[TheKhanzumer]

Here is the seventh chapter of The Marching Mudokons. This will probably be a shorty because I'm anxious to get on with the story. Seven chapters seems way to long to introduce characters. I wonder how long it'll take all of them to meet? And then after they meet go on an adventure? This is going to take a lot of writting. I shiver at the thought.

Btw, could anyone (everyone?) please give me a thoughtful PM answering these questions? Thanks.

1) What do you like about my writting?
2) What don't you like about my writting?
3) Who is your favorite character and why?
4) What would you like to happen to this character?
5) Do you have any other suggestions, ideas or requests?


Part One:

Nathan hovered about two feet above the ground. He sat cross legged in the blue walled cavern and let his mind wander. Quite literally.

The essence of his soul flew across oddworld, at a speed no living creature could match. One second he was in the Spooceshrub Forest, the next he was wandering the vaults of Necrum. Now he was flying over the trees of Paramonia and circling the ruins of RuptureFarms . To the wandering eye his spirit would look like no more than a ball of light, vanishing before the viewer could get a good look. But the spirit Nathan could see whatever it passed. And it recognized something crawling out of the wreckage.

His eyes snapped open and his spirit rushed back towards his body, as fast as it could. It couldn’t have been him! It was impossible. Molluck had been killed when Abe destroyed RuptureFarms 1029. If he had somehow survived that would certainly mean trouble.

Nathan shook it out of his mind. He had more pressing issues to worry about.