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Chapter 16:
Adel and crew were heading towards Scrabania, for their quest to find Sam the mudokon queen.
Adel suddenly clutched her head.
"Adel........."
"What was that???" said Adel oddly.
"Adel?" said the Tomhawker.
"I thought I heard a voice." Adel looked around strangley.
"Adel........."
Adel froze.
"She's back....."
Ward ran other to Adel, and put his paw on Adel's shoulder.
"Princess??"
Adel fell to the rocky ground, her head hanging in fear.
"She can't be here."
"Oh I can........."
Suddenly smoke appeared and a dark figure was summoned among the smoke, she stepped out weakly and feebly.
"Mab.........The Sorceress is back???" said Adel.
The other whipped out their weapons while she was walking weakily towards them.
"Wait." said Adel. She had realized something.
"That Sorceress we defeated long ago is looking for someone to pass her powers on to. I'm surpised she lasted this long."
Sorceress Mab stared coldly.
"I can't die......yet!!"
"Princess! You can't take the power from her!!!" said Mack the Tomhawker.
Adel shook her head cooly.
"I don't intend to."
Beatrix looked at the Sorceress oddly.
"I'LL TAKE IT!!" Beatrix walked to the Sorceress.
The others looked at Beatrix stunned.
"Beatrix???"
Beatrix turned.
"I don't want you guys to take her powers. It's not safe for you guys."
Adel rose up slowly.
"You're 13 Beatrix!!"
"So??" snapped Beatrix.
"It's a big step........" said Adel.
"I know. But it's best you don't become a Sorceress,Adel. It's not right." explained Beatrix.
Beatrix nodded at Mab.
Mab exclaimed: "I can't die......I must achieve my goal......"
Mab rose her attached wings and rose her hands extracting all her powers to Beatrix, then she fell on her knees and disapearred for good.
Beatrix fell frightened by the change she'd made.
Everyone ran to Beatrix.
More Coming Soon............
