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Chapter1

"Oh crap!" Shouted Abe as he ran from a group of Sligs. A nice walk by the river turned into disaster when they were spotted by some Sligs from a near by factory. Abe ran on the river bank as fast as his legs could take him, while Munch swam like hell through the water. Then Abe saw the one thing he was hoping not to see. A waterfall. "What are we going to do?!" Asked Abe. "We're gonna have to jump!" Shouted Munch. "What are you nuts! There's..... Sea-Rex's and Fleechs in there!" He yelled. "Then make a choice, get shot by Sligs, or get eaten by Sea-Rex's!" "I think I'll choose the Sea-Rex." He said. They came to the edge of the waterfall. Abe hesitated, but Munch jumped up, grabbed his paw, and jumped off the waterfall.

Is it good?

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