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07-14-2004, 09:42 AM
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Oddworld: Odder than Oddworld

Odder Than Oddworld
by: Paramiteabe


Chapter: 1

"In the vastness of this great world of mine a huge shadow looms over the rugged landscape of the lush world of diabolical danger. The continent of Mudos this land was called gave way to the horror inwhich the Magog Cartel had just established. It was here a new form of business was founded. Entertainment was in the eyes of the glukkons and cheap slave labor would provide such entertaining business. Moolah was at a high because of this form of entertainment. It was the very first Magog Circus that made the crowds flock to see. What lie in the great tent was a horror beyond imagine. Mudokon gladaitors pumped up on steroids faceing their death at the mercy of scrabs and other vicious Oddworld preditors. But how did such a horrific circus begin? Surely there was more to the glukkon circus than pumped up Mudokon gladaitors on Steroids. Indeed there was and that is what lies on the other side. Me and my kind, The brotherhood of odd! Yes we are odder than this place and captive by these crazy crustaceans. My name is Ga-Mork and this is me story. Whats different about me and my kind is we all look different than each other but we are the same species taken into captiveity. We come from a far away place that in time we will understand. I tell ya in the beginning it never was like this. But we were fooled and I will not let me and my kind become cheap entertainment for those gluks! The crazy thing is we don't know where we came from perhaps I should tell you me story so that we could figure it out together!"
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07-14-2004, 10:06 AM
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And i thought things couldt'n get any Odder! Yay circus.

EDIT: Wait, you copyrighted something Oddworld. Is that even possible? I it is, then that's great!
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07-14-2004, 06:18 PM
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No its not an official copyright its a warning to let you know to not copy my story. I am a very copyright conscious person these days now. Well I guess the copyright isn't needed seemingly this is under the Oddworld title no need to worry. Ill go ahead and get rid of it.

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07-14-2004, 07:52 PM
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It's a good story so far.
Needs more yet though.

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07-15-2004, 11:40 AM
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hmmm... i would like to show that i copyrighted my oddworld things. I mean i woud'nt want them to steal my disegnes.
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