Hi! this is my first time but I think I know what to do.
Zap watched a Mudokon hut being surrounded by Sligs as he led the rest of his tribe to a new campground. He was of the Cribble species, they were reptilian, walked erect, and had long blades coming out of their elbows, knees, and tails used to scare off stupid Sligs, their only predators. He felt bad just passing by the scene, he felt like he should help the poor creature, but it was strict tribal rules that he did not make contact with other species. They had past many scenes like this before without a second thought but there was something about this one that made him want to just jump out and kill them all. It was getting late so he had an excuse to make camp and rest for the night. " Unpack your things. We will rest here tonight." He said in a deep voice. He was going to follow the Sligs after everyone was asleep. It didn't matter if the Sligs were 5 miles away, Cribbles had great sences of smell, he could track them down, and free that poor thing, maybe he could even follow them to where their secret hideout was. They had been trying to find it for ages, because they had been raiding the tribes and taking the younger ones, brainwashing them, and giving them guns and putting them on patrol just like Sligs. That was exactly how the Sligs got how they were. Oddworld was changing, unfourtionatley for the worst.
Did it suck? Did I do it right? Please tell me!
Oddling l:c l
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