Umm, ya'll see that I'm a rookie, so I'll be needing some advices on the way. Hope you are willing to help me
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Anyhoo, my char.
Name: Diesel
Side: Good
Friends:None yet. Befriends easily.
Race: Just a common BigBro
Family: The Slig Queen
Bio: Born from Skillya and trained as a killer. But since he's always been a rebel, he disobeyed rules and as for punishment, he was given to the vykkers as a test subject. While in custody at the Vykker's Lab, he's seen many horrible things done to all those poor creatures that the vykkers have captured. Those sights warmed his heart towards the native and wildlife creatures of Oddworld and fuelled his anger towards the industrials. He managed to steal a pair of rusted pants and escape from the lab. Diesel is slightly deformed and he has razor-sharp bones sticking out of his torso, because of those experiments done to him.
WORST ENEMIES: Industrials and the vykkers
Crush: Ahh, well, he actually hasn't found the right one yet... Only time will tell.
Is that good?