This reminds me of a wicked daydream I had once
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Ahem, anyway... Could you please do some space between the lines? Like:
"Blahblahblah?" Guy #1 said. Guy #2 nodded.
"Blahblahblahblahehehblah" he replied.
Sort of like that. It's really good right now, write more! Perhaps it will end like my daydream too... I strongly doubt that but if it do then... hm...