It looks fantastic!
My one piece of criticism, and I don't really like giving it, is in the background of Monsaic lines, somehow the fog doesn't seem right. It seems sort of out of place, but then again, doing an entire solid wall around all of it would probably look strange too, so maybe it's for the better. Either way, I do like the way you've again managed to transfer 2D to 3D.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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