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08-05-2001, 07:05 PM
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Reptilian Warriors

Jaaz was doing his normal, daily routine. Fetching the water from the lake for the village. The lake wasn't that far but he did have to cross the corn fields and through a small wood. Although it was his routine and his "Duty" as a Mudokon. He hated it. Why couldn't it be a punishment for convicts he always thought.
As he trudged along with the Urn he sensed something strange about today. It was a sort of bad feeling. The feeling that you get when you know someones watching you...with a bad intent. But he shrugged it off and just put it to his anger of the job.
Finally he came to the lake. It was quieter than usual, usually birds sang in the trees surrounding the lake and fish jumped out the water catching the flies that skimmed the surface. But today...no fish and no birds. He bent down with the Urn and dipped it in the water. The water flooded in and got heavier. He grunted as he lifted the Urn...the Urn was heavy and he grunted as he lifted it out of the water. He usually tried to get back as soon as he could, but this time he was too tired and wanted to relax for abit while he was near the lake. After all it was a nice day. He crouched down near the water and splashed some up in his face. It was refreshing to say the least. Having his hot skin cooled down. But something made him stop enjoying this moment. Something that made him turn puzzled. Something that made his eyes widen with fright and his skin shiver with fear. As he stared a creature of around 6-7ft stared back. Cluching onto the the branches of a small tree. The creatures yellow eyes pierced his skin like a thousand knives. A low snarl uttered from its slightly opened mouth, its lips pulled back to show a array of razor sharp teeth. Jaaz did not want to take any chances and he knew from experience that a creature with claws and sharp teeth was a carnivore. His eyes never left the creature as he slowly stood up. He noticed the creature was of a Lizard variety, it had green scales that covered its intire body. The scales on its back were darker than the ones on its stomach. The stomach scales were more yellowy than green. The creature put one foot on the soily ground. It had two toes and they had black sharp claws, which dug into the ground and left imprints in the soil. Jaaz gasped and realised if he was going to run, it had to be now. And he did, at top speed he ran, leaving the Urn behind near the lake. He crashed through the branches knocking vines and leaves out of the way he ran with fear in his heart.

Jaaz: "Help...Help me please!"

As he reached the open he screamed, he saw the town in the distance and waved his arms frantically as he approached.

Jaaz: "Carnivor...Help me, please help!!"

He turned his head to look over his shoulder and saw the creature watching him. It was crouched on all fours and slowly moving forwards towards him. He turned back around to make sure he did not trip. But as he ran towards the corn fields he realised he could hear panting behind him and the thuds of claws. He ran faster but realised the sounds were getting louder and what seemed like closer. Until...thud!
His body dropped to the ground and he rolled to a stop. He raised his head and saw the foot of the creature come down on his neck, pinning him. It bent down and looked at him, hissing and smelling him. Finally after smelling him he screeched, throwing its head back towards the sky it screamed. The scream was corse and scratchy and went through Jaaz's body like a knife through butter. But as the creature finished 2 more cries could be heard from the distance...and thats when he realised his village was in danger.
Jaaz opened his mouth to scream for help but all that came out was a short mutter. The giant Reptile looked down on him and growled. Before clenching its 3 toed hand into a fist and punching through his skull. Shattering it to pieces. The blood soaked through the dirt and the Lizard stood up on its hind legs and screamed once again. This time a scream of victory...
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08-07-2001, 04:12 AM
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NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Not jaaz please.... Boo hoo, sob... Great fic. Is it finished? It didn't make me yawn. That's a good fic.
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08-07-2001, 03:00 PM
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The screeches of 2 unknown creatures startled the villagers in the nearby village. A village farmer working in the field was especially startled considering one of the sounds came from the nearby corn field. The Mudokon picked up his pitch fork and walked forwards towards the field, trying to keep as silent as possible. Holding his pitchfork in front of him he batted the ears of corn with it. Slowly moving forwards and keeping as silent as possible. A rustle to his right made him stop in mid walk. He was about 4 metres into the corn field and could not see the ground below due to the swaying ears of corn. He span around and walked backwards, facing the direction from were the sound came from. Suddenly he saw a scaled back rise from the patch of corn in front of him and a low growl made him shudder. The growl sounded like that of a Slog, yet he knew there was none around the village and thus knowing it was something far more sinister.

Villager: "Jock...look out! Behind you...Jock!!"

A villager was watching the farmer. Jock had owned the farm for 3 yrs and had watched it and nurtured it to its full potential. But this time the corn had grown too long and could hide many dangers. In this case the Reptilian behind him. Jock span around holding the pitch fork and was met immediatly by a claw to his face. He dropped into the corn and looked up. There stood a beast, a scaled reptilious beast with the teeth four times the size of a Slogs. Jock throwed the pitch fork at him but that obviously did no damage. The creature snarled and turned its head to the village and then sprinted towards it on its hind legs. Jock slowly stood up thinking he was lucky. But the sound of 3 other growls made him turn around. He did this slowly, trying not to make a sound. He saw 3 other reptilians on all fours looking at him. Their eyes glowing with the intent to kill. Jock gasped and backed away slowly before turning around and running full speed towards the forest.

Jock: "No...Ohh-N-no. It cant be...please"

He stopped and stuttered these words in a hushed whisper. What he had seen had terrified him. A whole, entire spawn of reptiles was emerging from the forest and slowly walking towards the village. The creatures were on all fours and their shoulder blades moved up and down with each step their front legs took. The only thing that went through his mind at that point was to get to another village. But he realised that was no impossible as he felt a sharp sting in the back of his leg and then another one on his neck. He was pinned down by 2 reptilians while the other paced around his defensless body. He tried to move but everytime he tried the sting in his neck got ever more painfuller. Until..."Snap" His neck was bit in two like a petty twig. His lifeless body laid there. Blood pouring from the neck and been soaked in by the dried soil. The 3 creatures that had killed him turned their attention to the village and planned to join their bretheren who were already there.
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08-07-2001, 06:17 PM
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hey iwas go'n add a lizerd worrier to my stats can a still add him?
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08-07-2001, 06:53 PM
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We dont have stats n e more do we? Yeh, sure u can still add him.
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08-14-2001, 02:07 PM
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interesting stories.

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