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07-04-2002, 05:21 AM
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Thanks Kaimana! This chapter might not be as good after the Shrykull inccident.

Chapter14estruction

It was like a nightmare come true. Why did I want to go back?! How was I gonna tell the boss without getting killed?! I felt like a kid going back to school after summer vacation. Sad, scared, and pretty pissed off! I trudged back to my bed for probably the last time. Before I could walk all the way back though, I saw Abe with a whole bunch of other Mudokons, including Jackie, running like crazy like the place was about to blow up! "Hey guys whats*BOOM *........up." I said. The whole place blew up right before my eyes. "Sean! Where the hell did you go!" Yelled Jackie. "To some place called Sin City." I said. "You went WHERE?!!?"She screeched. "Sin City. It's some place after the 1st layer of hell." I replied. "You couldn't have! That place sunk under the ocean about 16,000 years ago!!!!" She shouted."No it didn't! See, I even have proof!" I showed her a picture of me and Mike standing at the welcome to Sin City sign. "Oh..... my...... Odd........" She said. "What?! If you're so sure this place is gone then I'll go show you!" A few days later after walking through the 1st layer of hell we got to a big ocean where Sin City was. "See! Told you it wasn't there!" She said triumphantly. " But then how did I get this picture?" I asked. "Well I think the whole thing was just a big mirage, or you really got stoned and high." Said Abe. "But then why did Jackie tell em to go to the Salty Slog?" I asked. "It was a joke you f***ing idiot! I didn't think you would really be dumb enough to actually go there!" She yelled. Then out of nowhere a Slig just popped out and winked at me. "Hey did you see that?" I asked. "Se what?" "That Slig." "What Slig?" "Oh screw it allready!!" I shouted. "Hi guys!" Said someone from behind me. "Ahhhh! A Slig!" Shouted Jackie and ran. "Hey wait it's just Mike!" I said. "You know this guy?" Asked Abe. "Yah, he's the guy who showed me around Sin City!" I replied. "Hey why are you guys in the middle of traffic?" He asked. "Huh?" Suddenly I got hit hard with something and flew across the ground. I realized that the ocean was the mirage, not the city, and I just got hit by a taxi. Mike threw a bucket of water on my head saw the city around me. "Wow! I thought this place sunk under the ocean 16,000 years ago!" Said Abe. "Thats what the Glukkons want you to think! Welcome ta Sin City, how the hell are ya doin?!"

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