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I've started posting the older comics on Wednesdays and Fridays (I'm late on the Friday one. It's going up today,) and reworking ones that didn't quite work the way that they were. Here is the second comic, reworked to make it easier to understand what's going on in it.

Edit: It won't allow me to post the second page because I already posted that page in this thread. That one didn't change at all. Only the first page did.