it's been a long, long time since i've seen any fanfiction here. this makes a nice change. i really enjoyed reading that, you have a flair for writing. it's interesting to see the effects Abe's actions have on the citizens of Oddworld, i'm intrigued as to how Ammaras is going to get along now that his kin have been tarred with the same brush as Abe.
good going, man. i look forward to more.
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