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04-03-2002, 05:05 PM
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(Note: This Chapter may a bit short because I wanted to create supense *grins* So there.)

Chapter 11:
Blood flowed out like the rivers,Shirley went pale,she was in so much pain. Zip grinned manically at her. "So you die." He said heartlessly. As he finished speaking he removed his spear from her wound. Shirley gasped horrfied, she was scared.
She just stood weakly before collasping into a fall.
She landed in her pool of blood.
She manged a weak stirr and a cough.
"It's over." said Zip coldy.
Shirley lay gracfully.
She had met her fate.....death.
"I'm dying, you will never know the.....key...to......the.....fate.....of....Oddworld......
." spoke Shirley before shutting her eyes and trying hard to keep alive.
"I don't care..."said Zip stoic.
"When you will never learn." said Shirley grinning weakliy.
She shut her eyes peacefully.
"Good." Zip said eviliy. "She's dead finally."
He grabbed Shirley's body, grinning manically.

He walked to a ledge and below was The Great Salt Lake.
He sighed eviliy, weakiliy laughing.
Without motive, he let go of Shirley's body letting it drop.
Shirley fell gracefully, her eyes peacefully shut as she fell into the salt water. The salt water creatures surrounded her body.

Zip grinned guitily and looked at the surroundings.
Winter had fell at the salt lake. Strangley enough the lake hadn't frozen..........

More Coming soon.................
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