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I'm not too sure about the middle panels, so in case it doesn't make sense, Sekto is putting two and two together and realizing that the voice on the phone matches the voice of the steef that attacked his dam.
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A sepia wash over those two panels would solve the problem, I think. Otherwise, the message is conveyed easily enough.
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Also, first time trying out Stranger's "growly" speech bubbles in the actual comic. Should I keep that look?
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Keep them. Absolutely. Oddey said it best: They're reminiscent of Sekto himself.
I think you should definitely consider building a digital portfolio for yourself, Fennec. You have some great stuff, and you deserve your own corner of the internet to host them.
Are you considering an artistic career?