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Originally posted by Gluk Schmuck
At least she made some evidence up this time unlike when she usually tried to pass the Bible off as evidence. Try and be more supportive when she's learning about evidence...
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You're right, you're right. I'll try and keep my criticism constructive...
I'm sorry, Quo, it was a very good attempt, and I shouldn't have been so harsh - you almost had me fooled. If you're looking for tips, I think in future you need to work on believability - your characters just don't quite ring true...