There was a lot of this that I actually really like, but a lot of the stuff Splat said is true. Though, I will say the furnace minecart thing is something I haven't seen before, and that was rather neat. The set design was, in my opinion, not terribly impressive for the most part, but I can see that you definitely tried very hard with it. All in all, I'd say you've done very well as a solo project, but there's definitely some room where it could be improved in pretty big ways.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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