awww.....
Re-reading this story brings back a lot of memories, I might even start crying again. *sniff* 
I like the way you re-wrote some parts Kai. 
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No, I'm not feeling violent, I'm feeling creative with weapons.
My goal in life it to hurt you, severely, come here.
If you love something turn it loose. If it doesn't come back, hunt it down and kill it.
I am a Yaoist. If you have a problem with this, tell someone else.
Author of "Quest for the Can Opener" And several other fics. See them at Fanfiction.net!
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