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07-21-2005, 11:05 AM
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Chapter 1: Attack on the vault
A Scrab was howling in the distance. A Paramite and a Mudokon were lying in the grass, waching two Mudanchee Warriors guarding a large temple thingy that was being built by other Mudanchees (The Mudanchee Vault!). He whispered to the Paramite " Go back to the camp and tell them what they're doing." The Paramite acknowledged and hopped away, making the lightest rustle. The Mudokon, who's name was Lemone, whistled very quietly, and two Mudomo popped their heads out of the long bushes, both armed with spears, Lemone himself was armed with a short sword. Suddenly there was the sound of marching, and he turned around to see his Mudomo soldiers coming down the path. He beckoned them over and told them of his plan. Spring out from the grass and attack. The army moved out. " ATTACK!" Lemone screamed. But he hd now realised it. The Mudanchee had been waiting for them.

End Of Chapter one! You can create the next Chapter!
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