My second fanfic: SLIGS IN MUUN FOREST!

Cool Paramite · #1 08-18-2001, 01:41 PM

In the Muun mountains near the Muun forest, mudokon terrorists prevent the Magog cartel from building railways. 5 walking sligs, 4 flying sligs and one big bro slig are sent to destroy them. But the train falls in the lake in Muun mountains. The sligs fall down to the forest, and are captured by the mudokon terrorists. All but one: Kneth, a walking slig. Can Kneth be on time to save his buddies? Will they ever escape Muun forest? Join the adventure, and discover the Muun forest, a jungle full of exotic wildlife, great dangers, and lots of friends and enemies! Interested? Read...

My second fanfic: SLIGS IN MUUN FOREST!

"The Magog on the March, news with a cup of ooze! Hmmm, delicious!" - Slig reporter
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CHAPTER ONE: FAREWEL SLIG BARRACKS!
It was a day just like all other days in the slig barracks. Crawling sligs talking about the pants they wanted, walking sligs talking about wings, and flying sligs high in the sky. Many sligs where watching the "Magog on the march"

"The Magon on the March, news with a cup of ooze! Hmmm, delicious! News of the day: Mudokon terrorists from the muun forest prevent the magog cartel of building railways in the nearby muun mountains. There will be sent a squad of sligs to destroy them!"

"I wonder wich sligs they will send." said Morck the slig to his buddy Murck. "I don't know" Murck said. "But we will hear it with the next Magog on the March!"

At the same time, General Drippick, V.P. Aslik en Dir. Phleg had a meeting with a glukkon named Snegh. "So you want 9 of my best sligs? Why?" Drippick said. "You probably heard of the mudokon terrorists in muun mountains..." Snegh said. "Why do you want my sligs?" said General Drippick. "Yours are the best. We have build a train for troop tansport, it can transport 10 sligs. The 10th will be a BigBroSlig. We can't send 10 BigBroSligs because the others must stay where they are for some reason." said Snegh. "I see." general Drippick said. "I will send you my 5 best walking sligs and 4 best flying sligs.

An hour later, 10 sligs stepped in the small troop transport train, and with them where murck and Morck. "Can you believe it? An hour ago, we tought we should never be send. And now.... Farewell Slig barracks!" Morck said.

And the train begun to ride...

TO BE CONTINUED...!
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[ September 07, 2001: Message edited by: Cool Paramite ]

AussieAbe · #2 08-18-2001, 10:30 PM

That is a good fanfic.When are you gonna write the next chapter.Soon I hope

Cool Paramite · #3 08-19-2001, 08:01 AM

"Uh, guys, can we swim?" - Kneth
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CHAPTER TWO:
The transport train looked like a normal train, but was smaller en had windows. Inside, there where some chairs, 10 sleeping bags and 10 lockers. There was also a cell for prisoners. And there was a tv.

The train begun to ride.

"Okay, we will be together for a few weeks, so lets tell someting about ourselves. Lets start with our names. I am Morck." said a walking slig. "I am Murck." said a walking slig. "I am Kneth." said another walking slig. "I am Marck." said a walking slig. "I am Nirck." said the last walking slig. "I am Flir." said a flying slig. "I am Flar." said a second flying slig. "I am Nurck." said a flying slig. "And I am Gurck." said the last flying slig.

"Lucky boys, we only get numbers. I am number 3" said the BigBroSlig.

They where traveling for 2 weeks, then, they came by the muun mountains. There was snow everywhere. Then, suddenly...

"Uh, guys, can we swim?" said Kneth. "The rail ends here, and there is a lake. We will fall in the lake! Stop the train!"

Panic in the train. Nobody was even thinking of stopping the train, they only wanted to get out! "Jump out of the train!" yelled number 3. "And what about you?" asked Kneth. "I want to die with this train!" said Number 3. All sligs, except Number 3, jumped out, and the train fell in the water.

The sligs, even the flying ones, where falling to dead....

TO BE CONTINUED!
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Gluk Schmuck · #4 08-19-2001, 08:12 AM

yey...good...

i like...

AussieAbe · #5 08-19-2001, 08:49 AM

C'mon I am in suspence here go on to chapter three already dammit

Cool Paramite · #6 08-19-2001, 09:51 AM

"Shoot!!! Whoops, out of ammunition!" - Murck
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CHAPTER THREE: CAPTURED!
The sligs where falling down and down and down... suddenly, they fell in a tree. They climbed down, and Morck said: "Wow, lucky we. We could have been dead!" "Where are we?" said Flir. "We are in muun forest." said Kneth. "We can still complete our mission, if we find those mudokon terrorists."

They walked a day long trough the forest, when they a pack of paramites...

"C'mon, shoot them!" said Morck. "We gonna cook them!" They shot the paramites, but then, suddenly...

"Freeze!" But it whas not said by a slig. It was a mudokon. A mudokon with feathers on his head. "Freeze! You are surrounded!"

The sligs where surrounded by mudokons with feathers on their heads en clubs in their hands. Others of them carried slings, and on a nearby hill stood a big catapult, loaded with big stones, so they where even a danger for the flying sligs. "Shoot!!!" yelled Murck. "Whoops, out of ammunition!" "Me too!" said the other sligs. "Come with us to our village. We won't hurt you when you do what we say." said the mudokon. So the sligs followed the mudokons to the village.

All but one: Kneth. Kneth watched from a distance, and swore by himself to free his friends.

Will he succeed?!

TO BE CONTINUED!
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Gluk Schmuck · #7 08-19-2001, 09:58 AM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, the anticipation is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nahh, just kidding...it's only eating my flesh...

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, the lamp is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ August 19, 2001: Message edited by: Gluk Schmuck ]

Cool Paramite · #8 08-19-2001, 10:10 AM

QUESTION! QUESTION! QUESTION! QUESTION! QUESTION!

I write my story in a special styl, with above each chapter a funny quote from that chapter. The question: do you like that style? Or not? Please reply!

Gluk Schmuck · #9 08-19-2001, 12:30 PM

it's not a bad idea...i like...

Cool Paramite · #10 08-19-2001, 01:54 PM

"The romantic sight of the sun going under, and the romantic idea of being dead within an hour." - Gurck
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CHAPTER FOUR: THE MUDOKON VILLAGE
After a walk of an hour, the sligs came by a village deep in the forest. There were a hundred mudokons there, all with feathers on their heads. "We are taking you to our leader, and don't try to escape!" said one of the mudokon fighters. He pointed at a big hut in the middle of the village.

"What are you doing in muun forest?!" said the mudokon leader. The mudokon leader was bigger then the others and wore a hat. "We have been sent to destroy the mudokon terrorists. You are their leader?" asked Morck. "Yes I am. You and the other sligs wil be executed when the sun goes under!" said the mudokon leader. "No, I will not be killed!" yelled Flir. He tried to fly away, but three mudokons with slings shot at him and Flir was badly wounded. "Tie them at the big totem. You know where they will go when the sun goes under..." said the mudokon leader to one of the other mudokons.

And when the was going under, Gurck said: "The romantic sight of the sun going under, and the romantic idea of being dead within an hour." The sligs al laughed, probably for the last time of their lives...

TO BE CONTINUED!
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Cool Paramite · #11 08-19-2001, 03:02 PM

"I got the idea for the paramite pit from the roman civilazation, a strange civilazation that lived on a faraway planet called Earth..." - Bando
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CHAPTER FIVE: THE PARAMITE-PIT
The sun was goning under, and a bandaged mudokon came to the sligs...

"Hi, I am Bando, weird name, huh?" Come with me, to the paramite pit!" There was no escape. They were surrounded by mudokons with clubs and slings.

After a walk of an hour, they came by a giant crater, full of paramites. "You will be thrown in that crater." said Bando. "I got the idea for the paramite pit from the roman civilazation, a strange civilazation that lived on a faraway planet called Earth..." "Huh, I will fly away!" said Nurck.
"No, you will not, because we will take off your wings and pants NOW!" said Bando.

So said, so done. Some minutes later, all hundred mudokons from the village were watching the paramite pit, and the now pants and wingless sligs were thrown in.

At the same time, Kneth arrived in the village. Will he be fast enough to save his budddies from a horrible dead?

Gluk Schmuck · #12 08-19-2001, 03:03 PM

alright already... i'll reply...

Cool Paramite · #13 08-19-2001, 05:52 PM

Hey Gluck Schmuk, you don't have to reply, it's some sort of question.
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"Remember, you can always ask questions to Leafo. That's my name." - Leafo
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CHAPTER SIX: KNETH ON THE RESCUE
Kneth looked around in the village. He looked in the houses, in trees, everywhere, but there was nobody. "Is there someone here?!" he yelled. Suddenly, a mudokon came out of a tree.

"Aaah, a slig! Do with me what you want, but don't shot me, don't me!" he said. "I want to ask you someting," said Kneth. "Have you seen other sligs here today?" "Yes..." said the mudokon. "They are taken to the paramite pit."
"The paramite pit? What is that?" asked Kneth.
"It's a big crater full of paramites." said the mudokon.
"Crater?"
"Yeah, one day, a strange flying vehicle crashed there. The crater is big, very big."
"Where is that thing now?"
"Somewhere in the forest. I don't know excactly. But if you want to save your buddies, you better hurry, they are thrown in the paramite pit."
"Where is that?"
"Just follow the signs over there!"
"Thanks. I'm on my way!"
"You are welcome. Remember, you can always ask questions to Leafo. That's my name."

And so Kneth runned trough the forest. Will he be fast enough to save his buddies?
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AussieAbe · #14 08-20-2001, 05:20 AM

C'mon just write the next chapter already.It is sooo good

Cool Paramite · #15 08-20-2001, 07:01 AM

"Scotty, beam us up!!! Sorry, watched to much Star Trek!" - Marck
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CHAPTER SEVEN: THE RESCUE
In the pit, the crawling sligs were still fighing, protecting the badly wounded Flir. But without their guns, the sligs were weak, and they were now surrounded by paramites.

"Oh no, we are surrounded! There is only one way out!" yelled Marck. "Scotty, beam us up!!!! Sorry, watched to much Star Trek!"

They were now fighting for 2 hours, and finally Kneth arrived.

"Let my friends go, or I will shoot you al!!!" he yelled. He fired one shot, to show his gun was still loaded. "Okay okay... Bando, get them out of there." said the mudokon leader. "*Sigh...* you will now see why I wear bandages.." said Bando. He tied a rope at a tree (is that good english?) and trowhed it in the pit. Then, he jumped in. "Climb! I will hold them!" he yelled.

It was a horrible sight: the sligs climbing up and Bando bleeding from many wounds. "Lets get out of here!" said Kneth when the last slig was out of the pit. Then, he cut the rope, leaving Bando in the pit. "He deserved it!"

They ran away as fast as possible. Will they ever escape muun forest?

TO BE CONTINUED!

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Cool Paramite · #16 08-20-2001, 07:07 AM

QUESTION! QUESTION! QUESTION!

What do you think the flying vehicle that crashed in muun forest is?

Cool Paramite · #17 08-20-2001, 07:23 AM

"They will pay for this. 100000000000 euro! Oops, those aren't valid here!" - Nirck
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CHAPTER EIGHT: ANOTHER PROBLEM
After running some time, the sligs stopped. "Thanks, Kneth. We would be dead now without you." said Nurck. "But why haven't you killed the mudokons? It was our mission!"
"Yes, it WAS. It is'nt anymore. We do now just have to save ourselves, or what is left of us. Number 3 wanted to die with the train, and Flir looks like he can die every moment." said Kneth.
"Yes, I am dying... you where good friends, thanks for everything you have done for me. Farewell." said Flir. He closed his eyes.
"They will pay for this. 100000000000 euro! Oops, those aren't valid here!" said Nirck.
"Relax, he is not dead, you can hear him breath." said Kneth. "But we have to cure him. But how?"

TO BE CONTINUED!

Cool Paramite · #18 08-20-2001, 11:22 AM

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CHAPTER NINE: THE SEARCH FOR THE BERRIES
"I can ask Leafo." said Kneth. "But he is in the mudokon village, and I don't think we are welcome there..."

"Searching me?" said a voice from out a tree. "It's me, Leafo!" They looked up and saw leafo in a big tree. "I don't l realy ike that village, I love nature, trees and... leafs! You know now where my name comes from. I have heard the whole conversation, and I know what you need. In the hills nearby grow magical berries, wich cure everything: from dangerous sickeneses to deadly wounds. But watch out: they are guarded by a shrykull!" said Leafo.
"One single word: What?! What is a shrykull?" asked Flar. "It's a half paramite-half scrab." said Leafo. "He won't hurt mudokons, but when he sees a slig... succes! The hills are over there!" And with that words, Leafo jumped out of the tree and ran away. "Well..." said Morck. "Let's go to the hills. Flir, you stay here and Kneth, you too. You deserve some rest after what you have done for us."

And the sligs begun to walk in the direction Leafo pointed. They are facing a great danger!

TheBlueScrab · #19 08-20-2001, 01:47 PM

Hi

wow a cool chapter!!

Keep up the good work!

Bye, TheBlueScrab

Cool Paramite · #20 09-07-2001, 05:33 PM

"This story must come to an end! Who writes it?" - Marck
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CHAPTER TEN: THE SHRYKULL
It was night in muun forest, and trough the treetops, you could see the stars. The sligs were very tired. But they walked on, because Flir could die every moment.

And then, they came by the hills. There were almost no trees, no bushes to hide. And they saw the shrykull. Half scrab half paramite. It was a horrible and at the same time majestic creature. "Do we have to fight THIS?" said Marck. "I don't want to die! This story must come to an end! Who writes it?" A moment of silence followed. Then, Nirck said: "Listen, one of us goes to the berries and gets them, and the rest of us will fight the shrykull. When we have the berries, we will run away! I will go fight the shrykull. Listen, with closed eyes, I will turn around and point the one that will get the berries for us, the lucky one!" He turned around and pointed... Gurck!

"Good luck guys." said Gurck. But he didn't feel lucky. The others were going to risk their lives for him. He carried a huge responsibility. Too huge.

TO BE CONTINUED!
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Cool Paramite · #21 09-07-2001, 06:00 PM

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CHAPTER ELEVEN: THE VISION
"Now!" yelled Flar. All the sligs runned to the hills and attacked the shrykull. Gurck flied over the hills, seeking the berries.

Lightning bolts zapped trough the air. One of them fully hit Gurck! He was falling down! Suddenly, he was no longer there...

He was in cript, along with the others, and there were three mudokon spirits. "The chosen sligs." said one of them. "They?" said another spirit. "That one is dying!" he pointed at Flir. He was there too. "That may not happen." said the first one. "Listen, sligs!" said the third one. "I will let disappear the shrykull for a minutes. Take your change!"

Suddenly, he was back in the hills. And the shrykull was gone...
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Cool Paramite · #22 09-08-2001, 04:23 AM

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CHAPTER TWELVE: THE BERRIES
Gurck flied over the hills, seeking for the berries. He found them, and quikly flied to them. he got all the berries, and quikly flied back to the others. "Let's get out of here, before the shrykull comes back!" he yelled.

Some time later, they were back by Kneth and Flir. They all ate some berries, and immediatly felt better. "Phew, that was an adventure!" said Morck. "I am tired, let's sleep. The other sligs agreed, they were very tired too.

The next morning, they awoke. "Guys, thanks for everything." said Flir. "Have you seen that vision too?" "Yes." said all the other sligs. "It was really strange. We, chosen sligs? Chosen for what? Chosen by mudokon spirits?" said Murck. "I don't care about that now." said Nirck. "I want to get out of here! Mudokon terrorists, paramites, shrykull, mudokon spirits!" A moment of silence followed. Then, Kneth said: "I think I know a way to escape the forest. long ago, there crashed a flying vehicle here. Maybe we can fly home with." "But were is it?" said Gurck. "No idea. We have to find it." replied Kneth. "Let's go." And so began the search for the flying vehicle. Will the sligs ever escape Muun forest?

Cool Paramite · #23 09-08-2001, 11:37 AM

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CHAPTER THIRTEEN: THE SLIG TRIBE
It was morning in Muun forest, and the sligs were searching for the flying vehicle.

Suddenly, Morck said: "Do you hear that? It sounds like other sligs!" They listened. "Yes." said the other sligs. "But that can't be!" replied Flir. "We are the first sligs ever in Muun forest."

Suddenly, 18 sligs came out of a tree. Sligs without pants, wings ar masks, with tattoos on their bodies. "Can't be, huh?" said one of them. "Well well, what have we here? Another bunch enslaved by the glukkons? Don't worry, we won't hurt you. Come with us." He climbed back in the tree, along with the others. "Shall we do it?" said Nurck. "Yes, let's do it!" said Kneth. He climbed in the tree, finding out it was easier than he tought. The sligs, except for the flying ones, all climbed in the tree, discovering a village in the treetops. "Hi!" said one if the sligs in the village. It was a big slig, with yellow stripes at his forehead. "Our queen wants to meet you." "The queen?" said Morck. "Queen Skylla is not in Muun forest!"
"No, not that -censor- one, OUR queen." said the big slig.
"Explain that."
"Well, the vykkers took her when she was a baby, and expirimented with her. They wanted to create a second queen, to produce even more sligs! She was terrified, and we decided that we no longer wanted to be slaves of the glukkons. We escaped, and she came with us. The big surprise was that she was indeed a queen, but not a -censor- one. A kind hearted, lovable queen. And she leads our tribe. We are free, happy sligs. Far away from boss-playing glukkons, gunfire and moolah. And now, follow us to the queen."

They agreed, and that would change their lives.

Cool Paramite · #24 09-08-2001, 02:01 PM

"You live to be happy, not to be a soldier from the time you were a child, or be a child producing machine, like queen Skylla." - Queen Sligra
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CHAPTER VERY MUCH: KNETH'S DEPARTURE
There were many wooden houses in the village. The biggest was the one in the middle. "There lives our queen Sligra." said the big slig. "Enter." The door opened, and the sligs walked trough.

Inside, they saw the queen. She looked like a normal slig, but was twice as big (and female.). "Greetings." she said. "What do you seek in Muun forest?" The sligs began to tell the story, about the mudokon terrorists, the crash, the paramite pit, the shrykull, the vision... They were talking for hours, and it became afternoon. "Tomorrow, we are going to seek that vehicle." said Nurck. "What a sad story." said queen Sligra. "We know where the vehicle is. In the dark part of the forest, in the south. It's a region full of bats and fleeches. It's dangerous there. But we don't know what the vehicle is. But, you must be weary. You can sleep at the tavern, there are some sleeping bags for unexpected visitors there." They all went to the tavern, and quikly fell asleep.

They awoke the next morning. "Hey, where is Kneth?" said Morck, after looking around a while. "Yeah, where is he?" said Murck. The door of the tavern opened. And there was Kneth. He had put away his pants, and had some tattoos on his arms: three red stripes each. He still weared his mask. "What the...?" said Nurck. "I joined their tribe." said Kneth. "You don't mean..." said Flir, shocked. "Yes, I stay here." said Kneth. "The sligs here have everything: The are close to nature, and happy.And we? We live a boring life in the barracks. When you guys were sleeping, I had a conversation with queen Sligra. She seemes to like me. Anyway, it is like she said to me: You live to be happy, not to be a soldier from the time you were a child, or be a child producing machine, like queen Skylla." A moment of silence. Then, Flir said: "Well, bye then, we go to home. it was good to know you, and I want to thank you for everything you have done for us. You are the best friend we ever had." The other sligs agreed. "Here, take my gun." said Kneth. "I have still some ammunition left. Farewell."

The whole tribe, now including Kneth, came to say the sligs goodbye. The sligs climbed out of the tree, continuing their path. "Farewell Kneth, we will miss you." they said, before going.

Here ends Kneth's part in this story. Later, he would see his friends again, but that is another story...

Cool Paramite · #25 09-08-2001, 02:02 PM

Edit: Sorry, posted the same chapter twice by accident, will not happen again!

[ September 08, 2001: Message edited by: Cool Paramite ]

Cool Paramite · #26 09-08-2001, 02:54 PM

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CHAPTER DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH, BUT VERY MUCH:
It was morning, and the 8 sligs were walking (and flying) trough the forest. "*Sigh!* I miss Kneth!" said Flir. "He has done so much for us, and now, he leaves us." "Yes, but I think he is going to be happy there." said Morck. "The queen seems to like him very much." "Does anyone know where the south is?" said Marck. "Yes, I have a compass." said Morck. "Made by the workshop slig. Boy, it looks buautifull. We are walking to the south now."

Agter a few hours, they came in the dark part of the forest. The high treetops blocked almost every beam of sunlight to reach the ground. But they could see clearly with the lamps they got from the slig tribe. Suddenly... "Dive!!!" yelled Gurck. A whole swarm of bats suddenly flied over their head. "Phew, that was close. Hey, what do i feel?" said Murck. He looked at his arm. "A fleech! A fleech!" he screamed. "Quikly, let's get out of here!" They all runned away, away from the fleeches. Then, they saw the crashed vehicle...

A looked very strange, and their was written: Voyager 2 on it. It was clearly a satelite. "Oh great, some junk from outer space!" said Flir. "We won't be able to fly with THIS!" "Yes, but I think I got the solution!" said Marck. "I have a strange hobby: repairing things! I can take some parts from this, like that solar panels on the vehicle, and put them on the crashed train to fly with it!" "Marck, you are brilliant!" said Murck. "The only problem is that those panels are heavy, and the lake is far away. We will spend days long carrying these things trough the forest."

But where a will is, is a way! And after days of carrying the panels, they finally reached the lake, down at the mountain feet...

Cool Paramite · #27 09-08-2001, 03:10 PM

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Cool Paramite · #28 09-08-2001, 03:12 PM

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CHAPTER SIXTEEN: AN OLD FRIEND, OR ENEMY?
The sligs were with two solar panels by the lake in Muun mountains. And there laid the train, as a wreck at the shore.

"My repair kit is inside, I will get it." said Marck. He opened the heavely damaged door. Then, suddenly...

Bullets flying trough the air! Marck running away from the train. And guess who comes out the train? Number 3!

"You guys traitors left me inside the train! You wanted me dead, not? I will kill you!!!" he yelled. "Number 3, everything allright? You wanted to stay in the train, don't you remember?" said Flir. "No! And where is Kneth? You have killed him? It's what he deserved, that traitor!" said Number 3. "Nobody may say something like that about our hero!" said Flir. The other sligs were angry too. Suddenly, they pushed Number 3 in the water. Number 3 dissapeared under water.

"What was wrong with him?" said Flir, shocked and angry. "I think the lonelyness drived him crazy." said Morck. "Marck, are you ready to get your repair kit?" "Yes I am." said Marck.

A few hours later, the panels were on the train, and the train was ready to fly. They all stepped in, and Marck started the train. In the light of the sun going under, they flied home, but also to new adventures! Stay tuned for new amazing adventures of this bunch of slig friends! Stay tuned! You will see them again... I promise!

THE END!

Gluk Schmuck · #29 09-09-2001, 06:43 PM

nice fanfic...very good

Cool Paramite · #30 09-10-2001, 03:10 AM

If you want a sequel, go to Fanfic questions! I have some questions about a sequel there. http://www.oddworldian.net/oddworldf...c&f=2&t=000192