Does it seem rushed? Probably because it is, but it isn't your fault. I make it up as I go along and don't pretype anything. This is basically the rough draft. I promise that when I finish I will edit and revise this story. When it is all fixed up I will probably have someone put it on their website. It will be a lot better.
So Amos is next. I think there is a picture of him somewhere on the forums that someone drew for me. I'll have to dig it up.
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