You're a very fluent writer. Your descriptions do a crack job at painting a picture of Ammara's surroundings and fleshing out the features and mannerism of characters he sees and interacts with( like with Groan). I also enjoyed the average mudokon citizen point of view and how they are experiencing the effects of Abe's actions.
I'm glad I causually clicked this, nice 
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[FONT="Verdana"]I live in a desert and I drink brew, guess that means that I'm a mud too
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