadron, and the respect from his employers. As the door opened, the Slig saw the room before him. The room contained many empty boxes with the logo of "Rupture Farms" painted on the front. Empty bottles of "Soul Storm Brew" littered the ground, making it almost impossible to walk. On the wall to the right was a large shade which stretched like a big bay window, leading to a door on the south side of the room. The room was dimly lit, with only one, small ceiling lamp stationed steady in the middle of the ceiling. The sound of bickering and yelling suddenly blew at the Slig's face, as two Glukkons stood facing each other. One Glukkon had a big, flashy green suit that sparkled like diamonds. He wore huge, thick glasses that almosty completely covered his face. Atop his head, was a large hat, which was also big and flashy and green. The other Glukkon had a plain, blue suit on, with a red undershirt shown in a "V" under his coat. On the right side of his uniform was a badge with five stars, only this one was silver. The two bickered back and forth over a very important manner.

"I'm telling you General Jaccuza, it's all your fault those Mudokon workers escaped. I am so sick and tired of your incompotense!" The green Glukkon bellowed out.

"Well it's not my fault, Tex, you're the one who should have been working a tighter shift! I don't see your lazy butt doing anything to help this place stay in tip-top shape, with your Brew and your fancy Bi-Products!"yelled the blue-clad Glukkon.

"Oh great, their fighting again...what a surprise." The black skinned Slig whispered under his breath as he watched the two leaders fight. "I could have been transferred to Renab's Emporium, but noooOoooo."

"Look at these charts!" Tex yelled. An electric chart slowly clicked on, occasionally blinking. The chart showed a negative outlook, showing a plummeting red line. "Charts don't lie Jaccuza!"

"Sure they do, IF YOU MAKE THEM YOURSELF!" Jaccuza yelled back. "Charts Charts Charts, that's all you talk about is CHARTS!" His orange eyes lit up with anger as he spoke.

"I outta take this chart and shove it up yer'..." Tex was about to finish, but the Slig's "ahem" managed to stop him.

"I don't mean to interupt your little...ahem...spat...but the perimeter is secure, Tex, sir. I've checked all locations and halls, nothing to worry about." the Slig said to the two Glukkons.

" No need to be sorry for interupting us General Zeek, this conversation is a waste of time anyway. General Jaccuza was just leaving." Tex gave a stern look at Jaccuza, telling him to leave with those cold, orange eyes.

"Just remember, when you screw up again, you know who to call." General Jaccuza turned his angry gaze to Zeek.

"Yeah, keep walking keep walking nimrod!" Zeek spoke suddenly as Jaccuza's gaze reached his.

"Hmph! I'll see to it you're out of here too, you little Slurg!" Jaccuza looked at Zeek's face scar.

"This scar defines who I am and the strength I have. Where's yours?" Zeek spoke sarcastically. Jaccuza meerly said nothing, and slammed the door. Tex bent his body against a large desk and sighed.

"What a waste of time. The economy's going down the crapper and here I am bickering with idiots like Jaccuza! I don't have time for this!" Tex stared down at the floor, pondering his next move.

"You can count on me and my squad boss. We get the job done, and done right." Zeek replied.

"I know, and I am very greatful for that Zeek. It's just things seem hopeless sometimes, like they can't be helped."

"Yeah, well, what I also came to tell you was that there is a meeting going on in the lunch room. I didn't want to say anything with numb nuts standing there." Zeek pulled out a piece of paper and handed it to Tex. On the cover was a picture of a Glukkon and text which read "Mandatory, Get In Here Now!" underneath the picture.
"Oh don't worry about him. I'm sure some way he'll find out there's a meetin'. I guess I better get down there. I'd ask ya to go, but Gluk's only." Tex slowly got up and headed for the door.
"No problem boss, I couldn't stand being in the same room with you all anyway." Zeek said as he turned to face Tex at the door. Tex laughed out loud, as they were always joking with each other. Tex looked at the doorknob, then slowly turned to Zeek.
"Zeek, I hope you know you've been like a son to me. You're the only one sane around here that wants to help."
"Thank you sir." The door closed behind Tex, leaving Zeek in the room. Zeek turned to the window blinds, opened them, and stared outside as the sun slowly set into the distance, with the stars coming out into the twilight.

Mudoko_Jedi · #2 06-09-2006, 01:37 AM

That is sooooooooooo good i mean i like this Zeek and Tex and something about juccuza i like to. Can you please have mud meetle warriors in it.

E'l Scrabino · #3 06-11-2006, 01:31 AM

Good stuffs! I like the beginning! Keep on postin', Marco!

Marco the Glukkon · #4 06-15-2006, 12:29 PM

Part two guys, here we go!

Abe’s eyes scanned the sky above him as he sat on the sandy beach. The stars, twinkling with the brightest light, lit up the twilight sky. It had been a long time since he had observed the sky, without the fear of being shot at by Slig Security. Abe’s pale, blue skin shuttered at the mere thought of Slig guns pointing at him. Abe sighed as the waves slowly crashed onto the shore and the palm trees blew in the soft wind. Abe closed his eyes, laid back with his arms folded in the back of his head, and listened to the wind. It was nice, finally being able to relax for a while after all those adventures. And yet he still felt empty.
Abe felt that sinking moment, the moment he gets whenever he is filled with happiness, as he opened his eyes to spy the Moon. After all those years, he still cannot get over his depression that gripped his mind. How many Mudokons were left, how many could he save or are there any more? Just then, as if all of his senses took over, he put his paw up to the paw-like crater in the Moon. He had seen that Moon so many times, yet he was still confused as to it’s presence in his life. He knew he was the savior of the Mudokons prophasised in Scrabania and Paramonia, but why him? Why not some other?
Before Abe could finish his thoughts, he heard someone call his name. Turning to the sea, he saw something occasionally pop up between the waves. Abe ran to the end of the shore and called out to the creature, but no reply. Had the creature drowned? Before he could think, the creature flew out of the waves, screaming, and rammed into Abe, both screaming from fright. Abe and the creature both laid there on the beach for a while, stunned from fright, before they pushed each other off each other. Standing, Abe finally saw that the creature was his best friend and companion, Munch the Gabbit.
“Hey Abe, sorry about the landing. I had to swim all the way around the island from those water pools on the shore!” Munch said as he put his hand behind his head.
“No problem Munch, so, how are the babies?” Abe referred to the baby Gabbits Munch rescued from the evil Vykkers Labs a few years back.
“Oh, they’re fine, except one of them tried to bite my tail.” Munch looked down at his flipper, which had a bruise-like bite mark on his flipper.
“Yeesh!” Abe cringed.
“Yeah, those little guys are hungry!” Munch and Abe laughed and looked out at the ocean. Abe started scratching his butt nervously. Abe was extremely happy to have Munch, his best friend, be there, but he wasn’t always happy expressing himself. It would seem much easier, however, since both he and Munch adventured torturous lands and facilities together.
“So, whatcha been lookin’ at?” Munch finally spoke up.
“Nothing, just up at the Moon.” Abe said, hiding his real thoughts.
Munch looked up at Abe’s Moon, then over to his own Moon and smiled with happiness. It felt good to know that he was being watched out for too.
“Nice night…say, why don’t we see what Alf and George are doing? Alf said to swing by the Rehab for a chat.” Munch asked with enthusiasm.
“Sure buddy, let’s go!” Abe exclaimed, feeling happy that Munch got off the subject of the Moon. Plus, it was nice getting the gang back together to hang out. The two buddies began walking toward the Rehab as Abe took one last look at his Moon before climbing up the rocky hillside toward the Village.

E'l Scrabino · #5 06-16-2006, 03:53 PM

Woooooo! Aweshum! It is indeed very good!

Mudoko_Jedi · #6 06-17-2006, 12:06 AM

cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. whos george.

Jordan · #7 06-18-2006, 06:24 AM

Impressive! I like how you did a little bit about the Gluks at the start, I wonder what they were arguing about?
Great story please keep up the good work!

skillya_glowi · #8 06-18-2006, 01:09 PM

Hey hey! That's great. It reminds me of the screenplay you did...

Mudoko_Jedi · #9 06-18-2006, 08:31 PM

he did a screenplay?!?

Cullen Heath · #10 06-20-2006, 05:41 PM

Wow, man that was an amazing start...I hope the rest continues to be as well written! Please do some more.

E'l Scrabino · #11 06-20-2006, 11:47 PM

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Please do some more.

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Mudoko_Jedi · #12 06-21-2006, 11:14 PM

Hurry up and make the next chapter Im dying to read it.

E'l Scrabino · #13 06-22-2006, 11:08 PM

You cannot rush great things, you know...

Primus inter pares · #14 06-25-2006, 10:34 AM

Hey thats good. Now i know two fanfictions in the fancorner in oddworld forums, with is about the story after M.O., the first one is my own.
But continue to write more, it is so good.

Marco the Glukkon · #15 06-27-2006, 10:22 AM

Hey guys, sorry for the long time to update. We've been working on the basement at our house. Don't worry, you will all learn about George later on in the story.

"Woah, hold on! Don't set that there...George go to table two....HEY, WHO LET THAT MEEP IN HERE???" Alf yelled as he tried to contain the incoming onslaught of customers in the Rehab. The sound of clanking glasses and the chatter of customers filled the room as George, Alf's assistant and "take-in", nervously tried to juggle glasses of tea on his arm. A huge plate of Mudoberry pie flew across the room and decked him in the face, as he flew backward in a heap. Abe and Munch both entered throught the front door, and both of them had a puzzled look on their faces.
"Hey Alf....uh....you ok?" Abe spoke up first.
"Does it look like I'm ok? It's a zoo in here!" Alf ducked as a piece of pie flew over his head. "Would someone get that Meep outta here?"
"BAAAA!"
"Is there anything we can do?" Munch spoke up over the sudden uproar of customers.
"Yeah...why don't ya get everyone outta here, that would be great!" Alf yelled sarcastically. Abe and Munch both looked at each other, wondering what to do. Suddenly, Munch had an idea and whistled loud with his fingers. The Rehab quieted down as the Mudokons stared at the young Gabbit in both wonder and shock.
"HEY, ABE LET OUT A SILENT ONE, EVERYONE RUN!!!" The room cleared out with the uproar of screams as all the Mudokon occupants ran out the door. The only sound left was the sound of a table spinning to a slow stop. Abe leered at Munch.
"Thanks...Munch..." Abe said sarcastically.
"No problem!" Munch replied.
"Whew...thank Odd that's over. I thought they'd never leave. And...noone bothered to take the Meep." Alf replied. The Meep slowly chewed at the bamboo walls of the Rehab.
"Don't worry...he's my buddy!" George said as he petted the Meep. The Meep purred softly.
"Sigh...see what I have to put up with?" Alf walked over to the counter and began wiping up. Abe and Munch stood there, wondering if it was a bad time to come, although, Alf was always in a bad mood.
"So... what was that all about? I thought everyone was cured of Soul Storm Brew?" Abe finally spoke up.
"Yeah, but Big Face is having a grand meeting for all the Mudokons. Somethin' about....you guys." Alf said as he accidently dropped a bottle.
"About us?"
"Yeah, didn't you guys get the memo? Or were you goofing off again.?"
"Uh...."
"Don't answer that. Anyway, I figured that you two idiots would forget, so you wanna check it out now?"
"What about the Rehab?" Abe looked around to see the clutter that was the Rehab.
"Eh, don't worry about it, it'll take care of itself. GEORGE! We gotta go!" Alf called to George, who was cleaning the counter obsessivly." I swear, that boy figits worse than anyone I've ever seen." Munch looked curiously at George, who kept looking back at the counter before all of them finally walked out the door.

Jordan · #16 06-27-2006, 12:35 PM

That chapter was really funny! Please carry on soon, George is so cool lol!

Mudoko_Jedi · #17 06-27-2006, 10:20 PM

thats good and gooder and even more gooder.

Marco the Glukkon · #18 07-04-2006, 03:33 AM

Hey guys, new one coming up!

Tex the Glukkon frowned as he peered at the chatty Glukkon Executives that sat at the round table in front of the large bay window, which shown the Water and Lights Factory. Nervous as he was, he couldn't show his fear, afterall, he was a Glockstar and there was too much at stake for him to screw up.
"Tex, you have some explaining to do!"
"Yeah, Where are my Mud shipments you promised me last week? I've been up to my eyeballs in product requests!"
"Does anyone have a moist towelette?"
The Executives were always like this, always wanting to find someone to point the finger at. Jaccuza simply smirked at Tex's predicement. It has been a while since Tex was blamed.
"Now now gentle Gluks... We cannot spare any more Muds at this time, and we don't have anyone to manage things right now!" Tex yelled. He tried to keep his cool, but Jaccuza's smirk only made it worse.
"Don't give us that crap! Vice President Aslik had a better schedule than you!" yelled a brown, clad Glukkon.
"Yeah, and where is he now?" Tex yelled. The Glukkons all went quiet for a second, remembering Aslik's mishap at the hands of Abe.
Tex calmed down and sat back alittle. "People often ask me for help, but I cannot run everything. We need someone to help, at least for a while!"
The loud uproar of angry Glukkons proved Tex was a fool in his words. Sweat poured down his face, he couldn't handle anymore of this stress...
Suddenly, two large doors opened to reveal two, glowing orange eyes. A lit cigar fizzled and smoked as the stranger stood in forbidding form. The dark shadows fell upon him, not giving away his identity.
"Who the heck is that?" Asked a green-clad Glukkon.
"You're new boss." The stranger said as he slowly "walked" toward the large circle table. It was a Glukkon in a dark, purple suit.
"By the powers of Odd...it's him!" The Glukkons murmered to one another. Each whispered to each other excitedly, and Tex could only stare in excitment.
" I can see why you are all worried, but I am not my father. I am better, more efficient, and of course, more demanding. And if anyone of you even questions my authority...I'll have you drug out and beaten."
The Glukkons only stared.
"YOU GOT THAT!?" Yelled the stranger. The Glukkons all jerked back in horror and surprise, then nodded their heads excitedly. The Glukkon stranger slowly walked behind every single Glukkon, and would occasionally stare right into their face. He stopped and looked into a brown clad Glukkon.
"Insibordination will not be...tolerated under my control."
"Yeah, says who? You have alot of nerve coming in here!" Yelled a green-clad Glukkon. The stranger simply laughed and grabbed the Glukkon, with one of his arms from under his cloak, and grabbed the Glukkon by the throat, and threw him out the window.
"He's fired." The Glukkon stranger finally said as he walked off. "Tex, come with me!"
"Yes sir Mr....uh...." Tex questioned.
"Marco...Marco the Glukkon." The stranger said as his eyes peered over his shoulder. Tex followed Marco out the door, with the other Glukkons staring in aw.
Behind the closed doors, Marco took Tex aside.
"Don't worry, I am fully capable of taking care of those two fools everyone finds so hard to kill." Said Marco as he walked slowly over to his new office.

E'l Scrabino · #19 07-04-2006, 10:08 PM

Yaaaaaaaay! I love this fic! More! I canna go without anymore!

Mudoko_Jedi · #20 07-04-2006, 11:48 PM

this is so cool but you do know that glukkons arms act as its legs right?

E'l Scrabino · #21 07-04-2006, 11:51 PM

.....
Maybe you should read through the story again?
It says he reached from under the coat.
So obviously, this is an awesome Fan Fiction.

Mudoko_Jedi · #22 07-04-2006, 11:53 PM

I relised my mistake after I posted but I left it coz you might make a mistake later about gluk arms.

Marco the Glukkon · #23 07-05-2006, 07:19 AM

Marco is much more different than other Glukkons. While other Gluks do not use their arms except walk, Marco can also use it to grab, punch, etc. He believes that using all you can to crush your enemies is key. You'll learn alot more later about him, as well as George's story. It has been a while since I have updated, we had a loss in our family.

Mudoko_Jedi · #24 07-06-2006, 02:29 AM

oh im so sorry.

Cullen Heath · #25 07-19-2006, 05:49 PM

Very interesting chapter, but you know that Glukkons have a Queen, and have no fathers, right? (((POSSIBLE SPOILERS___ I'm guessing that Molluck's "the daddy"?)))

Please, do more.