Ok...at 1st i was thinking:
"They're young. It might be a good story, you never know."
I read the first part...and was vaguely amused. However this part:
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Fritters begian picking his a** untill it bled "ah F***! now my a** is bleeding!SH**!!!"
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Is...IMMENSLY disturbing aswell as DISGUSTING!! It looks to me you are just trying to be 'Rebellious' by putting the word 'A-S-S' and the word 'F**K' in your sentences. Also, trying to be funny with toilet humour and trying to be gross...I.E. The Fleech guts thing. Also...how old are you, and do you have many friends at skool?