This is a well written story. You indeed should be part of Al's compitation he is working on. There are a lot of members including myself in it. It goes to show you there are still people including myself who still use the Fan Cornor for it's general purpose. Thats what makes this place fun. So keep up the good work and I hope to see more from ya. Did you consider a third ending? Like the games Great, good, and bad and maybe even a forth ending black. Ya know?
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