I have 3 suggestions...
1. Space your sentences, er, commas. Change like "oddworld,mudos,rupture farms" to oddworld, mudos, rupture farms" It helps. Same goes with periods, etc...
2. Try putting a line inbetween your -*random text* It makes it look better.
3. Capitalize, please.
Well, go ahead and keep writing. its just really,really hard to read when everything,is like,not looking right,like i mean abe really,really deserves more respect when you mention like,his birth.hehehe
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