Some stuff...
Please don't double post, thebomb372.
Why would there be a can opener in the bag? That would be too easy.
Anyway, for those who are interested, Abe and Munch are not actually in a city, they just think that because they haven't seen that many different creatures in the same place. It's more like a small town.
Also, I would appreciate some creative feedback from people who are reading this, if you would like to, send me a PM, answering these few basic questions, and any other things you might like to include.
1/ What do you like about the story?
2/ What do you think needs improving?
3/ What would you like to see happening later?
I'd be very pleased if just a few of you would take the time to answer this, thanks.
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If you love something turn it loose. If it doesn't come back, hunt it down and kill it.
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Author of "Quest for the Can Opener" And several other fics. See them at Fanfiction.net!
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