This art is pretty good! I found the criticisms put forwards by Slog Bait and Vyrien to be particularly helpful for my own work. I hadn't ever heard the term "chicken scratching" but it's definitely an artistic flaw of mine. It's great to see your art improve from picture to picture, Abe in the latter comic looks much more "mudokon" than the mudokons you'd drawn previously, keep up the good work!
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