I'm a tiny bit on the fence with Devine being a Mudokon, now that you bring it up. On the one hand, having seen comparatively little of Mudokons in battle, it seems a tiny bit incongruous to have one of them now have an extremely honed fighting style that would kick everyone's ass. But on the other hand again, there were warrior Mudokons, so why not go ahead and give a little more power to them? And Devine's plight is sort of in-line with Abe and the other Mudokons and he's easily distinguishable from Abe, what with the 6 or 8 arms thing, so it would seem sort of superfluous if he was anything else.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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