Outlaw booyah!!

[Taskmaster]

This is a fanfic. a what if fanfic.
Its technickly:What if fatty Mcboomboom wasnt the last outlaw boss?And what if the doc wasnt hang and his second office wasnt even in mongo river?And the stranger had himself a few more bountey's to reach his 20.000 goal?
See it here!!!!one!!!111!!!
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Chapter 1:Heavy metal(part 1)

Hey'hey'hey stranger!!!What gous boom boom clank clank?Fatty Mcboomboom being thrown in jail!Hahahaha!....oke not funny.
Here's ya moolah stranger!There aint no bountey's in this here town an'more.
Go west uh here and ya'll eventualy end up in Fowlinton.
Thank ya kindly':Stranger reply's to the hyper-active clakker.
Stranger walks to the gate and barely hears the clakker who opent the gate yell to him:'now ya'll come back here sum time'
These here places neve' stay save for to long'

After walking a few miles the forest like area swifted to a barrens like area.
Stranger whipes sweat of his brow.'dayme,these area's sure be hot.
'i ada be lucky if i find any live ammo but with these weather's the ammo already be dead:stranger saids to himself with a sacastic foice.
After a few more miles the stranger is relieved to see a gate to a town.
He walks inside the town and walks to a clakker.
'hey feather head.What town is this'Stranger asks
'ohhh dis is the town o fowlinton.Where da eggs are warm a...
'spare me the info!,im just here for the bountey store'
The clakker looks a bit angry at stranger and saids 'da bountey store is up the road'Thank ya stranger reply's
'jackass' the clakker softly saids but pitty-full for him,stranger could hear him
'What did ya say?!' 'Well uhhmmm...i said black...pass...you need a blackpass to uhhmmm get into da blackmarket of this town...yeah.
He quickly takes a black peace of paper and writes the password for the market on it' H..h..here stranger...heres my blackpass fur free!!'
Stranger violently snatches the black paper from the clakkers wing and walks on'

He walks into the local bountey store and the clakker behind the counter greets him.
'sweeeeeet!a bountey hunter!!this is 1 of the outlaw hotspots'
He picks up a pile of about 12 wanted posters from under the counter and
places them on the counter'
'here's ma selection of outlaw's stranger.See anyone ya'll like to punch the face of?'
Stranger looks at the clakker.'well id like to smack your face right 'bout now.
'he looks at the posters and sees an quite ugly face'
'what can ya tell me 'bout this guy?'
'Thats Cybernetix McLaw,he wears a bulky and spikey armor to hide his skin desease.He blaims the clakkerz from this here town for that deasese.
His ugly hide is worth 1200 alive and 900 dead'
Stranger puts the poster in his shirt.
'thanks,do ya also know where he might be hiddin out?'Stranger asks
'wel hes probly hidding out near the opple farm that he turned in his hideout.
There hes probly sits countin' his loot from the wagontrains he robbed with his gang'
Thanks.Next time you see me,i have put that over-sized microwave in jail'
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The outlaw's in this fan fic. are ganna be the outlaw's seen in my home made outlawz post so check it out to see the wanted posters of them(or a few of them anyway)And a few of the words like ya'll and da are just to give it that flat western fealing like in SW.

So tell me what you think about part 1 of chapter 1

[Taskmaster]

OUTLAW BOOYAH!!!!
chapter 1:Heavy metal(part 2)

The stranger walks out op the bountey store and takes a look at the townfolk.It aint the largest town and the best smelling but only the bounteys interest him.
So that Cybernetix guy is hiddin in tha opple farm.Bette ask a no good clakker where ta find that farm,stranger saids to himself.
He walks up to the nearest clakker and asks for the farm.
Hey feather head,wheres that opple farm da guy in da bountey store walks talkin 'bout?Stranger asks to a clakker.
HHhmmm weeeel....its some'ere to the west o her,follow the road through da forest bu watch out fer the outlaw sniper's cybernetix has posted in the tree's.Once you see a sign with:'patch of heaven,you reached the farm.The clakker tell's stranger.Thank ya kindly,stranger reply's
No proby stranger,kick cybernetix's his ass.
His slow walk slowly turns into a charge and charges out of town heading west.Stranger passes a sign saying:Patch of heaven opple farm right this way.With an arrow pointing to the left.But stranger was sespisius for the fact the sign was to close to town and it lookt like it was painted by a 4 year old.
So instead of going left he's going right.
Hhhmmm,its a bit quite here....TO quite.....
Stranger grabs his binoculars and looks for a trace of live.
The forest has high grass,alot of tree's and differant flowers.Its hard to see in the forest and it looks like there arnt even some chippunk's and bolamite's
here.But then suddenly stranger hears something.He crawl's through the bushe's and looks through his binoculars in 1 of the tree's and uses his microfhone to listen in."I just got word of a bountey hunter goin after the boss"he hears somebody say."yeah,yeah i aint stupid or sumethin.If someone go's here i'll blow his brain's out"Another one saids.
Stranger zoom's in with binocular's and discover's its 2 outlaw sniper's.
Stranger takes a look at his ammo bag and has a small selection of ammo left.A zapfly,6 fuzzle's,4 chippunk's,5 sniperwasp's,6 bolamites,and alot of stingbee's.
HHhhhmm,it looks like ma range of my zapfly is to short.I'll just have to improvise with what i have now.Stranger think's to himself.
He shoots a fuzzle to the first outlaw.AAAAARRGHH!!!get of me!!!!Echo's through the forest.In his insane running he dousnt realize he's on a high tree,he falls and die's.GET YA NIGHTFISION GOGGLES ON!!!THA STRANGER IS
HERE AND HE'S HIDDING IN THE BUSHE'S!!!!The second outlaw scream's and also his warning echo's through the forest,warning the other sniper's.
Great,there gous my element of surprise.Stranger thinks.
The outlaw shoots at stranger but probebly never learnt how to aim for stranger could dodge them all.He quickly aim's his crossbow and shoots a fuzzle at him and while he walks to the corpse of the first outlaw the second fall's from the tree and also die's.HHhhmmm only 6 moolah worth dead.*sigh*
well i geus every penny counts.and stranger walks on.
After defeating 3 other sniper's he finds a sign that was broken of and thrown on the ground.It saidsatch of heaven opple farm.Weeell...it looks like i wus right about that sign earlyer.stranger thinks to himself
But when he gets closer he see's something strange.A metal sign saying:
MCLAW MYSTERIE OPPLE JUICE COMPANIE.And with small letters under it it saids:with such unknown stuff in it,even we dont know whats in it.
'McLaw opple juice?this smells like a rat',stranger saids and he walks further.
And when he reaches the farm it looks more like a brewery.About 3 water storage silo's,a water purification plant,a machine that squises opple juice out of large amounts of opple's,a sewer entrance and alot of meat saw's for no appearant reason.'What the hell is cybernetix doin here,turnin a farm into a juice factory'He hears cybernetix saying something through a security fhone.'alright ya scum,i want everyone to keep an eye out fer that no good bountey hunter.I dont wan him mixin up my plan'
'Plan aye?',stranger saids to himself.
'id like to see what his plan is'Stranger walks closer to the facility and see's a number of fuzzle's hopping around and some skunkz.he pickes up a rock and loads it on his crossbow.He shoots it to a fuzzle and quickly picks it up before the other fuzzle's see what he did so they wont come after him.
Then here's the tricky part with the skunkz.He picks up another rock and loads it.He sit's from a far distance and shoot's it to a skunkz,it startles and releases its smelly gas knocking out the other skunkz.He pick's em up and put's them in his ammo bag.The stranger walks further into the facility and sees how well guarded it is.He sees 3 outlaw's talking.2 shooter's and a cutter.He shoots a chippunk to the ground while hidding behind a rock.
'GGGRRR stupid little varment',the shooter scream's and runs to the chippunk.
'hey outlaw,do ya know who ya messin with?',the chippunk taint's while the outlaw try's to jump up and down on the him.
'hey punk,enjoying yourself hittin on a little critter?',stranger saids while aiming a fully charged zapfly at the shooters head.
He fires and takes him out and bountey's him.Then he put's a skunkbom on his crossbow and shoots it at the remaining shooter and cutter.
'haha i bet in a duel i can kick yer ass with my rifle,you wont even get close to me',The shooter saids to the cutter
'ohh yeah we will see bout tha'...and he was interupted by the skunkbom being shot in his face.Strangely enoth the cutter what knockt-out by the blow he got in the face when the skunkbom whas shot in his face while the shooter barfs his non-existant brains out.'i'll see ya 2 in jail',and bountey's them both.Now that the gate keeper's are outa the way stranger walks further into the facility.

[Taskmaster]

I gues i made part 2 a bit long.And nobody has placed feedback.Read it and tell me what you think about it PLZ!

[odd chick]

Overall, I think your idea is a good one. While some people may find it hard to read the dialogue, I actually like the way you wrote it because it is written the way it is spoken in the game. There are a few mistakes that I can point out, though, and that is that there are several spelling/grammar mistakes. As long as you can fix those, it'll be ok. Other than that, the story is good, in my opinion. It seems that you brought the characters' emotions out well, too.

"...the skunkbomb was shot in his face while the shooter barfed his non-existant brains out."
I thought that was sort of funny, for some reason.

[Taskmaster]

Thanks ,i think i'll wait for making the next chapter till i have a few more reply's
That way i'll also have more time to find a spelling checker to run my story through.Im from Holland and spelling isnt my greatest subject,i have no prob.
prannouncing it but when writing it down.....

[odd chick]

Oh, I completely understand that. Some people have trouble like that. Well, I'll be waiting for the next part. Your beginning was cool.

[Taskmaster]

I got some nice reply's of my fanfic,a few threw my personnal messidges so it gous further from here.
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Chapter 1:Heavy metal(part 3)

The stranger walks through a long hallway and soon find's himself in a deep darkness.Day'me....its dark 'n here.
Cant see a thang 'n heeEEEEEEE!!!!!,and stranger fall's into somesort of pit.
-EEEEEERRRrrrre and stranger hit's the ground with a loud SMACK!
Stranger stands up and has an expression like a sleg on his face.
That was complet'ly wacked,stranger complains.'Least this place is decently lighted.Stranger walk's further into the cave like area wich seems to look like an old mining tunnel.Wére the hell am i?This aint lookin like a place build by them day'me clakkz,Stranger saids to himself.
After sometimes stranger has a look at the rocky wall's around him and discovers rock painting's.Lemme see here,stranger saids when he looks at the painting's.The paintings look like frog creatures aboufe something that looks like a drained river.A squid like creature with red eyes is looking down at them while around the rock painting are things that looks like the frog creatures but dead,while creatures holding things that look like guns are standing on-top and around the corpses.
This prob'bly some paintin's done by the native's in these part's.As the stranger walk's further he see's light at the end of the tunnel.
But he find's something alot differant then an opple farm.Everywhere water storage silo's that suck water from the river that come's out of the cave.
A number of brewing machines and machines that push juice out of opple's
and outlaw's as far as your eye's reach and maybe further.
Suddonly stranger hear's a metalic,bouldering foice through the intercom.
'ALRIGHT YOU SLUGZ.I GOT WORD OF A BOUNTEY HUNTER COMING TOWARD'S US USING THE SECRIT UNDERGROUND TUNNEL.IF YA'LL SEE ANYONE THAT AINT BELONG 'ERE,BLOW ES HEAD OF OR POUND EM OR WHAT'EFFA YA WANNA DO WITH EM.....'
That sounded like cybernetix.But were is that walkin' toaster,stranger saids to himself.Stranger sneak's through the facility and hide's in the bushe's to prevent detection.He hide's in the bushe's and draw's alot of outlaw's at him using chippunk's.Why these dumbasse's alway goin after these punk's?
Dont they think it's strange there budd's aint comeing back?Stranger wonder's
Aint inportant,as long as these here outlawz are worth a decent amount a' moolah.Stranger walk's further and reache's one of the brewery silo's and wonder's what there brewing.He climb's up a ladder and has a look see at the stranger liquid in the tank.Wha is this stuff?It aint soulstorm brew couse this stuff is yellow,brownish.HEY WADDA YA DOIN THERE!Stranger hears behind him.Its an outlaw cutter and he run's toward's stranger ready to 'cut' him.
I wus just lookin' at the fine construction,stranger reply'es while he dodges the cutter and give's him a smack down.He suck's him up and bounty's em alive.Hey *hik* wawuz that? *hik*As a outlaw gunner said's when he walk's to stranger.Eyyyyy that aint you george*hik*
Stranger looks at the outlaw and saids:this guy look drunk.Maybe ya wanna drink so'more and stranger throw's the drunken outlaw in the silo.But instead of drowning the outlaw drinks half of the brew or whatever it is and now stands in a small puddle of liquid.Hahahaha....*hik*ya cant kill m....m.....me....
And the outlaw suddenly start's barfing.What tha hell is he doin?And stranger jumps after the outlaw in the silo and now also stands in the small puddle.
Suddenly the outlawz skin become's more green then it already was an he get's spot's all over his face.And before stranger even know's whats up,the outlaw drops dead.Stranger bounty's him and then he hear's cybernetix saying something threw the intercom.'HEY,WHAT DID I TELL YA BOY'S ABOUT DRINKIN THE JUICE RIGHT OUTA THE SILO'S?1 OF THE SILO'S IS COMPLETELY DRAINED!'
'I WANT YA IDIOT'S TO CHECK OUT THE SILO AND GIVE STATUS REPORT'
Ooohh great,im scruwed now,stranger think's to himself and jump's outa the silo.He contineu's and try's to afoid the special patrol that's looking at the silo.Stranger gous further into the facility and shoots a few chippunk's(yes at the same time)at a spot,making a few go there.Hope ya like the smell stranger saids and shoot's a skunkbom at them and bounty's them while there pukkin' and gous further.He silently takes out the sniper's by shooting them down with zappfly and even get's a few mortar's alive.
He see's a few boombat's and load's a rock on his crossbow.These boy's are explosive so i betta aint scare em to much or they ganna go boom.
He shoots a rock right into a boombat's kisser and luckely he dousnt explode.
After knocking down a few more he run's to the boombat's and put's them in his ammo bag.He alks up to a wall with a hole in it and look's through it and see's a rather large outlaw and a few minion's watching TV.
You think the bounty hunter's close boy's?the large outlaw saids with the same metalic foice as through the intercom.We'll,we expect him to be 'ere soon boss,an outlaw mortar saids.
I hear he might be realy close.alot of the posted guard's are missing,a outlaw gunner saids.GGGRRRRR those idiot's probebly fell from a platform or in an opple juice machine,the large outlaw saids with a irritated foice.
Well i gues that could be but what if the bounty hunter IS here and they didnt get themself's killed,the gunner saids.
An ackward silence fall's and the large outlaw stand's up.You guy's probly right.Franky,go get my summer mask.Suddenly stranger get's shot in his back by a sniper dart.That's a cheap shot ya sucka,stranger saids to the sniper and charge's at the sniper,knock's him out and bounty's em.
But the outlaw wasnt without backup,stranger gets amboushed by alot of gunner's,automatic gunner's,sniper's and a few knife thrower's.
Good thing i got these here boombat's.He shoots a boombat at the gunner's and quickly bountey's them.Then he charge's at the knife thrower's knocking out a decent amount of them but getting some knife's thrown at him.
Quickly he put's stingbee's on his crossbow and kill's the remaining knife thrower's.Then he bounty's them and run's at the remaining gunner's and a few automatic machine gunner's.Stranger was doing well but he suddenly hear's something behind him.You enjoying ya self stranger?And while stranger try's to turn around he only see's a grey,metal fist hitting him right in the face,and a painfull blow hurl's him into a wall.Everything gous black and the last thing stranger hear's is a metalic yet diabolical laugh.

[odd chick]

Nice chapter, Taskmaster. I love the fight-scenes you put into the chapter. This story reminds me of an Oddworld videogame....and that's good because not many stories that I read remind me of one of the games. Keep it going!

[Abe16]

I am amazed in your progress in this story! please continue!

[Dancing Steef]

I agree with Abe16, great story dude! keep'em comming!

[Taskmaster]

Chapter 1:heavy metal(part 4)

Stranger wake's up and find's himself hanging to a metal chain abouf a meat saw.What the hell is this fer?Hey there stranga!enjoy hangin' around?
Stranger look's up and looks at the very large outlaw wearing a spikey,bulky armor.It was the outlaw he had seen before and he's standing on top of a water storage silo bigger then the other one's and next to him are 2 sniper's.And who might you be ya farmint?stranger asks.
I thought ya'll be smarter then that,the large outlaw saids and he takes of his mask.Then stranger sees the outlaw's face and its yellow,greenish and covert with spots.His face itself is rather ugly and stranger directly recognice's him.We'll if it aint cybernetix Mclaw,stranger said's.
And may i ask what ya planning on doin' with those brew machine's and storige silo's?We'll in case ya havnt nodiced:my skin is differant color cous i have a virus that hasnt bin a cure for yet.By a stupid struck a luck i didnt die of it but it's not like i enjoy live with ma lil' problem.Heartburn,pain in my arm,
ubnoxious when i woke up.It's like ma live is a scream of pain and its all couse o those damn clakkz who used to own this here farm.They aint realy good at making those rare opple's eat-able and when i ate it,a bacteria in the opple gave me the toloxin virus.And i found my perfict way of revenge,cybernetix saids.Why?ya already took over the farm so whats left to avenge?stranger asks.Well i gues im just a realy evil dude,and cybernetix grins.Im making bottle's of opple juice and put a powder dat contain's the toloxin virus and i mix it with the opple juice inside da silo's.
And since most people aint got the resistance of the poison like i do,they die of it in a mather of seconds,cybernetix saids and grabb's a nottle of opple juice.HAHAHAHAHA!HOW'S THAT FUR REVENGE!,and he drink's the bottle empty and crushe's it in his hand.Oke i see ya point...sorta...but why didnt ya just throw me in the saw instead of hanging me here?Stranger asks.
Well i have a special suprise for ya.He take's a coin from his pocket and hold's it up.Ya see this here coin?Its a 1 moolah coin.Bet ya dont know how these things look couse ya neva had less the 100 moolah.I will flip it and if its head's i will throw ya in the saw and if it's tails i'll let ya go and ya have to face me,cybernetix explain's.He throw's it in the air,catche's it and looks on it.
We'll looka that.its tail's.ya lucky stranger but its only a mather of time before you will die on my floor.He put's his mask back on and take's a leap to the platform where stranger is,then an outlaw pushes a button and the saw below him closes and stranger is cut loose.I hope ta know howda wrestle stranger couse ya silly ammo wont do a thing here,cybernetix saids.
Well i gues i adda find out myself,stranger reply's and loads a thugslug on the crossbow and fire's it at cybernetix.Cybernetix only gets a small backfire and grins.That the best ya got stranger?Hell no,stranger saids and loads a boombat and he also fire's that.A huge explosion hits cybernetix and where he stands is a large smokescreen.HAHAHAHA that tikkle's stranger,he suddenly hears and cybernetix walks out of the smoke unharmed.
Nows my turn,and he runs at stranger and try's to giver him a few quick blow's.Stranger is to fast for him and charge's away.HHhmmm the bigger they are the easyer they'll fall,stranger saids and he hide's behind a crate.
A short silence fall's and stranger peeks at where cybernetix was first standing.HHhhmm where is he,he saids.HERE BOY!cybernetix yell's and grabs stranger from behind and hurls him to the ground and then give's stranger a body slam.He stand's up and looks at stranger,who try's to get up.
Down in the first round aye?you pannsy!cybernetix saids.
Then stranger jump's up and stand's face to face with cybernetix.He quickly load's his crossbow with a thugslug and hits cybernetix in the head up to so close that he is blown back for about a meter.He feels at his mask and there's a large crack in it.Ohhh no.Get the air support here!!!!,cybernetix yell's
What the hell is air suppor?,stranger aksk to himself and suddonly 6 outlaw mortar's come and start shooting there missiles.Stranger run's and both dodge's cybernetix's blows and the missile's and hide's under a bridge like construction on the platform.Great now i gata get them bomber's ouda the way,stranger saids.He runs to cybernetix,hey sparkpug,come a get me!,stranger saids.GGGRRRR i'll show ya and he try's to pound stranger and the mortar's keep shooting and hit cybernetix exidently.AAAhhgg what the hell is that fur varments!!,he yell's and by doing that he distract's the mortar's giving the starnger a chance to shoot them with zapfly and to make them fall in the meat saw's serounding the platform.Im fed up with ya stranger!time to get up close and personnal and cybernetix runs to him.
Starnger charge's away to a higher platform and wait's there and cybernetix is getting closer.He jump's down when he try's to smack him and aim's with a sniperdart on his chest and shoot.The blow kncoks him back and he fall's of the platform and falls toward's a spike-trap.AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH SWEET MOTHER OF ODD!!!,cybernetix screams.Stranger wants him alive so he runs to where cyber is falling,he aim's at cybernetix with a thugslug and quickly hits him in the face and blowing him back,making him not fall in the spikes.
Stranger wasnt sure if it was becouse of the thugslug,the frightning experiance or both but cybernetix fainted.He walks up to him and feel his heartbeat through his wrist.Well buddy,good new and bad new.Good news is that ya aint dead but bad news is ya be waking up in jail,stranger saids.
And he bounty,s cybernetix alive.1200 moolah in the pocket,better get back to town and bounty this slug.

[Dancing Steef]

good chapter Taskmaster! I wanna read more!

[odd chick]

That chapter was fantastic, Taskmaster! The action sequence was very well-written. Keep this going because it's getting very interesting!

[Taskmaster]

Im happy you guy's like it it contineua's here!
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Chapter 2:BURN BABY BURN!(part1)

The stranger return's to Fowlinton with a grin on his face and a pocket filled with moolah.He walk's up to the bounty store and pushe's open the door.
Hey thar stranger,didnt be expecting you to be commin' back here...well
in 1 peace that is,the clakker behind the counter say's trying to be funny.
I was expectin' McLaw to be pounding ya face right bout now.
The only one who's ganna be doin' the poundin here is me,stranger replys
He walk's to an empty jail cell(not that there are any jailcells with outlaw's in them.The clakkerz arnt the best crime fighters)and simply pushe's a button and Cybernetix McLaw was slingshoted out of the crossbow without wearing his armor and instead wearing a striped jail suit and still outcontious.
Weeeeeell good job stranger,you bagged em good.1 alive McLaw is 1200 moolah,and the clakker hands him the moolah bringing him 1 step closer to
the operation that will make him 'normal'
Ya got sum more bounty's featherhead?stranger asks the clakker
OOooohh sure i got a whole stack of em,and the clakker puts the pile of wanted posters on the counter again.Here's a scum bag i can sponser.1 of the worst kinds id be seein' here in fowlinton,the clakker saids and he hands stranger a wanted poster with an outlaw covering his face a metal skull shaped mask.HHhmm be lookin like another retard obsesed with metal,stranger saids.Well ya could bring it like that.He's actualy an old friend of McLaw,he used to be second in command of his wagon train robbin' gang untill be started a pyro quest himself,the clakker reply's
How so?What ya be meenin by 'pyro quest',stranger asks
Weeeel that has alot do do with his crime's you see this guy is scourge underwood,a guy that was probly born with a hatred for forests and woods and gras field's and...well everythin natural.He also love's mechanical gadget's
he isnt only a wanted pyromanic that love's to put forests on fire but also for abducting clakk scientists and robbin' gadgit store's.His crazy ass is worth 1200 alive and 800 dead,the clakker explains.
He might be 100 mooah worth less dead then McLaw but thats only couse McLaw's crime's wer i bit more serius.This guy's alot thougher than McLaw and will burn everythin in his path.
I'll take the bounty,stranger saids and he puts the wanted poster in his shirt.
Where i be findin' this clown,he conclude's
Whellp...just go north to the scarlet forest.When you start to smell heavy industrie and burning tree's your mighty close,the clakk expalins once more
Thank ya kindly,stranger said's and walk's away.
He take's a good look at the poster and look's at the flamethrower scourge hold's.This aint no weak boy....im sure a that....,and the stranger head north.
The hot desert is almost getting the best of stranger.He's bit angry he didnt buy something to drink in town but time is an importent thing when it come's to bounty hunting.He reache's a forest but most of the tree's are burned or dont have leaf's anymore.He contineu's and take's alook around him,looking at the fact the further he go's into the forest the more tree's are unharmed.
Maybe stranger was going the wrong way,or maybe scourge underwood isnt so rude and pyro as the clakker said he was or maybe scourge thought it would be fun to start at the outerside of the forest and then destroy the tree's in the centrum of the forest.But he walked further into the huge forest and sees himself a caravan with about 7 outlaw's at it.He grabs his binocular's and use's the microfhone to listen in at the outlaw's
'Hurry up ya idiot's!!we gatta get this supply of gunpowder ta scourge before he's ganna be gettin' his underpants in a bundle',an outlaw gunner saids.
'why he need's dis gunpowder anyway?he got enoth gunpowder most of us can play catch wit it',another gunner said's
'probly becouse scourge like's the way it explode's,anyway:we got order's so let's go',a cutter saids'.'But how are ya plannin' to get the gunpowder ta scourge?the bloody caravan is busted!!!',the firest outlaw saids.
Strange has heard enoth and wasnt planning on wasting his time on listening to a bunch of stupid outlaw's and shoots 3 chippunk's behind him and 3 outlaw gunner's come charging at the chippunk's and 1 yelling:we'll be back in a sec guys!just gatta get rid of these varment's
And as the 3 outlaw's try stomping the little buggers stranger loads a zapfly and a bolamite.He shoot's the charged zaplfly at 1 of em and the bolamite at another and when there out cold he quickly load's a thugslug and shoot's it at the 3de outlaw before he could call for reinforcement's.
He quckly bounty's em before they snap out of it and shoot's 2 more chippunk's at an open spot.With a zapfly and a bolamite he capture's the cutter and a machinegunner.But instead stranger wasts more ammo on the remaining 2 he just waits for the 2 machine gunner's to get woried and look for the budd's.After a minute of waiting the 2 walk to the open spot's around the boushe's where stranger is hidding.Hey murfy,you found em yeeeeee!!!
And is interupted by stranger shooting a zapfly at his head.He run's to the bush close to the knockt-out outlaw and bounty's him.Uuuhhh Billy?Where are you?,the outlaw asks hopping for an answorr.....I..I...im kinda scared pal...And stranger sneak's up behind the outlaw.why you scared chump he said's and when the outlaw turn's around he headbutt's the outlaw,pounding him into a tree.BBBBlargF,the outlaw yells as he hit's the tree and get's knocked out.Stranger walk's up to him and in a few seconds he suck's the machinegunner into his crossbow.Stranger walk's to the caravan loaded with barrel's of gunpowder.HHhhmmm this guy musta be crazy fur stuff that gous boom.Well atleast a know this is the right forest,now i just gatta find scourge,stranger said's to himself and walk's further into the forest.

[odd chick]

Nice chapter, Taskmaster. This is a nice twist that you have put on Stranger's Wrath-I like it. Keep the story going.

[Dancing Steef]

wow Taskmaster yer story rox! I wanna read more!

[Taskmaster]

Im very sorry my fanfic. hasnt bin updated but its vacation and if bin...distracted....and im not sure if this reply will put the fic back on the first page but i hope so.
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Chapter 2:BURN BABY BURN!(part2)

As the stranger contineu's he starts to smell something.
'Sniff,sniff.....hhhhmm what da hell is dat smell?' he wonders.
He smell's a strong burning stench.The combination of burning wood and the twisted laughing sound of outlaw's give's the forest a grimson feal.
He dousnt like the place as most tree's are chopped,dead or burned to ashe's and start's walking slowly.
'i gots a bad feelin' bout this place...'stranger saids to himself quietly.
As he walk's further he see's a large building with smoking machine's and a large board with 'Fowlington dynamite factory' writen on it.
By the look of the outlaw's walking around the building,stranger is sure that scourge is up there.He grab's his binocular's and zoom's in to a window with the light on and a boat load of gunpowder.
'good....nowda find me way up there an bust sum heads'stranger saids as he sneak's from his current position to a patch of high grass.
He take's a look at 3 outlaw's playing go-fish.
'ya got any king's....?'the first outlaw ask's. 'Go fish man.'the other 2 say.
'Hhhhmmm now i just gatta see howda take those 3 out....'stranger think's
He then load's a boombat and isnt planing on taking it easy
He shoot's it on the table of the outlaw's playing go-fish.
'Got any...BOOMBAT!!!!'the second outlaw scream's and a large explosion follow's.2 of em were killed while 1 was only knocked out and stranger run's up to them and bounty's em.'In fur a penny in fur a pound'stranger saids and he grin's.He dousnt waste time and walk's further to the factory.
The gate is guarded by a outlaw gunner and an outlaw with a flamethrower.
'While i go patrol inside,ya beter stay here an guard this place'the flametrower outlaw saids.'sure,whatever man'the other saids.
Stranger loads a bolamite and aim's.Once the flamethrower is in a decent distance,he fire's the bolamite at the gunner and quickly runs to him.The flamer hear's the gunner fall and gets suspicious.Stranger grab's the webbed outlaw and drag's him out of the flamer's field of vision.'uhhh jerry?...sigh....
ya cant get that @!%#r to listen.....'the flamer said as he walk's towards the exit.'jerry?....JERRY!!!!...'he yells and he suddenly gets a thugslug hurled into his face.Stranger bag's em and walks throught the gate.The building is run down on the inside.Burn mark's everywhere and large pile's of dynamite and gunpowder.The stranger hear's a few outlaw's talking around the corner.
About 5 of em,3 machinegunners and 2 cutters.Luckely for stranger there standing near a large gunpowder/ammo stash.He charge's his zapfly and aim's.
'see ya round ya varmints'he saids and he shoots the zapfly at the stash.Before the outlaws could look where the voice was coming from they were in the middel of a rather large explosion.Stranger gets blown back by the explosion and hits a wall with great force.'AARGH!!!'he yells and looks at the large fire the explosion coused.'day-me dat was unexpected,bette be more carefull'he said's and he walk's up a stair's.Not noducing the fire he coused was growing bigger and bigger.
He come's in a room with 2 outlaw's.He charge's his zapfly again and shoot's it at the first outlaw then quickly uses a bolamite on the other.
'Hhhmm i was hopping on a challendge but these guys are small fries..'stranger mumble's to himself as he walk's up the next stair's.
He end's up in a room with 8 outlaws and about 4 dynamite stashe's.
'now dat's wha im talkin bout.'An outlaw gunner hear's him and soon all 8 are shooting at em.He gets hit a few time's but hide's behind a pole and loads thugslug's and stingbee's.It turn's into a real fire fight and a few well placed bee's in the head and 1 outlaw less.An outlaw think's hes intelegent and tosses a grenade behind stranger.He only feel's a light burn but a dynamite stash blow's up,hurling him forward and blasting the pole.The explosion coused the other 4 to explode to and it become's a choas.'YA MORON!!!
THAT WAS A SUPPORT POLE,YA GANNA INDANGER OUR LIVE'S!!!'an outlaw machine gunner's yell's fiercly to the simple brain who tossed the grenade.
The explosion take's all outlaw's out and bounty hunter quickly bounty's em as the roof is suddenly coming down.'Ohh crap,its gettin' a bit hot in here.And while he saids that the fire he started 2 stair's lower is starting to rise.He quickly run's up stair's and pushing away all outlaw's and dodging there bullet's.Explosion's everywhere and fire's starting and growing in differant place's,stranger ada get outa there and fast!.
He run's to the room where he saw the light but scourge has already left the room.The dynamite stash in that room suddenly explode's by the amazing heat generated by the fire a stair below them and stranger is once again blown clear.'yea i think i gatta get outa here now!'stranger said's as he climb's the last few stair's.He end's up on the roof and the fire is raging behind him.He's running to the other side but a fire suddenly bursts there to.
He now stand's in a ring of fire and see's something moving in the fire.
'weheheeeeell bounty hunter,what are ya?trapped like da varmint ya are?'
An outlaw covert completely in metal armor walk's out of the fire.He hold's a flamethrower in his hand and has 2 tank's on his back.
'well,.i be guesing that your known as scourge underwood hhmm?'stranger said's as he look's over the outlaw.
'i sure like hell am bounty hunter.You messed with the thunder and your about to reap the inferno!'scourge said's as he aim's his flamethrower at the stranger.
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With this post is also a wanted poster of scourge underwood i made meself

[Dancing Steef]

Nice chapter Taskmaster It was a very exciting part of yer story! I like it alot keep it going! yer really good at writing... I'll soon update me own thread with a new chapter of the story so...
See Ya!

DS

[odd chick]

Update!!! Cool chapter, Taskmaster. I've got to say that you've really nailed Stranger's character-his personality and characteristics are not off in any way-they're right on the spot. Also, I like the action sequences because they're very descriptive and intense. Keep up the good work!

[big bro boogie]

Whoa! That's just amazing Taskmaster!
I agree with odd chick, you've done a great job on the action sequences.
I could just visualize it all without any problem.
I love yer wirk, dude. Keep it up.

[Taskmaster]

Thank you guys very much for the great reviews!
Sorry for not updating the Fanfic. for so long.Im having 2 problems:
1:im lazy
2:im having kinda a writer's block
I'll get on it as soon as i have new idea's.Thanks for you guys liking it,just wish i had given it a beter name