@Xor
I like Laulek's concept, though a few things might need to be dialed back to keep him from being too OP/canon-breaking:
- I don't mind him having more of a spiritual connection than other glukkons, since as far as I know (and someone please correct me if I'm wrong) it is possible to be born a prodigy, like Abe. However, he probably shouldn't have very much control over it given his youth and the fact that glukkons have been spiritually disconnected for generations. Maybe add a bit mentioning that his powers are often uncontrollable or uncooperative, possibly based on his emotional state? Something along those lines.
- What exactly do his aura-tendrils do to living things? Is it like a physical blow, or some sort of life-draining, or what? How far can he extend them?
- This is mostly just nitpicking so you don't have to change this if you don't want to, but since glukkons haven't had working legs for ages, maybe his aren't fully functional? I'm imagining that he could still stand and shuffle on them, but he'd probably still need to use his arms for any kind of quick movement.
@J
Looks good, accepted.