[Job McYossie]

I can't believe I made it through all of that. Okay, so first off, I doubt that anyone is going to want to a production of a full game. Even if they did though, it would take years to develop the complexity of the mechanics you want. I don't know about other people, but a few years of production seems like a large donation of time to me. Secondly, this story really doesn't seem like t needs to be Oddworld related. You could easily change all the Oddworld elements to alternate earth and the story would hold a lot better. I mean honestly, the story is almost good. The Oddworld tie just seems so wrong though that it just sours the whole thing to me.

I'm all for helping people begin game design. I can give advice on what engine would be best for what kind of game you want, what colour scheme to use for particular moods, and basic music structure. If you want advice, feel free to PM me.

I hope you do well in creating your game, as well as hopefully reworking the story.