As a little suggestion or two, I think the thighs on the last pic are rather big in comparison to the torso, and the ears too close to the eyes - after all, the external bit isn't the entire structure, the ear goes in a long way into the head, as does the eye. The left arm is a bit stiff as well, perhaps... hmm, maybe if you tried a pose rather than just a static image?
*thinks about the fencing lessons she's seen up Uni* Drop the shoulder of the arm holding the weapon, lean the torso slightly forwards, and put the other arm out for balance. I think that's how it works... Pf. *shrugs* I hate forshortening too.
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