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08-09-2002, 07:45 PM
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: Apr 2001
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PROLOUGE
The mistress ran through the night. Her bare feet made rhythmic sounds as they hit the ground. She was certain that she heard someone call her name behind her. She ignored it as much as she could, they had nothing to do with this. It was her fight this time. She had to be careful, which mad it impossible for her to do her old tricks. Now she regrets that she didn’t leave it where it was, but it belonged to her. She could not allow him to get her or her belonging. Never! She was filled of the sure feeling and kept running. She didn’t hear him anymore and slowed down. After a while she stopped completely to catch her breath. She looked on the thing she held. She smiled.
“No one will ever get you, Æche’kca Tecora…” she whispered and didn’t notice the figure coming out of the shadow.
“Hello there…” he said. She saw him and drew her sword. He did the same.
“I see you have one of those too. Expensive huh? How many hours did you give for it?”
“Go away, I’m not afraid of you.”
“I will, right after you give me that you have.”
“Since when did you become a low thief who steals from ladies?” she said and attacked the one in front of her. He easily protected himself and pushed her back.
“You’ve weakened since our last meeting.” He said and with a cry he attacked her. She slipped away and made an attempt to stab him in the back. He rolled away and tried to kick her. The fight continued. Suddenly a shadow came out through the darkness, quickly grabbed the thing she held and ran away. The mistress was caught by surprise.
“Hey! No! Come back!” The mistress screamed. She was just about to follow him when she realized she didn’t know where he’d run.
“Watch your back, darling!”
The life of the mistress quickly ended.

“Now what is this…?” the hungry thief said and carefully unwrapped the thing from the sheets. Inside he saw a small crying child.
“Uh-oh…” he said, wrapped the sheets back on and looked around. Someone… someone… He saw someone, rather young, female, dressed funny…
Ah, she’ll do… he thought, quickly walked away to her and pushed the child in her arms.
“You have to help this child! I took it away from a murderer!”
The mudokon looked at him, surprised.
“If you excuse me, I have to run away…” he said and ran. The mudokon looked on the child and smiled.

Well, what do you think? Bad? Good? Complicated? Crap?

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