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Thankyou very much MunchOnThis.

Hmm... Well things are not looking too good for you people. You see if I don't get feedback, I don't write more. So basically, you are deciding if anyone will ever get to read the full version of this masterpiece. Tsk tsk.
Nah! Just kidding, I'm gonna write it anyway but please tell me what you think. Oh and all those that do, get chocolate.

So the next chapter exists but things are swinging off course a little... As in every event I make happen takes a whole chapter when some were originally meant to be two in one. But I can't say thats not good, after all, most of the best stories are long.

Shall we get into it? Alrighty then...

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Dan came out the other side as if he had just performed a normal jump, except for the fact that he was outside a forest. He recognized it as the one he had sped through whilst being pursued. The flames were high and Paramites were fleeing. Dan remembered them from the cages alongside his in Vykker’s Labs.

Behind him the Mudokon who opened the portal jumped out, it closed and the birds returned, flying off into the night sky.

There was a structure nearby, made up of four tall rocks with wood sticking up out of them. There was a big grey shrub in the middle.

The Muds were rushing over to it and forming a ring around it. Dan overheard someone say something about ‘the stormcircle’ and he guessed that’s what it was.

The last one joined and they began waving their arms up and down as if worshipping it. From the tips of the four rocks shot four blue, jagged bolts that joined in the center. Then from three more rocks, which Dan had thought to be randomly placed, shot more bolts which joined with the others in the middle. They then formed one big bolt and shot up into the sky.

Dark clouds began forming and filling the sky. They blocked out everything that that shined, including the two moons. The only light left was from the blazing fire. Lightning struck across the sky and rain began to fall. The rain got heavier and heavier until the water drops were the size of golf balls. But the truly odd thing to Dan was that was that it only fell upon the forest, and nowhere else.

Within five minutes the fire had extinguished and the rain was slowing. All of a sudden there was a horrible hissing noise and a burning Paramite came half running, half stumbling out of the bush. Its back two legs were badly burnt and flames were climbing up its back.

It was running around mad. The Mud with the wooden contraption on his arm glanced over to the Mud who opened the portal. He nodded so the first one raised his device and shot at the Paramite. It missed. He tried again but it wouldn’t stay still so he couldn’t hit it.

Dan saw what he was trying to and he sprinted towards the creature and dived on it. He heard people make comments like "Wow" and "So fast…" as he tightened his grip.

One last shot was fired which hit directly in the Paramites mouth and it fell limp. Two Muds came over, picked it up and dragged it away.

The older looking Mudokon also came over. He said, "Come to my hut tonight." He walked off a little and reopened the portal.

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...Another chapter past, what do you think now? It is gonna develop to be quite a story you know, so best compliment it now so you can look back and say, "I encouraged that."
It's a good investment.

I'm getting ahead of myself here but I think for once I may do a sequel. No, not that this is anywhere near the end. You will meet a character next chapter that I may base the rest of my fanfics around. Not having him as the main charater but a main character... Rather like Jay and Silent Bob... And in the end give him his own story. Who knows?

I just love these little chats we have.

Coming soon: A friendship forms...