Jacob.........I'm impressed. Seeing my name as a character was cool too
. That story itself, has a very good plot. You're discriptions are excellent. I can see the charaters and settings with ease. I must say this is a good story for the mature readers. I think everyone in general will enjoy this Fan Fic. I will grade you're Fan Fic "Assassins..." as Amazing. Keep up you're great work Jacob.
-Kai