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Ok, here I go, my second fanfic.

What I am perceiving as the problem for the lack of responses for Zeeron's Tale (and I thank those who did for their kind comments), was that I posted the whole story all at one time, and that people felt a little afraid to read it as it seemed so long. But let me tell you this: It was the same size as others on here but it was all at once. Why can you not understand this? I'm trying to help you. Just listen to me!!! *Starts bashing the keyboard*
...I'm sorry, I got a little carried there.

Zeeron's Tale: Read it now! Read it now! Read it now!

Now back to the subject.
This story is not the sequel to my last fanfic (how could it be?). And it is also unlike my other in the way it does not follow the Quintology.

I don't know how the rest is gonna go but I have the next chapter in mind.
Summary: Dan is a super fast mudokon escaping from the newly reconstructed Vykkers Labs.
I know it's short, that's all I've got but the story will unfold.

Here it is...

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Dan Express

Our story begins with Test Subject no. 15372 (or Dan as he liked to be called.) sprinting across a dark field in the middle of the night.

He has no idea where he is but he knows where he’s aiming for. He is heading for the bright silver moon that shines before him, with its face looking oddly like an imprint of his hand. After all, where else has he got to go to get away from these madmen?

Hot on his trail, the Vykker gun ship speeds, Meep scattering below it.

"Go faster Derrick, you idiot!" yelled Mantuss the Glukkon.

"Shut up! I’m trying to concentrate!" replied the Vykker pilot.

Dan spotted a forest and ran into it.

The ship flew over top for a moment.

"Torch it!" screamed Derrick to the slig in control of the weapons

His mask was hooked up to a socket in the roof to provide enhanced sight and aiming. His hands were on two control sticks. He pushed the top button on the left stick and a disk flew out of one of the side of the ship and sank out of view into the forest. In an instant it exploded, sending a flame ring setting fire to everything in a thirty metre radius.

"Dammit!" cried Derrick as he watched Dan speeding out of the forest.

They chased him for a few minutes until he reached rocky terrain, which slowed him fast enough for them to catch up. But he was so fast; he was still able to avoid everything they fired.

"Hahaha," Derrick laughed as he saw what was ahead.

Dan kept running. Then he also witnessed what lay before him, a steep, rocky cliff which stretched out as far as his eyes could see in the moonlit darkness. He realized he now had no hope but he ran up and attempted to climb anyway.

"Now!’ shouted both Derrick and Mantuss at the same time to the slig.

The slig squeezed a trigger and charged the laser cannon.

Dan heard the whir of it and turned around to see what it was. In shock he fell from the three meters he had climbed. Just as it fired, he jumped back and the laser shot past his ponytail and smashed in to the cliff. It crumbled and formed and formed a path upwards, perfect for passing over.

Dan took off again.

Inside the ship, all was quiet except for the low beeping of the computer. Everyone was staring at the weapon controlling slig.

"What?" he questioned.

"You freakin’ idiot! We had him!" yelled Derrick.

"He was trapped for cryin’ out loud!" Mantuss joined in.

"Anybody could have missed, he moved," pleaded the slig.

"Oh you just wait until we get back," threatened Mantuss.

Pilot Derrick sighed, "It’s no use now, he’s well gone, and we’re running low on fuel. We’re going back."

He turned the ship around and they returned to the new Vykker’s Labs.
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Well that's it. Please tell me you're thoughts.
I know it was kinda sci-fi but the rest won't be like that, I've just always wanted to do it.

Coming soon: Nature and it's civilisation...