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Ok, I’m gonna write this story and, I’m just gonna write the introduction first so you can all tell me what you think. It’s basically about what happened before the Oddworld computer games and before Abe. Hundreds of years before when mudokons where still worshipping scrabs and paramites, and before sligs had even heard of legs. Now I know you’re probably getting bored now so I’ll just get on with the story.

Many years ago, before Abe, Oddworld was at peace. Most creatures had there own continents, some shared. Sligs, in there land of Sligos where helped get over there physical disability by there loyal slogs. Vykkers, who had already discovered the arts of physical and genetic experiments, did all there work on the only other creatures they knew - interns. Their screams of pain kept every one out of Vykos. Gabbits, though they had their own home of Gatos, they followed the rivers wherever they led, making them the most intelligent species to see more than 2 continents (in theory). Scrabs and paramites had once had there own continents but as the mudokons discovered them, the three continents, Mudos, Scros and Pamos, joined to become one. Many fuzzles, ratz and 3 or 4 almighty raisins appeared from a continent called Argos which is next to Gatos. The fuzzles settled in Gatos while the ratz went everywhere and the raisins moved to the now very large Mudos. Finally, the glukkons, there continent of glucose neighbouring Sligos and Mudos, laboured for 7 years to build a 7 inch wide, concrete wall round there land. They where the only creatures tall enough to look over, and they were slowly devoured by jealousy of the mudokons gigantic home.
Over all this watched great and powerful creatures. They could have prevented what happened but they were ordered by their master, Odd himself, not to interfere. And so, when a young weak slig found a chance to be better than his brothers, a group of vykkers found something new to experiment on, and the glukkons saw a chance to get back at the mudokons, Oddworld was changed forever…

What do ya think? It might get better, but the style will certainly change in chapter 1. It sounds a bit like something off Lord of the Rings doesn’t it? Well, send your replies and I’ll try to improve it.